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 Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 2:41 pm
Black shadows start to flow down Max's throat, causing Max to amke wierd choking noises as the shadows of the jiinchuriki fought back the curse. More spears impaled Exlongs arms and legs, and one into his shoulder. "I'm..gluk..gonna.*cough* make you...suffer.." Max said as Sara ran to his side and grabbed his arm. She looked at Exlong with hatred in her eyes.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:13 pm
The dark matter has reached Max's brain as it infiltrates it.
"Raidokai Release: T2 Forbidden Jutsu"
The dark matter surrounds Max's brain as Exlong gets sucked into Max's thoughts and mind going to wipe out Max's Interior Core where the Jinchuriki of Max's stays at.
"Heh, now that Max is under my curse mark once again, there is no reason for me to not take his Jincuriki under my arms."
Exlong takes out his back mounted blades as he gets ready to slay Max's Jinchuriki.
"But because of the Exterior dammage he has done to my body.... CURSE MARK: STING!"
Max's Exterior body starts to sting as pain and destruction is being brought to his body.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:15 pm
Max screams in pain and Sara starts to bang on Exlongs leg with tears in her eyes. "Stop it!! stop it!! please stop it!!!"
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:21 pm
Exlong's chakra starts to fill out the entire mind and he continues to search for the Jinchuriki.
"Im sorry Max... But If i let you feel no pain, you will just continue to get in my way. My main objective is to take your Jinchuriki into my own hands without the threat of you losing it."
Exlong then turns up the pain on Max and laughs in a blood curtle. He then continues to search.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:25 pm
Max stops and looks at Exlong with his teeth clenched. "You wan't it...? I'LL GIVE YOU IT!!!" A practical shadow explosion blasts from Max's body, breaking the liquid thats imprisoned him, and flying into the air. The shadow expanded into a collossus of shadowy figures. They came together and formed a giant dark creature with one tail, and the upper part of Max's body was outside of the Creature, with Sara standing next to him, gripping the shadowy fur. The creature wailed an ear shattering shreak, than looked down at Exlong with giant dark eyes.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:30 pm
"Exellent, so this is the first Jinchuriki made by my Nukenin Raishi 10th Jinchuriki."
Exlong laughs as he raises his hand. A dark aurora starts to come out of his body as if it was smoke and starts to form 5 tails and 2 long ears on Exlong's body. He then stretches as a dark howling voice comes out of Exlong's souled cage which is the Chakra Gage in everyone's body.
"SO... THIS IS THE ANGEL I'V MADE... ITS WEAKER THEN I THOUGHT..."
Exlong closes his eyes as he uses his own voice to talk.
"Dont get too cocky..."
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:37 pm
"SHUT UP AND FIGHT!!" Max yelled at Exlong angrily.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:25 pm
Exlong opens his eyes and smiles with his eyes. He points to Max's legs and says
"If you were paying attention, I already did!"
Max looks down as he see's that his legs are in black and whites as color is starting to drool down onto the ground. Exlong's curse mark was the cause of this. Exlong then runs as Max with the two long knifes in his hands. The Jichuriki part of Exlong then blows massive chief bombs at Max to steady movement.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:27 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:33 pm
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:35 pm
(nvm lets just say ur in incredible pain and cant move that much biggrin ) Shadows covered Max's legs and he dashed towards Exlong, not on his jinnchuriki. He stopped, and he started to walk towards exlong. He needed something from him...and he was going to take it.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:59 pm
Exlong's Izanagi sharingan activates a spce cointinuem as his body gets wiped away from the winds. All that is left is a lifeless body shell with the impaled injuries.
"(Gah... that took more chakra than I thought... atleast im safe inside this forest now...)"
Exlong sits down leaning on a tree and starts to heal himself.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:01 pm
The jiinchuriki see's Exlongs chakra and sends the image to Max. He appears 20 feet away from Exlong, and starts walking towards him.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:05 pm
"Moth...er...fu...cker"
Exlong pins some handsigns down as he transfers his chakra into Max's. He the unactivates Max's eyes by send massive amounts of chakra into only one small eye point which blinds him. Then Exlong's chakra comes out of Max's back and grabs onto a tree and pulling him back while Exlong gets up and finishes healing. He takes out 5 kunais and whips them at the sightless boy. He then whips 8 more at the helpless girl Sara.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:10 pm
Shadows catch the kunai's and shoot them back at Exlong faster than he had thrown them. A voice says in Max's head. "I shall be your sight..." Shadows cover Max's eyes, turning them into large, glowing purple sockets. Shadows break the grip of the tree and MAx starts to walk towards Exlong again.
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