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 Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:52 pm
Hey, I'm new here and my friends say my poetry is good...
Time passes
Like blood through the body
Or a simple airborne raven
Unevenly it runs
Like water through rapids
But pass it does
Even if life has come to an end
Or the Earth has frozen
And my agonized soul is not moved
I'm waiting, searching,
For just one thing
The touch that can save me
From this ageless abyss
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:31 pm
Your friends speak the truth. It is very smooth. Words are well chosen.
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High-functioning Werewolf
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 6:33 am
Thank you, I've got hundreds of notebooks full of poetry...
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 4:52 pm
I wish I had written mine down. I lost a lot of it from my old computer.
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High-functioning Werewolf
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:01 pm
I write during class...i have teachers read over my shoulder and gasp because they say it is good and disturbing(blood, death, emo, vampires) I get in trouble for writing,hehe*sweats*
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 5:59 pm
Yeah, it's always awkward when a teacher reads your work. You know they're thinking: GUIDANCE!!!!
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High-functioning Werewolf
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 9:51 am
Yeah, I wrote one about suicide...
Some call it stupidity
A one way ticket to hell
But in my eyes
They are wrong
I call it something else
I call it a way out
I ended up having a talk with my teacher because they read it over my shoulder. She actually thought I was going to kill myself. I'm not! I wrote it for poetic purposes only!
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:30 am
People always think that just because you wrote it, it is about you. I've written many poems about other people or just things in general. But yeah, nice to know it wasn't about you.
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High-functioning Werewolf
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 6:39 pm
I'm suffering writer's block
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:13 pm
Yeah, me too. I can't even get myself to put two words together and be satisfied.
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High-functioning Werewolf
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 4:26 pm
I'm better now. I wrote a poem for my boyfriend 4laugh but I need to find it first because I have a horrible headache and can't remember a thing sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:21 pm
Okay, nevermind, I found the poem! 3nodding
New Life
For so long I was empty
I suffered a non life
Without feelings and nothing
But agonized thoughts
But then you came
You completed me
And brought to me
The feelings I had never been able to feel
Dedicated to my beloved boyfriend, Vaughn heart
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 1:03 pm
Man its been awhile... both for me writing poetry and for me being on here now lets see if I can manage some level of poetic skill.
Ninjas are cool
and pirates are neat
so why squabble over,
who can be beat
ninja + pirate = heart
>.>
and thats the best I care to do right now so blah!
<.<
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:27 pm
Yeah, I'm having that trouble latetly too. I've just started writing again. It's not easy to pick it up after stopping. Good to see you.
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High-functioning Werewolf
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 6:37 pm
Rawr, I'm getting really angry...the counseler read one of my poems about emos and he called my mother(I hate her, she's mean) He hasn't left me alone since then, and I think he put it on my record.....
In this world
Things are not as they seem
Love, joy, happiness
It's all an illusion
So I slit my wrist
And focus on the pain
Because it is the only thing that is real
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