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 Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 7:25 pm
JetskiBabe Auradria Riddle-Power Aura walks inside the dorm smileing. "Hey girls check it out" Aura twirls aroud showing of the new cloths a grass skirt ribbins on her wrist and a vail. "its for holloween whatta think?" ((Maybe a shirt? lol... blaugh )) ((But that would not be fun))
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 1:31 pm
"zolah walked in to her new home, she had a long black hat and and a black coat. Terry was running around her barking and and waging his tail. Zolah smiled when she saw the dorms inside, she walked towards what who would be her bed, and put her bag on it. she looked around in the room to see if anyone where there. then she took her hat of, her ears itched. after that she unpacked her things while terry sniffed around in the room. after that she layed down on the bed and fell asleep"
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:00 pm
Aura looked up from her reading. Aura smiled at the girl "hi there" Aura said "how are you nice dog."
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:27 pm
"she looked at the girl while Terry runs towards the girl barking and begging for a tummy rubb"
oh.. sweatdrop
Hello... im new here smile
exchange student... Margarette Zolah, and this is Terry.
"zolah put her hat on her head again"
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:32 pm
Aura laughs as she pats the dogs belly. "nice to met you margarette you to Terry" Aura looks at Margarette "how rude of me My name is Auradria Riddle-power but my friends call me Aura. were are you from?"
((exchange student wise of corse smile ))
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:45 pm
"Zolah smiles and scrathes her head"
Im from sweden, north sweden smile
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:56 pm
Aura smiles "thats cool." Aura then hears purring from under her bed. "um...how does terry fill about cats?"
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:00 pm
"when the dogs hear the purring he slowly walks to the bed and looks at the cat"
Oh, he loves cats!
Back home he always tried to cuddle our kitten xd
they where so cute!
but if you excuse me, i shall go to bed... it was quite a hard trip here... sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:03 pm
sweatdrop "oh im sorry" Aura smiles at Terry. Then looks at Margarette "night then" Aura closes her book and walks out of the dorm and continued out of the commen room then further out of the castle.
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:13 pm
Just a little role playing tip (this is for Zolah): You might want to use the quotation marks around where your character is speaking.
When the dog heard the purring, he slowly walked to the bed and looked at the cat. Margarette looked up and said, "Oh, he loves cats! Back home he always tried to cuddle our kitten." She giggled a bit. "They looked so cute together..." She trailed off, a wistful look in her eyes. Then, seeming to snap back into reality, she said, "But if you'll excuse me, I think I'll go to bed. It was a very long trip, and I'm quite tired." She looked it too. Her hair was a bit mussed, and she was a bit pale, which showed the bags under her eyes. "Bye Aura," she said to her new friend, as she went up the stairs to the dorm.
So I added a bit of detail as you can see, but the more impotant part is the grammar. I believe that English isn't your first language though, so it's okay. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 1:31 am
JetskiBabe Just a little role playing tip (this is for Zolah): You might want to use the quotation marks around where your character is speaking. When the dog heard the purring, he slowly walked to the bed and looked at the cat. Margarette looked up and said, "Oh, he loves cats! Back home he always tried to cuddle our kitten." She giggled a bit. "They looked so cute together..." She trailed off, a wistful look in her eyes. Then, seeming to snap back into reality, she said, "But if you'll excuse me, I think I'll go to bed. It was a very long trip, and I'm quite tired." She looked it too. Her hair was a bit mussed, and she was a bit pale, which showed the bags under her eyes. "Bye Aura," she said to her new friend, as she went up the stairs to the dorm.So I added a bit of detail as you can see, but the more impotant part is the grammar. I believe that English isn't your first language though, so it's okay. 3nodding (thanks for the tip, and yeah. english isnt my first language. its swedish IRL)
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Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 4:15 pm
"while zolah was lying on her bed a owl came flying with a letter, Zolah read it and run away screaming"
Im going home! bye every one!
"terry rund after her, she dont even care about getting her packages"
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 6:11 am
"Well, Kale, let's see whats in store for us." Kaya looked down to the white wolf pup beside her as she pushed open the door. "Beautiful! I claim this bed!!!" Kaya had chosen a bed far away from the door. She tucked her things into the trunk in front of her bed, placed the netting up, and plopped Kale next to her pillow. "You behave now, I'm going to look around the castle, see where the grub is, and find my classes." Kaya looked around in her school bags and fished out a small piece of paper. "Here we go. Be good Kale!" With that, kaya raced out the door.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 9:23 am
Auroreya silently entered the dormitory. Without a word to anyone, or even a greeting, she stalked over to an empty bed, plopped herself on, and began reading a thick, leatherbound book.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:15 pm
Having finished her book, the girl decided to head down to the library and look for some on the Dark Arts.
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