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 Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:44 pm
I am very afraid for myself. xD
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 6:59 pm
Okay! Critique pour vous!
First off, I'd like to point out how startlingly similar this myth is to Seung's myth (though hers is Korean). It seems to me that Cami would have to basically take the same path Seung is taking now in order to fulful her destiny as a Fa'e - She was a celestial diety (solar in this case), who was raped, escaped, but was eventually caught by her asailant again and killed. As far as I can tell, her ultimate path is to return to the sky.
I'm not saying you should change your myth, but I'm encouraging you to at least talk to Nima, find out what she has planned for Seung, and plan a basic outline for Cami and her path as a fa'e that tries to avoid overlaps where you can. I know she's just an idea, and things are subject to change, but having some ideas for quests and power to come into as an ancient is important.
Also, her powers seem to need a little work. She's a sun goddess. If no one has placed dibs on pyrokinesis, can you give her a little? Or maybe she can create light? Illuminate things? And what about weaknesses? Maybe her powers are reduced in the light of the moon, or she's really really nervous around men? Maybe she has trust issues?
And, solidify her appearance some. What if, in addition to the cuts/scars on her chest, she doesn't have breasts? Like, never develops them? Just an idea.
Last, spell check your thread. You've got a few scattered errors. Like, "Confused" doesn't have a Z in it.
Good luck!
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 10:38 am
Gratzi ^^ I've been toying with some of these ideas, and I think I'll probably go throught with most of them. I'm especially interested in the idea of her just never developing breasts. I don't think she'd really be very nervous around men, just a bit untrusting. Anyways, these should be going up on the front page, so I'll move the blabber to there. Thanks again for your help! <3
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:40 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:01 am
Gratzi! heart The only good one I've found so far is the forest of Brocéliande, which happens to be NPC'd.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 2:54 pm
I just realized something wrong with the forest you mentioned earlier...
...It's greek. xp
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:14 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 4:47 am
Oh, it's in Italy?
Why was I thinking you said "Athens"?
Proceed as usual. rofl
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:24 pm
Har. Finally got off my lazy butt and picked a new deity. Now I just gotta write the backstory. xD
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