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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:35 pm
Confessions
I wish my like was different,
Then i wouldn't be depressed,
But there's something,
I really must confess.
I hate my parents,
And everything to do with them,
Terror and Misery,
On the slightest whim.
They never understand,
Why i always disobey,
The fact that they,
Created me to be this way.
Nothing I do is good enough,
Nothing i do is right,
Sometimes i just wish,
That i could end my life.
It sucks big time,
That they dont love me,
The way i am....
Its what they do to me.
Yeah.. that was kinda fun to re-read and type on here.. lol
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:40 pm
You
I wish you were here,
Right by my sidem
Never let me go,
Say no "Good-bye."
You're in another world,
Off by yourself,
Playing through the cards,
that life has delt.
My love for you is growing,
Growing stronger everyday,
I'm dropping little hints,
In everything i say.
Can't you feel it?
The connection between us?
If i told you the truth,
There'd be nothing but fuss.
I like to write,
Expressing my love,
Always being there,
Watching from above.
Yep. i wrote that one for this guy i like... yeah.. so, yeah.. lol
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:45 pm
Fate
We hunker down,
To find true love,
Just like a cage,
That captures the dove.
We are only humans,
We all make mistakes,
But we all get mad,
When we find out it's fate.
Our destiny is set,
Because of what we've done,
It's written in stone,
With our very own blood.
You cannot erase,
The things you have done,
You'll be sucked into time,
And melted by the sun.
Yeah!! i started randomly writing that on one of my folders, and i ran out of room, so i started writing it on paper, and i finished it!!! lol im weird.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:52 pm
These are just some 4 line poems that i came up with, that i kinda like, cause they could be quotes, but they're not, and i made them up all on my own!!! lol
1)
Love is always there,
Right by your side,
Never forget,
And it won't say "Good-bye."
2)
Sometimes i wish,
That i could die,
At other times i wish,
That i could fly.
3)
Another time,
Another place,
Another wish,
Another face.
4)
For life,
We live,
For love,
We. die.
5)
On a whim,
We kill,
On a thought,
We seek revenge.
6)
Hatred is fed,
By the person dishing,
But the person recieving,
Is only wishing.
7)Love is forever,
Friends are for always,
But the person you like,
Doesn't always stay.
ok. thats it so far.. ttyl
NaruxHina.
I hope you all like them! the few that will read anyway..
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:55 pm
Hey Peji!!!! XD Thought I'd say hi and wish you the best of luck rebuilding your account. It sucks that you were hacked, but I hope you have all the luck in the world in recovering your stuff! XD Anywho, keep up your poetry writing... I don't know if I've ever said this before, but I'm very impressed with your style. It's very... "indy" XD. But yes, best wishes!
Dante
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:00 pm
Oh, I almost forgot. If you have any desire to do so... I don't blame you if you don't, nobody else does XD, you can check out my thread... please... and tell me what you think. About 99.999% of my stuff is in the first post, but there are a few stragglers in the last three or four pages... so, if you want, please stop by... I'm DYING for people to actually READ my stuff....... XD anywho, just thought I'd ask.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:39 am
Dante Deus Hey Peji!!!! XD Thought I'd say hi and wish you the best of luck rebuilding your account. It sucks that you were hacked, but I hope you have all the luck in the world in recovering your stuff! XD Anywho, keep up your poetry writing... I don't know if I've ever said this before, but I'm very impressed with your style. It's very... "indy" XD. But yes, best wishes! Dante Thanks.. i posted them in a public thread too and this is what i got: Jesus Christ. They just get worse and worse. Have you looked at the "Art of Poetry" sticky? You really need to. Your poetry isn't even poetry, right now--it's just a mashing of cliches and boring narratives. If you keep this up, you're going to get nowhere. You need some imagery, metaphor--you need some freshness and creativity. This stuff is horrible. I am in no way kidding. Im kinda mad, cause i mean, like, yeah, thanks for giving the advice, but he didnt have to be so ignorant about it... i mean, like do you think that they were that bad? please reply.. cause that really hurt, cause no one ever said that they were that bad before, andlike the ones at the begining were when i first started writing Poetry.. so they're wrse than the ones towards the end.. anyway, ill read your poems. smile ) NaruxHina/Peji.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:52 am
i love your poems, but you should try using more literary devices.
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:42 am
I wrote a new poem last night.
So, here it is:
Emotions
If something tragic were to happen,
Like someone dying,
Or my house burning down,
I'd have a reason to cry.
I'd have a reason to not be myself,
A reason to let my emotinos rule,
A reason to not care,
A reason to cry.
No one understands,
Not even I,
I dont' want to talk about it,
So don't ask.
I want a reason to act different,
To be able to cry,
And not be made fun of,
I want a reason to want to die.
To me, ddying is nothing,
A thing that happens,
That repeats the process,
A rebirthment amoung the living.
I'm sitting in the bathroom,
The darkness engulfing me,
The only light cimung from the tiny window,
And the small light to write with.
I'm thinking of what I could do,
Afraid to say it,
Let alone do it,
I wonder how others can bear it.
It's a horrible feeling,
Really, if only you knew,
There's one other person who does,
But im not telling who.
He's been through a lot,
More than me,
But he understands,
And I'm glad he does.
I need a friend right now,
A friend to stop me from hurting,
To help me bear the pain,
Along with their own.
What do you think? i didnt want to make that one rhyme, and idk why.. it just kinda came out last night.. i was seriously in the bathroom though.. lol my mom was yelling at me, and the bathroom was my savior.. lol
NaruxHina.
I GET TO GO TO THE ZOO TODAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry
ttyl
NH.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 1:23 pm
I know how it is
and Iknow how it feels
but real girls aren't perfect
and perfect girls aren't real.
I know what it like
when they point, laugh, and stare
while they beat their long eyelashes
and flip their long hair.
They wear big hoop earings
they dress in all pink
and when you see them
you believe that you stink.
They say that your ugly
and they say that your fat
but this is reality
and your better than that.
Try to define beauty,sexy, or hot
because if you can't
how do you know that your not?
You look in your closet and ask
"How much will it take?"
so I can be perfect
so I can be fake.
You believe that their perfect
but that is untrue
why want to be them
when you were meant to be you?
You don't have to be pretty
to have appeal
because they know that thier jealous
because you are for real.
They think that their Barbie
and trust me their not
but they think their so sexy
and they think their so hot
They chose to be ugly on the inside
and pretty on the out
when we have been told
"It's the inside that counts."
ButI know how it is
and Iknow how it feels
but real girls aren't perfect
and perfect girls aren't real.
This wasnt written by me,
But i really like it.
It was written by a girl named Kayla,
From my school.
Its so true.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 2:10 pm
Hey guys!
I know i havent written anything lately,
But i've been super busy this summer.
Once school starts again,
Ill have more free time at school,
Where i dont have stuff like the T.V. or Computer to distract me,
That i can write more for you guys.
I hope you understand.
Im actually in the process of writing one atm.
I think i just inspired myself for another.
Well,
Better get busy!
NaruxHina.
<333.
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