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VampyrKitten
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:38 pm


*fishes through his DeviantArt* Maybe I can throw up a few of my poems too..
(And wow, that's just.. way too many. I only write when I need a vent or I'm really inspired, so I actually haven't done anything new in a month or two)


Should I?
(Written while listening to Stone Sour - 'Zzyzx Rd.')

I didn’t give the warnings
Who would ever guess?
Who would ever think that I
Would get in this mess?

As I sit and ponder on
What I’m going to do
A thought wanders through my mind
Simply- ‘Where are you?’

Were you thinking about me
When you went to sleep?
I hesitate. I’m yours, but
Am I yours to keep?

Should I think of what you want
Or go my own way?
Should I follow through with this?
Will you make me stay?

I slowly put the gun down
So before I go
Write your name on the bullet
This way people will know

That you would be the last thing
going through my head.
Then I pick the gun up
And paint the walls red



Down You Go
(A fun poem that got me sent to the guidance counselor. Twice.)

Move the blade
Part the skin
See the blood
From within
Bubble up
Trickle down
Drip, drip
To the ground

Grab your wrist
Change your mind
Come this far
Just to find
You don't want this
It's too late
Can't stop now
Filled with hate

Toward yourself
For doing this
For imagining
The eternal bliss
That isn't there
After life
Fading fast
Drop the knife

Past regrets
Things no more
Lives once lived
Hit the floor
Disappearing
Like the blood
Flowing from you
Like a flood

Try and try
To stop the flow
But you can't
And down you go



Meat Grinder

Isolation
I’m alone, but surrounded
Millions of people, but nobody to talk to
They’re all sheep.
A huge ******** flock, all mindless drones being led to the slaughterhouse
Me? I’m off to the side of the line, watching
And wondering just how they could be so ******** stupid
They must not know where they’re being led.
They must only be able to see the a** of the person in front of them.
But I know that’s not it
They know exactly where they’re going.
They just don’t care enough to do anything about it.
It’s too much effort to step out of line
Too hard to think for themselves
Much too hard.
Too ******** bad.
As I watch, I lose faith
Is this what we’ve become?
And what of those who aren’t in line?
Who’re leading these poor sheep to their doom?
What of the shepherds?
They care only about themselves-
How much meat they can get out of the little body
How quickly they can bleed them dry, and then move on to the next
I wonder what they plan to do once they run out of sheep?
Once they’ve killed the last one
I’m trying not to let that happen
I can’t do much now, but maybe eventually…
Maybe, if I find other wolves like myself…
We can find the other wolves
Hidden in sheep’s clothing
Waiting to be set free of the flock


Maybe I can save them.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:38 pm


Here's another one I like:

Caught By A Shadow
Darkness
Surrounding me like the ocean
And I remain lost
Until someone comes to find me
Clouds
Hovering above my head
And lightning
Crashes down as I fall to earth
Broken
Is what I've become on my landing
Bleeding like the falling rain
And somehow I'm still breathing
Safety
Was what I found in this world
When it was you
Who had saved me from dying


Amanda


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VampyrKitten
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:39 pm


Wow, strong emotion in that one.
Though, it seems to me like there should be more. I dunno.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:42 pm


Uncertainty

The words I write they make no sense
I'm living in the past not present tense
And I'm a liar and a hypocrite
But you're just as full of it
Try to deny that you're afraid to fall
So you're constantly stuck behind a wall
Learning nothing from you past mistakes
Wondering why your heart always breaks
Justification is in the answer
Results like a malignant form of cancer
Words I can't say to end your misery
Are last words are what they seem to be
Found out all about the things you need
But I'd rather sit and watch you bleed
Promises you told but never meant to keep
Will slowly kill you as you try to sleep
Breaking the cycle before I start to care
Releasing the holders of your nightmare

I like yours to VK. Dark, and very very catching.
I almost got expelled from school for one that I wrote. My guidance councelor confiscated my folder and never gave it back, so I was pretty pissed about that...

Imma try to do one just sitting here. I'll see what I can come up with...


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VampyrKitten
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:49 pm


Oooh.. I like Uncertainty, Phoenix. I may actually try to write something tonight if I have time, now that I'm thinking about it...

