inMadness
Light!! x3
"Bow to me! Dish-slave!"
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razz I just edited in a few lines of description. I thought her 'change' read a bit jittery... Actually I still think it reads bad :/ but I cant seem to get it to flow better
sweatdrop Anyway, other than that I think I've got a good feel going for her character xD
A bit stereotypical, cheeky and absentmindedly 'flirty'
I like the idea of her doing something, but not knowing either the full meaning behind her actions, or that it could be potentially arousing.
Like that size changing sequence there, she wouldn't be embarrassed by what happened and her clothes puffing off, she'd be embarrassed by the theatrics of it all and how over the top it looks XD
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