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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 10:27 am
A book of epic proportions. A book that will set forth the standards at which all life should apply. It will have all that is great in it. His book will be perfect...sort of.
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 2:27 pm
your definition of perfect and mine are two totally different things buddy let me tell ya (not really) I look forward to seeing it out in stores....lol
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 2:33 pm
Haha, wow... sweatdrop Never really thought about it as that good... I actually think it sucks... and most people who don't like action books will... but hey, what can I say? Gotta do SOMETHING to occupy my mind... Actually Christophe... I plan on starting up again like... this weekend maybe... give me your e-mail and I'll send it to you as I complete it... and don't worry about the names... they'll all change... I'm just using them to remind me who's who.
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 10:41 am
Dante Deus Haha, wow... sweatdrop Never really thought about it as that good... I actually think it sucks... and most people who don't like action books will... but hey, what can I say? Gotta do SOMETHING to occupy my mind... Actually Christophe... I plan on starting up again like... this weekend maybe... give me your e-mail and I'll send it to you as I complete it... and don't worry about the names... they'll all change... I'm just using them to remind me who's who. I know it won't be that great. Hyperbole is my forte. Anywho, wotan9worlds@yahoo.com That would be it. I don't really care who emails me, just please don't send spam....I would just have to kill you.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 3:42 pm
twisted hehehehe I could use that email ya know almost anyone could...GODDAMNIT!!!! Patch is trying to lay on the keyboard againa;gfka.
err-sorry I meant again...everytime I go to pick her up she turns into a limp noddle she's such a two year old! lol
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 9:18 pm
Hahaha...limp noodle. Patch is awesome. Anyways.... *finished trolling the forums*
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 9:08 am
no she isn't! the fat lard keeps laying on my injured ankle!!! and it ******** hurts!
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 6:19 pm
Hello hello. I know I haven't been very active lately, for reasons that are my own. I have wrote a couple of things. I have been somewhat depressed lately, so please do forgive the morbid tone. I did write a ballad for my english 4 class, but I don't really like it.
I have no love to share,
No hand to hold of a lady fair.
Lonliness is my real traveling friend,
And Time tells me Lonliness is mine forever.
Death be not swift for me,
A one in misery.
I will put down the ballad in a different post sometime.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 11:54 am
wow...morbid but totally awesome!...ballads...very old and I would never attempt something as hard as that...kudos to you Kharne...
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 6:15 pm
willowbyrd wow...morbid but totally awesome!...ballads...very old and I would never attempt something as hard as that...kudos to you Kharne... The ballad was forced on me. We had to do one for Honors English 4. I might put it in here sometime, I just don't feel like it right now. Thank you for your compliments though. The ballad format we had to use was simple though --1st and 3rd lines have 4 stressed syllables. --2nd and 4th lines have 3 stressed syllables. --2nd and 4th lines rhyme. --We had to use dialog to move the story along. --We had to use a sad event to make the ballad(murder, dramatic sad event, etc.) --edit: We also had to use repetition of lines. I don't like working with structure though. I think it worked out ok. The title for it is "The Second Holocaust."
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:03 pm
One, I really like the poem you posted... only one problem... I don't know why... it just doesn't seem to flow... but I really like your wording. Secondly, I want to read this ballad... it's title has that Chris Worley feel.
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:07 pm
Dante Deus One, I really like the poem you posted... only one problem... I don't know why... it just doesn't seem to flow... but I really like your wording. Secondly, I want to read this ballad... it's title has that Chris Worley feel. It has no apparent flow, you are right about that. The only flow that I see is in its content. It is sorrow. Enough of that though. This ballad is funny in its irony really. I'll go ahead and post it in the entry after this one.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:15 pm
Here goes the ballad:
THE SECOND HOLOCAUST
The blood has ran into the ground,
Here a mother has said,
"I will never see her grow up,
She was shot in the head."
The blood has ran into the ground,
And here comes the shouting,
"Can our nations not be at peace?
Why die at our outing?"
The blood has ran into the ground,
Israel has now announced,
"They attacked first so we fought back,"
Is that why they were pounced?
The blood has ran into the ground,
White phosphorous, the pain,
Lebanon has now said that it,
"Falls like a great fine rain."
The blood has ran into the ground,
A new holocaust now,
Chaos rules and death reaps his due.
A new injustice, how?
As I have told Dante, this was forced on me, and I was rushed to meet a crappy deadline. I had no real time for my usual technique, so do excuse it for being "eh" at best. Best thing to me about it is the irony in it.
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:59 pm
I like it a lot. Love the meaning behind it also. And ahh, yes. The irony.
For something forced and hurried, it's very good, Kharne.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 8:03 pm
You think so? Eh, I wish I had more time to let it set back and boil.
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