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Raincrow
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:47 pm


Vitae: *instantly has Zarr by the throat with his bronze left arm* Touch me again, Nathan, and you'll wish you never gave me this arm. *he blinks, and sets Zarr down again* ...Sorry, Zarr. *moves over a few seats, crosses his arms, and sighs in a cultured fashion.* In any event, I didn't mean that literally... Ah, it seems to be a trend. When Raincrow creates characters who end up being tortured, she usually forms them from inspirational DNA from - in the case of male characters, which it always is - two similar-looking anime or video game characters. *He produces from the inside of his jacket a pair of pictures and holds them out for Zarr to see* This is Vincent... And this is Katsu. They're not my real parents, of course...

Strider: Hooray for the b*****d children of random anime characters! *he, in turn, pulls from his pocket some crumpled pictures of Sanosuke and Koji.*

Vitae: We're not b*****d children... So you see, Zarr, I didn't really mean that comment the way you took it... *is suddenly glomped by an over-entheusiastic Strider*

Strider: We lovechildren have to stick together, eh, buddy? *(still doesn't know Vitae's name and doesn't care)*

Vitae: *shoves Strider away and whips out a crossbow, which he shoves firmly against Strider's chest.* Don't. Touch. Me. *he turns to the others who aren't exactly aware of what's happening* And that goes for anyone else who decides the creepy guy in black just randomly needs a hug... *he escourts Strider, at bowpoint, back to his seat*
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:55 pm


Ashrim: He cackles. "Ah, Vitae, is it... yes. That is a man with style. And knows that violence gets things done."

Drakkle: He jerks the chain around his own neck, causing it to chocke Ashrim momentarily. "Shut up," he growls.

Vanrya: Has a hood over her eyes and is very still.

Raeth: "Zzzzz..."

Ashrim


Raincrow
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:04 pm


*Vitae stands in the middle of the circle of chairs, gazing out over the many people who have all joined the support group over the past few hours. He gives Ashrim a little nod to aknowledge the compliment.* My, such a crowd... Well, it's to be expected, I suppose. *he whistles to call order to the bickering amongst characters* Now that we've enough people for this to be a real support group...I think we ought to start out with a few guidelines. Would everyone please just quietly stand up and space yourselves out so that every other seat is left empty. It helps for those of us who would rather not be caught in the heat of the moment and pounced upon. Also, do please mix yourselves up a bit, so you're sitting near someone you don't know... Seeing as how I don't know Strider very well, I'm fully content to sit by him. For now.

*he waits until everyone has achieved a semblance of seating arrangement, then continues* Now, I realize that there are quite a few more people here than expected, so don't count on everyone rembering exactly who you are. Especially since we're bound to have more people showing up shortly. To help out with this, we ought to go around the circle and introduce ourselves. Name, age, and gender if you will, and do note if you're something other than a human or an Elf, or another humanoid creature. You may also disclose a bit about yourself and your experiences, though you may want to save things for later discussion.

*Strider interrupts with a sudden introduction* The name is Strider Derebel. No relation to Aragorn, son of Arathorn. stare Twenty years old is the closest bet I can give you. I'm a guy. *chuckles at the idiocy of having to point that out.* To name a few instances, I've had my left leg slashed open twice and the wound reopened once, been stabbed in the shoulder, and blinded. I'm thankfully fully human.

Vitae: All...right. *coughs* I am called Vitae Silias. I am...*he's silent for awhile*...fourty-seven. *When met by the silent stares of disbelief, he caves* Twenty-three. That is, I am twenty-three years old...I've been alive for fourty-seven years. I am male. My left arm is made of bronze, and therefore not magnetic. Yes, I am all human. My life is not your business.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:23 pm


Vanrya: She looks up. "Space each other out...?" She eyes the chains. "But..."

Ashrim: He grins. He flicks his wrist and a set of lock picks slide into his paw. He quickly picks each and every lock, and tosses the chains away. He eyes the sleeping Raeth and smacks him, hard, with his right paw. "Patrick made me do it! I swear!"

Drakkle: "At least the little thief is good for something..." he mutters. Suddenly, he looks back at Ash and growls. "If you could have done that earlier, why didn't you?"

