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CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:36 pm


Heh... This story actually started from a dream. Or a fragment of a dream. It was a whole lot of random crap, but in it there was this one scene of a bat-man-demon-thing picking up the 'friend' (she wasn't a nice person) of a girl who in my dream wasn't me but was closest to me, like the main character in a story, and dropping her and catching her again. Then there were these three girls who were strangers to the one girl and her friends. It was weird. They were sitting sideways on a stick, like a broomstick, but they were in normal clothes and the stick was attached to the building, but from the point of view I was looking at them, they were probably supposed to be flying, and one was throwing scissors at the bat-thing... Then I put elements of other dreams in it. I think it's a very original story. While mulling it over in my mind, it went through a VERY Mary-Sue phase, but I'm hoping it's not so much anymore.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:05 pm


Haaah! You guys thought up to Situations One and Two were long, look at Three!

CrystalClairvoyance
Crew


Mr. Ska

Eloquent Kitten

PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:12 pm


Draconis)Wyrm
Haaah! You guys thought up to Situations One and Two were long, look at Three!
Omg! Thank you!... It's coming together really well! She doesn't sound like a Mary-Sue at all. I enjoy her character... reminds me of myself.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:00 pm


Thank-you? You thought this was just going to be a crap story outline? D:<

CrystalClairvoyance
Crew


CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 8:48 pm


Whooo. Still much to add to the outline. It all starts to happen much faster, now.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:39 am


Draconis)Wyrm
Thank-you? You thought this was just going to be a crap story outline? D:<
x___x I said that? Well, I didn't mean to...

I was thanking you for it being to short... xD

Mr. Ska

Eloquent Kitten


CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 1:46 pm


What? It's short?

If I'm easily confused today, it's 'cause I just got back from a six-hour (plus travel) bottle drive. Dogs are crazy!
PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:03 pm


Draconis)Wyrm
What? It's short?

If I'm easily confused today, it's 'cause I just got back from a six-hour (plus travel) bottle drive. Dogs are crazy!
Ohmigosh...x__x It was still good though...

Why did I say short.

Mr. Ska

Eloquent Kitten


CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:07 pm


I'm confused about this phrase: "I was thanking you for it being to short... xD"

It may be the improper use of "to" in there that's screwing me up.
*Thinks about what "screwing me up" could mean.* Bleh, fried brains.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:14 pm


x___x I think I was half way sleep because I seriously don't know why I typed that... neutral Half Sleep + Drew Depression = ******** he say?

Mr. Ska

Eloquent Kitten


CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:59 pm


What you saaaay? (Or "What he saaaay," depending on which one you prefer...)
PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:54 pm


D: That bat-monster guy is sneaking into my other dreams. Just this morning I was dreaming of some pipe-world inhabited by rat-people, and he was like this spider mutant thing that could turn into a giant Goth from Silverwing. I guess that's good because I get more insight into his character... But he's such a jerk! He was terrorizing the rat-people and when I went to talk to him I asked if he was eating one and he spat a bone at my forehead! sweatdrop

CrystalClairvoyance
Crew


CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:19 pm


D: No one's posting anymore?
PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 3:19 pm


Draconis)Wyrm
D: That bat-monster guy is sneaking into my other dreams. Just this morning I was dreaming of some pipe-world inhabited by rat-people, and he was like this spider mutant thing that could turn into a giant Goth from Silverwing. I guess that's good because I get more insight into his character... But he's such a jerk! He was terrorizing the rat-people and when I went to talk to him I asked if he was eating one and he spat a bone at my forehead! sweatdrop
Ummm! Wtf, Indeed to the max. Well, Hopeful this gets you some great ideas.... If not crazy WTF ideas.

Mr. Ska

Eloquent Kitten


CrystalClairvoyance
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 7:20 pm


Well, the dream didn't mean anything, except that the monster is a jerk, so I can use that dream and turn it into Beth's dream. So that it's not all vague crap anymore.
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