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kenjiro yume

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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:07 pm

-eternal phantom-

That's hilarious. Awesome job on it. I love how you took something simple and turned it into a great adventure. Reminds me of a story i wrote a long time ago about a trip to the store where all the cereal characters came alive...

Kinda reminds me of the craziness that was my short story for literature class last year. Anyone know about that one guy who had the book of pictures, and they published it to inspire kids to write... It's kind of a long story. I don't remember the darn guys name though... Well, each one of the pictures had a title and a small quote from the story it was supposedly a part of, but the guy who made them never turned in the stories to the publishing company. Eh, I doubt anyone's heard of that story though.

Anyways, I wrote a short story VERY loosely based on that, but I might take out that quote thing and make it my own. It really has nothing else to do with the picture anyways. xd

Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 12:58 pm

Wal-Marts are evil on so many levels.
Just as everone knows, Wal-Mart was originally created in Hell, but was so despised by the devil that it was then rejected into this world with a huge smily face plastered on it's front. People who were confused by the clever, and yet simple, masking device were drawn to work there. Even more after that were drawn by the evil smile to buy crap from there at extremely low prices. All the while unknown to the people Wal-Mart was slowly taking away from all of the Privatly owned shops and other good things in our economy. Including FAO Shwarts! I beg thy people to lift the quite obvious, yet affective mask, and relise the true evil of Wal-Mart!

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OFF TEH DEEP END

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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 12:12 pm

great xd

Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:14 am

I LOVED it! Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Whoo. Hilarious. Hey, they just opened the new Wal-Mart up the street... twisted

chatterbox dad

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101Angelus~Everto101

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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 6:38 pm

That my friend is pure GENIOUS! I have never seen such an adventurous plot acompaned with irony based on todays curupt socity. You are now my hero!

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