Ashrim: He had already slunk away and was sitting near Vitae.

Raeth: He snorts and looks around bleery eyed. "Oh... introductions..."

Drakkle: He stands up. "Hello. I am... Drakkle. I have been to the Abyss a number of times. I have been forced to gouge my own eyes out, witness the death of everyone I cared for, killed many innocent people, and when things began to look up... I died," he spits icily.

Vanrya: She stands up after Drakkle sits. "I am Vanrya. I have been under the opression of humans for the longest time. My father died in a war, only for me to find out my mother had plotted his death, so she could raise me how she wanted. I was raped, and beaten repeatedly..."

Ashrim: He stands up and bows sarcastically. "I am Ashrim. I am not abused." Various scars along his arms and face suggest otherwise. Aside from his attitude. "I swear, seriously, I'm not!"

Raeth: He looks up, lost in thought. "Huh...? I don't even know what I'm doing here..." His skull is narrowly missed by a hurled shackle and his face grows stark white. "Oh... now I remember..."

Ashrim


Raincrow
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:40 pm


*Vitae nods and is taking down names, while Strider takes down genders since he's a bit impared at figuring out who's what to begin with*

Vitae: I see we're in the same boat, Ashrim. Neither of us belongs here.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 10:02 pm


Jory: *half-smiles and flicks his dark brown hair out of his eyes, which are a glowing silver* I suppose introductions would be helpful, hm? I'll stick with my alibi, since my human name doesn't seem to fit anymore. Vampire, and I'm two hundred fifty, and change. My life I'll speak of freely, on the condition that information on it doesn't get back to certain ... *glances about the room again and realizes that no one else is in his plotline so that such is higly unlikely* ... nevermind.

Vyka: *glances up from his corner with interest for the first time as Jory speaks, then speaks in a distinct Russian accent* Vyka Konstantinev. Vampire. Twenty-four. *he smirks at Jory* For someone over two and a half centuries you look young.

Jory: * stare acid look at the other vampire, who tops him in height by about half a foot* Look, I didn't ask to get bitten. I was a vampire slayer. Believe me, it's the last thing I wanted at the time.

Vyka: *shrugs, apparently unfazed.* Failed suicide attempt. Mica, I think, thought it would be amusing to see what happened. If it was not for her I would have succeeded.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 10:06 pm


*Vitae smirks; Jory and Vyka are amusing and no one has yet made a crack about his own age. That's a start. It's always reassuring knowing somebody tops you in age by two centuries.*

Strider: ...And you're both guys?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 10:59 pm


Vyka: *noise of protest at possibly being confused for a girl*

Jory: Yup.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 4:32 pm


*Sage prods in two of her favorite abusable characters, Garret and Bass. Both are male, both are otaku-senshi, both of them have crappy social lives, and combined they have the self-esteem of a dead rabbit*

Bass: *sulks* I'm completely useless, a waste of life. My mentor's dead, the Empire I swore to protect invaded and conquered, my father abandoned me and my mother betrayed me, but worst of all...I'M OUT OF HAIR GEL! *sobs as teal hair starts to afro*

Garret: *waves meekly* Uh, hi? Please tell me this is being catered? Soda, candy, pizza, anything?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:10 pm


*Janus, whom has by now made herself comfortable on a random patch of floor, eyes Garret as he speaks.*
Janus: "Now that's a damn good point. I'm hungry." stare

*Kasume has wandered off, not quite sure of precisely where he is going.*
Kasume: "Erika has abandoned us." eek "This is worse than the time that zombie ate my arm..."

Zhao: ...

Kasume: "Okay, maybe not worse..."

erikakaiser
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:59 pm


*Adrion rises in the circle, hands gripping the air beside his hips. He bites his tongue fiercely and urges himself to speak*

"My name's Adrion Kain and I'm twenty-one. My mom was the sister of the late harpy queen Arcana, and my father was just a human. Mother up and died when I dreamed of it at five years old, and my brother was bitten because of me at eleven. I live with my aging father, never sleeping and always living in fear that I may kill another or that I could kill myself." *he looks behind himself* As a harpy-hybrid, I do have wings, but I can hide them. So unless you want to see a bloody mess of my back, I'm not going to show you. Today.