In the meantime-

Magic
(My only 'happy' poem)

Christmas bells, they jingle
Just around the bend
I love this jolly time of year
I hope it never ends

Chestnuts roasting, snowmen
And often, snowball fights
Children lie awake in bed
Waiting through the night

Morning comes- Christmas is here!
Kids dash down the stairs
Bows discarded, wrapping paper
Shreds fly through the air

The children love their gifts
And parents watch them play
Simply look, and behold
The magic of Christmas Day

Mistletoe and Santa Claus
And playing reindeer games
That it comes but once a year
Truly is a shame

So build yourself a snowman
And burst with Christmas cheer
Happy holidays to everyone
And to all, a good New Year



A Vicious Cycle

Words cut my soul
Razorblade-sharp
And you never knew

Oblivious to the power
Your smile holds over me
Your voice soothes the storm

Cycle started anew
A simple conversation
Will it ever end?

I can’t decide
I love you. I hate you.
I don’t know what’s good for me

Eyes shine like daggers
A smile laced with cyanide
You are my suicide

And yet, I come back
To the day that you said
You loved me



And I think that's it out of me tonight.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:54 pm


I never meant to say those things that I said
And I never meant to follow through with those actions
I was mad and I was hurt
But those are the kinds of things that you cannot feel
You don't feel the strings pulling your arms together
And you don't feel those jagged words tearing away at your heart
You know nothing of the pain I feel
Or anything about my real feelings
You just say those things to try to make me feel better
Pretend you love me to make me smile
Hold my hands to make me feel important
But the whole time in the back of your mind I know what you're doing
All you want to do is hurt me
Step on my heart to break it
And leave me to pick up the pieces which cut my skin and make me bleed
So you can stand back and laugh about it with that new girl
But I've grown tired of this sick little game
And I can't put anymore bandages on wounds that just won't heal
I need to distance myself from you
Erase you from my memories
And burn all the things that remind me of you
Starting with the bed of roses that we layed in
And ending with that little part of my heart that still feels for you.


Amanda


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:56 pm


Those are good too. It's hard for me to write happy poems... 'cause they're all so "fairytale ending". I don't believe in that kind of crap anyway...
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:57 pm


I know. Like I said, that is my only one.. It was around Christmas, and I was feeling particularly happy during that exam, I guess. (I stopped taking the exam for about ten minutes to scribble that poem on the scrap paper. XD)

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Amanda


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:59 pm


Happiness and I just don't seem to mix well... Probably because when happiness comes around, misery is soon to follow.

"Misery really sucks. Life's a b***h. Maybe they should get married and produce Chaos."
PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:01 pm


I like what one of my friends put for their 'outlook on life' in some survey thing on MySpace...

"Life sucks and then you die. The end."

Pretty much sums me up.

VampyrKitten
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Amanda


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:03 pm


I know the feeling.

Here. This one was back when I first started on Gaia. It's called "Blood Spill"

I look at you and your innocence,
and why I loved you,
that's past tense,
I thought that you were my everything,
But it turns out so differently,
You were nothing,
Blood spills from my wrist,
Thanks to you and your lies,
But it's no worse than,
The look that's in your eyes,
You betrayed me and broke my heart,
And as you lay there dying in front of me,
I laugh at you...
We were never meant to be,
You meant so much,
But now that's all gone,
Nothing in this world matters anymore,
And because of you I can't move on,
So these are the last words you hear from me,
Inside your head these words ring,
A you die right here and now,
Dark memories will be resonating.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:45 pm


Okay...I'm gonne start off with the one I won a poetry contest with. ^^
My poetry isn't very dark (if at all) like your's. But I hope you like it.

Gaurdian Angel
Fallen at your feet
I know you though we'll never meet
Walking with you by your side
You can't see me so I don't hide
I cannot speak, I have no voice
But I watch over you by choice
My heart is kind
My feelings clear
And only my love can you hear.

Psy Yen
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Amanda


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:54 pm


I like it. Sure as hell beats that darkness that lingers in me.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 8:00 pm


THanks. ^^ Alot of my poems are about angels and stuff. One Angel in particular: Liriel Crestoc. She's an angel I created. The poems about her tell stories about events in her life. I'm proud of them. 3nodding

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Amanda


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 2:44 pm


There ya go. Mine are just angry for the most part... only 'cause writing is my vent. I don't like to talk about my problems very often...
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