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 Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 3:17 pm
raises an eye brow to the people and realises that they weren't even there.
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 3:28 am
she crept through the trees silently, hoping what she was doing was right for her and her family, her ears picked up on sounds to her left, then she pounced, her fangs biting into the deer of which she had caught, after drinking her fill she called her family,tonight they would get a decent meal....
This is 55 words exacty...unless i miss counted ll i don't think it makes much sense but hey i tried right? sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 6:30 am
Oh YAY!
You ROCK!
You didn't even wait for me to post an example like I was going to soon!
Hurray!
And it is right, as long as the word count is 55 and it has all the aspects of a story, which i does!
Merci!
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 1:58 pm
Nice job... now I'm begining to get the idea. *snickers*
So Faye, where are those 55 fictions anyways? blaugh
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 11:07 am
sweatdrop
*waves hand*
I'll get to it... I'll get to it...
heh
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:19 am
Fayena Oh YAY! You ROCK! You didn't even wait for me to post an example like I was going to soon! Hurray! And it is right, as long as the word count is 55 and it has all the aspects of a story, which i does! Merci! # *Blinks* I do? lol! thankes lol! I think Ill do more in the future then ^^
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 9:58 am
stares at people in room and sits down on a comfy couch watching people.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 2:05 pm
This isn't rp! gonk
That is to both Messanger and Blue!
Sorry boys. But its not. xp
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Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 6:01 am
Back again with a 55 word thingy ^^ Its harder than it looks you know ^^
She stood on a cliff, her red eyes glowing faintly in the darkness, as she stared at the moon, knowing that that would be all she would ever see. She was the queen of all vampires and she among them, would last forever for all of eternity... for she was the queen of the damned.
Enjoy ^^
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2005 3:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 5:20 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 1:22 pm
Alas, I can't write to save my life.... crying Oh well, maybe I can learn here. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 10:37 am
i got some poems they are goth but not about vampires well one of them is
is that alright
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 10:49 am
Darkness and Light.
Give me my darkness, get rid of the things I long for, and all I want to hold, and just let me be alone. Give me the dark room, with nothing to comfort me, and the cold bed, that holds no love for me. Let me lie here on the bed, in this room and let me not see any light, unless I can have your comfort, leave me alone tonight. Let me cry my tears of blood, let them roll down my face, whenever I cry I think of nothing but you and your grace. I long to be held in your arms, to feel nothing but love, but I lie here in my room, and I feel nothing but a dove. Find me one night, in this room on this bed, and hold me in your arms, so I do not feel dead. Comfort me now, as I lay in your arms, and let me lie here in this bed, knowing you hold me close, as I sleep and dream, of your love and of your gleam. And as I wake up I look into your face, I see an eternal light, in this dark place. Let me feel love from you, and never hate, and let us stay together, away from fate. Let your light shine upon me, let me see your eyes, let me know you are near me, so that I may never die.
It aint good but hhey at least i tried.
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Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 9:36 am
Let me feel you breathe for me
soothe the silence
share the grief
tear it from
my very skin
join my soul
from within
I call out
i cry for solace
i reach for you
for this moment
look in mine eyes
see my light
take this darkness
from the night
your air my life
your words my sight
without you I can be
within your eyes I try to see
help me again
TO BREATHE...............
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