*Adrion takes his seat, nudging Kamaro in the arm. He stands, muttering some inappropriate things under his breath*

"Yeah. I'm Kamaro Kain. Vampire. I was 'round twenty-four when I got turned. Master Riley n' his other pets pull me into a cult, an' I still haven't passed my initiation test yet." *He looks back to Adrion* "I was gonna kill my father to do so, but I just couldn't. They beat me, whipped me, slashed me... hell, anything you could ever imagine. It's a cult-thing; nothin' I won't argue with."

*He sits down, crimson eyes calming to a stormy blue. He looks to Asher and gestures him to stand*

"Erm... hi. My name's Asher Daniels. I'm sixteen and pretty sure that I'm human. Well... I guess you could say that I grew up like any other normal kid. But when Andrew-- er, my father began fighting with mother all the time, things just went downhill. My sister didn't know about this, and my mother was never home after that. Father turned to me for his punching bag. He beat me, taunted me, raped me, touched me, and burned me deep inside." *Asher rolls up his black sweater sleeves, revealing countless scars slashed across his wrist* "I've tried so hard to die; I drank, I smoked, I even stabbed myself. Nothing worked. I don't know when my suffering will end... I do have a really good friend who's helping me right now, but not even he can get rid of the past..."

*Asher looks to everyone, going silent. He nods his head and, with a small 'thank you', he sits back down*
PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 8:52 pm


Ashrim: "Tch," he scoffs. "Suicide... you all make me sick!" His tail flicks in annoyance and his ears lays against his head threateningly. "Can't even deal with it... and find more... simple pleasures."

Ashrim


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 9:22 pm


-boots his characters into the room-

Eli: -gets up, walks over, and stis calmly, almost emotionlessly, into a chair- Ah, the abuse I've lived through. I was forced to kill my only family, because they had decided they would kill me, and collect the insurance for their own gain. I had to kill them in self defence. Then I had to run from the police. I lived on the streets for five years starting at age eight. After that, I met someone whom I fell in love with. Of course, do to the circumstances, I had to end her life as well. After which I was used by the government to kill all those who stood in their way. A killer for all those corrupt bastards. Eventually, I met someone, and I started to feel again. However, it turned out that this someone was a relation to my first love, and loathed me for doing that to her sister. Then, he commited suicide, for he could never love his sisters murderer, and I ended up breaking, emotionally, and physically. Since I was now basically worthless, the government decided that I was of no use, and tried to kill me. But I didn't die. I've been living on the streets in agony, killing for pleasure. I'm now a mercenary for hire. Killing for whoever pays the highest.

Karek: At the age of seven I saw my family get murdered right in front of me by what were seemingly wear-wolves. After which I was tossed from foster-home to foster-home. Around 13 I discovered that I, myself was a were-wolf, and that those who had killed my parents were now after me. Since then I've been shot, stabbed, clawed, blinded, and mangled. I'm still fighting to keep them away, fighting to survive. -pants-

Ruana: I've been beaten, slapped, mauled, stabbed, raped, shot, and skewered, but I'm still alive. I have a few scars, but that doesn't matter. As long as I'm okay, i'm still happy. 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:20 pm


Strider: I was posessed by a shadow creature once... *can fully relate to those who have attempted suicide as he himself rolls up his sleeves to expose pale scars on his arms* As a teenager I was convinced by my sadistic traveling companion that I was insane and dangerous, especially to women. I withdrew from society because I was afraid I was becoming a monster. (Er--not in the literal sense.) My first attempt to kill myself was thwarted by a couple who found me in the street and took me to their home to care for me. Several other attempts were doomed to fail, and eventually I ended up ticking off a man who also lived in that house. Deimos--that was his name--always got exasperated with me when I ended up hurting myself, kept telling me I was a coward and an idiot, and so on...really helped my self-esteem. But he got me to stop... *chokes a bit* Then he died of a lung disease he'd had his entire life...I never realized he had it until the day before he went, because I'd been so taken up with my own meaningless problems...

Raincrow
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:26 pm


Vitae: *extends his left arm slightly so that Kasume can see the bronze metal, faintly etched with runic symbols. He says nothing.*
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