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 Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 8:08 am
Golden Sun
The Sorrow Unmasked Rated: PG (for quite alot of battle scenes) Genre: Humor/Action/Adventure Summary: 8 young heroes go on yet another journey. But this time around, it's not to restore Alchemy, but to destroy a pair of evil do-ers, who have come back for revenge. Will the pair be defeated? Or will they all join forces with each other? (Set two years after the journey)
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 8:39 am
Golden Sun
The Sorrow Unmasked
Part 1, Chapter 1
The sun was just setting down. It's rays getting tucked away as it fell down to the other side of the world, and this side truned to night. Crickets and various types of frogs could be heard in the distance. The last of a few birds were perched in their nests, restless from a days flight.
The grass gave a slight shudder as a cool breeze swept across it, also giving the trees a good shake. The breeze died down after a bit then started up again.
Jenna's maroon colored hair swayed with the wind. Her eyes scanning the ground for any sign of any animals, as she moved a bit around Vale catiously.
Felix kept his green eyes fixed on his sister, trying hard to supress his laugh, only to find himself grinning rather akwardly.
Jenna finally heard a little noise from him, and truned around to look at her brother, who had his hand covering his mouth. Jenna raised an eyebrow at him, and Felix shrugged, taking his hand off his mouth. Felix breathed deeply two times then looked at her with his calm stare.
Jenna sighed and crossed her arms, eyeing him.
"So what is it that you're laughing about felix?" Jenna asked him. She waited a moment for Felix to stop his laughing, then he replied.
"It's nothing Jenna," Felix looked at thhe sky, and looked back at her. "We should be going now. It's gotten rather dark." With that he turned in the direction of their house, but Jenna stayed behind.
Felix was halfway there when he realised Jenna wasn't with him. He turned around, and saw Jenna.
Jenna's head was down, and her bangs were covering her eyes. Her fists were clenched, and she was shaking a little. Felix knew there was something wrong when a single shimmering teardrop fell from her face.
Felix watched her in silence for a moment, then began to walk towards her.
"S-stop," Jenna said, clenching her fists together so hard her knuckles turned white. "Felix........y-you-you're going to l-leave soon aren't y-you..?" she stammered.
Felix looked at her, then finally said: "Well, Jenna, it's..........I....Jenna..." he rushed to her side but Jenna just yelled at him to stop again.
"You are, aren't you!?! And you promised mum and dad you wouldn't! You lied to them! And what about the promise you made to me..?Don't I matter at all to you? I'm your sister after all...." she looked up at him with tear-stained eyes.
Felix took this chance to explain.
"Jenna, that was when we were both very little......and I'm 21 now...you really think I'd stay in one place for my whole life?"
Jenna's tears started coming down one by one.
"NO!" she cried, flinging her arms around Felix. " Don't leave m-me big b-brother..." Jenna said as she sobbed into his chest, hiccupping from all her crying.
Felix put his arms around Jenna as well.
"You can come with me Jenna." he said softly.
Jenna looked up at him in utter disbelief.
"I-I can?" she asked quietly.
Felix looked down at her, and wiped her tears from her face.
"Yes, you can," he said, then suddenly grinned. "But, let's see who can make it home first!" he sped off in the direction of thier house.
"Hey!" Jenna yelled, racing after him.
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 9:07 am
Golden Sun
The Sorrow Unmasked
Part 2, Chapter 1
"Oh, how sweet.." mocked a female's voice.
"Yes, isn't it?" a male asked smirking.
"Childish bonds they have...that damn Felix deserted us you know? Just to join forces with his dear sister!" the female said nastily.
The male and female were staring into a fire-based orb, which could show them what was going on outside.
The male had a type of pale blue skin, his hair dark blue, with the color of his skin streaking across it. His eyes were a sinister set blue, and he had very pale streaks across his face.
The woman on the other hand, had a plae white face, with very plae blonde hair. She had red streaks going across her face and hair. Her eyes were a light red, and she had raspberry colored lips, with scales crawling up her arms and neck.
Suddenly a marking appeared on the ground castring a warm blue glow over the place. The man and woman, turned around quickly, and the fire orb went away.
A man appeared with long blue hair, and a peachy type of colored skin. His dark blue eyes flickering back and forth between the man and woman.
"It's time you two got out of here." the amn siad, holding out a gloved hand. The woman smirked.
"Well it's about time Alex. What took you?" she asked.
Alex shook his head at her.
"My dear Menardi, it just came to me that you two have been down here for two years. Not that I wanted to help you or anything like that."
The male gave Alex a cold stare.
"And everyone thinks we're dead, huh?"
Menardi looked at him for a moment then looked back at Alex, nodding.
"Yes Alex, I can remember the people who 'killed' us, but i think YOu need to explain everything that's been going on."
Alex turned around and shook his head again.
"All will be explained in due time. For now, Saturos, Menardi, follow me."
Alex stepped back into his blue circle and in another blue fklash dissapeared.
