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 Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:04 pm
Do You?
Do you feel like a man now
As you watch her cry in terror?
Do you feel strong now
As her blood stains your hands?
Are you happy now
That she cowers in fear?
Are you happy now
That she cannot speak?
Are you scared now
That she is fighting back?
Are you scared now
That she runs from the house, screaming?
Are you nervous now
As she tells the police?
Are you nervous now
As you walk into court?
Do you cry now
As you pull out the gun?
Do you cry now
As you pull the trigger?
Do you regret now
Doing what you have done?
This poem is about a man who beats his wife and finds pleasure in it. Sick, I know. The idea just popped into my head. I wrote it during first hour while we were watching some movie. I don't even remember what it is called. Oh well. Read it, don't, I don't care. Comment and critique. Thanks.
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:05 pm
Untitled
I watch the sunrise
I watch the sunset
I look into the skies
But I can’t seem to regret.
Sunrises are so peaceful
The clouds are tinted pink
Nothing is more beautiful
But seem to go away when I blink.
Sunsets are like twilight
They always end the same
Not quite day, not quite night
Something you can never tame.
This poem was written for school. It had to be somewhat apropriate and about sunsets/sunrises, 3 stanzas, and 12 lines. I met the requirments and got an A. How cool am I? Very. Comments are welcome.
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:06 pm
Dead End
I look to the tunnel
And what I see
Has become
A dead end.
I search frantically
For a way out
Yet all I see is
A dead end.
Looking for a light
Something to let me know
That I am okay
For all I can see is
A dead end.
Loosing air
Taking my breath away
I must be hallucinating
I can only see darkness and peril
I see a dead end.
Nothing I can’t see
Will betray me
For I can see nothing
Therefore, everything will betray me
Because all I can feel
Is a dead end.
Waiting for this cloud to lift
Watching as the arch unfolds
I am 6 inches away from the click
That’s why I have this to say
I am at
A dead end.
Looking through an hour glass
Is harder than pleading for mercy
No, I will not stand for this
I will not retreat
Though my skin is raw
From fighting the urge
To let myself know
That I am at
A dead end.
Mankind will never know
Why we live
It is a mystery
With an answer
That only God and the Devil
Will ever know
Because we saw through
Our chains of misery
To get to the other side
And we finally see it is
A dead end.
My work has doubled
Trying to resist the urge
That everyone has
Trying not to succumb
To the darkness in my heart
Because if I do
It will be a dead end.
I hate this
There is no reason why
You have to use
Psychology on me
I am not a puppet
But I will be
When I read the dead end.
I got this cramp
It’s in my style
It gives me pain
When I go the extra mile
To make someone happy.
Normal medicine
Won’t be a problem to find
But it won’t work on this pain
I’ve tried the anti-biotics
But it will not go away
But I know this kind of pain
It happens when you reach
A dead end.
There is one last question
I have about this
“dead end”…
Where is it?
This poem, in my opinion, is very bad. But I pu it up here for your enjoyment, if any. No flow, bad wording. The whole 9 yards. Read it if you want, but no need to be harsh on the comments. But they are welcome.
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:07 pm
Dreadful Cell
Please
Please, I’m begging you
Save me, please save me
From this black,
Black oblivion.
It engulfed me
Years ago
Along with your heart
This was not the end
But the start.
I’m stuck down here
In this dreadful, dreary cell
Some - most - would call this hell.
To me, this is nothing
This is not hell
Hell is living your life in the dark.
This cell confines me,
For I am not free.
This poem was written about the same time as The Raven's Song. Very dark, very 'emo' as my friend said. Comment your little hearts away.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:21 pm
Wow! what creativity. I've finally found someone on here who has creativity enough to write long poems!
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:23 pm
celticlady101 Wow! what creativity. I've finally found someone on here who has creativity enough to write long poems! ...Check out my first post... I've got tons... xd Isis has commented on my lengthy poems MANY times... Yes, I do agree that her creativity is quite incredible, but such comments are... rather offensive... sorry, I'm just kinda sensitive sometimes... xd
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 4:56 pm
Check more of my poetry Here
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