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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:44 am
Thats very good I liked it very much
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 5:22 am
*claps hands* Weee... mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:09 am
As expected, it's gloomy, dreary and full of thrill!! Good work, Nukey!! I can smell nano tech & shizz.. ninja
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 6:18 am
texanknight33
As expected, it's gloomy, dreary and full of thrill!! Good work, Nukey!! I can smell nano tech & shizz.. ninja
Thx... mrgreen I actually still don't know on which way the story will go... xd
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:41 am
Pulls up seat to wait patiently.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:23 am
Episode 2 - Gordon
She looked at him without saying a word for a few minutes. He was just sitting in his broken chair, barely breathing and trying to find different points in the room to watch, but not her. She opened her mouth and said: "Am I making you nervous?" He disapproved with a sudden move of the head, but he did not say a word. She lean her head on the right side and looked at him. He felt his throat dry and breathed heavily. She got closer to him and she asked again: "It's because of how I look?" He didn't answer and he starts staring at the ground. She nodded: "I see..." She turned away and start walking in the room. He was following her every move and then he said: "... It's because of what you told me..." She turned around and looked him in the eyes: "So you really aren't from this world..." The boy nodded: "No I'm not..." She smiled, but the smiled turned into a hideous grin. Parts of her facial tissue broke from her cheeks and made her smile look like a Joker grin. She covered her face with a dirty veil and turned to him: "Then you're very lucky that I found you... But you need to find a way to go back. Here you won't survive... You... feel..." He looked at her like she was crazy and said almost babbling: "But you feel to... and you survived. I don't know how to go back!" She looked at him angry and her eyes turn red. She shouted: "You fool! I'm dead... I didn't survive anything!" He covered his ears with his hands: "... I don't get it. I don't know how I ended up here! I just want to go home." She took him by the back of his neck and said: "Don’t think how you would survive here. Look at your skin... is all smooth and healthy. Even if you somehow could get unnoticed through all these walking zombies, how do you think you'll survive eating maggots? You think you would stay alive for long?"
He jumped from his chair and pushed her aside: "And what the ******** do you want me to do? Kill myself now?" She arranged her posture and said: "Well... that's not a bad idea... But I would have to cut your head off and take out your heart..." He looked at her disgusted and yelled: "Why the hell you need to that fo'?" She grinned again and said: "Because otherwise you'll come back to life... and look like me and live like me. Would you like that sunny-boy?" The boy looked at her barely breathing: "So the ground... The ground is taking back to life the dead." He turned around and faced her: "How many normal humans did left and how many... undead are?" She starts laughing frenetically and pushed him from her way: "Oh, so you're here to save the world?" She sit on one of the chair and looked at him:"Look here sunny-boy, I admire the fact that you didn't lose your mind by now, but nobody here will help you... not even I... I'm just a corpse...". He nodded: "I know... I mean... You know what I mean... But... I think I know what happened to your world..." She looked at him with angry eyes: "My world? Remember sunny-boy, this is your world too... years after... from what I understood... And all started in your time... and in your time you're a no body so even if you go back, you can't do s**t!" He looked at her without saying a word. He just stood in the middle of the room staring at the dark wall. She sighed and asked him: "What's your name sunny-boy?" He looked at her and smiled: "Is... Gordon... ma'am..."
She nodded and said: "Well Gordon... Welcome to the year 5000...How do you plan to leave this place?" Gordon looked at his hands and shook his head: "I have no ********' clue ma’am..."
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:45 pm
Yay! Cheers for Gordon! I hope he can save the world.
Thanks Nuke. I can't wait for the next part. mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 2:02 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 3:49 pm
You already read it... Thank you guys! mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:05 pm
ooh! I love it! -pounces nuke-
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 12:38 am
*pounces with Moosie* mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 2:59 am
Thats was very cool Nukes
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:01 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 6:19 am
Episode 3 it's done... mrgreen I'll posted really soon...
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:35 am
*Lurks waiting to read the next story. * 4laugh 4laugh ninja mrgreen
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