Saturos, nodded his head slightly at Menardi, and let her go into the circle. Saturos went right after her. After two more flashes of light, this time red, Saturos and Menardi disappeared.
The cave they were in was silent and empty, leaving no trace behing of what used to live in there two years ago.
End of chapter 1
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:08 pm
At last my fanfic is complete! It also has an Epilauge(I forgot the spelling...). And soon it looks like Cinder will put it up and then I'll post the link here!
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 6:12 pm
My spazzy fic...yes....
Roses with Black Ribbons
YAOI WARNING ****** YAOI WARNING ****** YAOI WARNING ******* YAOI WARNING (no sex though)
"Who are you?"
The young adept felt himself being thrust against the wooden wall of the small bedroom. He had jerked backwords out of instinct.
The rushing around him stopped and a moment Ivan thought he had done this himself. Terrified, he gasped.
"Is my psyenergy losing control?" He thought - he was in a nightmare!
"You aren't doing this."
A soft, melodic voice seemed to dance in the boy's ear. Ivan whipped around, prepared to strike whoever was invading hard.
No one was there.
"Get away from me!" He yelped.
He fell into arms.
"Who are..." He squealed.
"My name is Erik and I know your secret."
For those who don't know....Erik is The Phantom of the Opera.
Yes, I am insane.
THe story...the Tolbi Opera House is the current stay of Isaac and co during the packed time of Colosso. Ivan has several secrets - one mildly embarassing but very harmless, but one that is dark and only shared by one other human being - if it is revealed, it could tear apart his friends and destroy the world.
However, something inhuman discovers the first secret and realizes it shares the second...and it's terryfying what powers this creature has...
Phantom/GS crossover.
Pairings: well, i don't want to give it away...if you don't like yaoi scram, and most straight pairings are onesided, so...yeah.
Where to find it...i'm scared of putting this on ff.net. I truly am. I haven't gotten to the yaoi parts yet, im on the 1st chapter still. This was an excerpt from a further chapter.
This is a weird idea and now you all are going to be scared of me. If you want to read it PM me. I'm psYCHO.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:38 am
these are sounding pretty good guys. 3nodding biggrin
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 7:24 am
I'm writing one, but its on my laptop. Boo-hoo crying crying crying
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 9:39 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 4:23 pm
EXCERPT FROM THE BOOK I'M WRITING: FROM DEATH TO LIFE.
Isaac gave a little yelp as Jenna whacked him with her staff "Oi! What was that for??" He cried. Jenna giggled and tweaked his nose. "Rrrowr" Isaac said and dashed off after his wife. Garet, standing nearby laughed and whistled "Go get 'er Isaac!" As Jenna ran, she caught sight of a form on the horizon, followed by another. "PIERS!!! MIA!!!" She screamed joyfully and put on an extra burst of speed. A moment later, a red blur of light streaked into Piers arms "Hello Jenna!!" He laughed. Mia smiled and let go of her husbands hand "I'll let you two catch up" she smiled and walked over to where Isaac had collapsed. "Hello my old friend" she said happily and Isaac jumped up "Hey there Mia!!" he cried, pumping her hand. Mia grinned and pulled him into a hug. Then all of a sudden, Garet swooped Mia into a bear hug "Mia! Long time no see!" he laughed jovially "Garet! So good to see you again! It has been far too long" Mia gasped. Piers came over and clapped Garet on the back, almost knocking him into the dirt "Garet! Hello Isaac" he said, with a nod to each man. "Where's Sheba and Ivan? They were supposed to be here" Jenna asked. "You didn't think we'd miss your baby shower, now did you Jenna?" Ivan said appearing out of nowhere. Sheba followed suit, appearing next to her fiance'. "Of course not" Jenna retorted. Mia laughed and Isaac hugged the two Jupiters."Hello to you too Mia" Ivan said after Isaac had released him. Mia giggled and patted him on the shoulder.
Later that night, Mia, Sheba, and Jenna were all gathered around a large bonfire, watching Isaac and Ivan talk. Piers was getting more food. "So Jenna, how is it feeling you have life inside of you?" Mia asked with interest. Jenna blushed and looked over at Isaac "It feels wonderful" Sheba poked a stick into the fire ad it hissed angrily "My gracious. The fire must not like me very much" she laughed. "Oh, Jenna. Where is Felix? Is he here?" Mia asked again. Jenna shook her head "I have not seen him since my wedding" she said sadly "I am worried"
Sheba placed a hand on Jennas shoulder and smiled "He'll be okay. Trust me" But Felix was not okay. Yet, that is another story for another chapter. Not this chapter.
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 8:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:07 pm
Hmm, I've made fics for every game I've played except Golden Sun. Maybe it's about time I start? (After my writer's block)
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Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 5:37 am
IM bored so i came and looked at all of your guys fanfic. I like all of them nice job guys. keep up the good work. you all have a talent to write.
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:13 am
stare
New Rule. ~look it up in the rules page~
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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:30 am
yea that rule will shorten everything up.
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