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 Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:52 am
heart I like the Untitled one. ninja
~Edit~
The one about the barn.
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:53 am
which one? i got 3....
sorry to burst ur bubble.... xp
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 4:41 pm
another poem... i was posting a caption on mysapce and this came into my head.... i hope you like it....
The beautiful rose,
The pick of the bouquet,
In a lovely pose,
Always the same way.
Its vividly colored,
The stem bright green,
The petels puckered,
The beauty is seen.
If only this were life,
There wouldnt be killing,
Blood dripping from the knife,
And the graves that are filling.
I wish that it could be better,
But alas its not,
The rain more wetter,
life less sought.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:09 pm
Untitled
He hated me,
I loved him,
He never saw,
The true me.
He ignored me,
I kept talking,
Hoping he'd answer,
The he does.
"Just shut up!"
He says,
Walking away.
As I start to cry.
That night,
A mirical happened.
One I'd ever thought,
He called.
"I'm sorry."
He says.
"I love you."
I'm shocked.
"Really?"
I say.
Holding my breath.
"Yes, and I know you love me, too."
"Yes."
I say.
In disbelief.
"I love you."
That night,
We both snuck out.
To see each other.
He held me close.
All night,
We sat there.
Him holding me,
I smiled.
I hope you liked it... i just wrote that one after a Social Studies test.... lol
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:54 pm
THANK YOU THECATSRED!!!!!!! HEARTS BACK AT YA!!!!! heart heart heart heart heart heart heart
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:56 pm
Pejirooroo Untitled He hated me, I loved him, He never saw, The true me. He ignored me, I kept talking, Hoping he'd answer, The he does. "Just shut up!" He says, Walking away. As I start to cry. That night, A mirical happened. One I'd ever thought, He called. "I'm sorry." He says. "I love you." I'm shocked. "Really?" I say. Holding my breath. "Yes, and I know you love me, too." "Yes." I say. In disbelief. "I love you." That night, We both snuck out. To see each other. He held me close. All night, We sat there. Him holding me, I smiled. I hope you liked it... i just wrote that one after a Social Studies test.... lol very nice love the emotion
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:09 pm
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! YEAH!! I GOTITH A FAN!!!!!!!!! HI! so do you have any poems on here? as my post says (with that poem) i wrote that after my S.S. teste today... lol i wrote it in like 10 minutes.. i was soo proud of my self... lol
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:13 pm
Pejirooroo THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! YEAH!! I GOTITH A FAN!!!!!!!!! HI! so do you have any poems on here? as my post says (with that poem) i wrote that after my S.S. teste today... lol i wrote it in like 10 minutes.. i was soo proud of my self... lol would you read my poetry
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 8:48 pm
Heh, it'd be nice if anybody would stop by my thread anymore... but I understand... my stuff isn't all that great by comparison to the works of other members such as yourself... I guess I'll just stop writing and start reading.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:18 pm
Dante Deus Heh, it'd be nice if anybody would stop by my thread anymore... but I understand... my stuff isn't all that great by comparison to the works of other members such as yourself... I guess I'll just stop writing and start reading. Yeah Josh, your's definitely suck balls. Do youself and all of us a favor, and go hang yourself. Just joking. We all do interesting work and we are all talented to a degree. Give yourself some credit.
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:08 pm
first off, thank you all...... and dont hang ur self dude.....
wanna hear an interesting story??
good.
so yesterday at school, this girl named Angela, tried to say the my "Little Girl" poem, was one that i copied off of Myspace. I was sooo pissed...... cause i didnt copy it!!!! i wrote it the night that i was really mad at my parents.. and if you dont believe me, you can ask all of my friends...... cause they read it the next morning....... lol so yeah.. then she kept saying it, and so i yelled down the hallway to her:
" mayber youre saying that cause youre just jelouse of me being able to write better than you!"
nice huh? plus, its totally true!
lol
Pejirooroo.
I LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!!!
and ill read all your poems if you ask....
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:16 pm
ok hey guys. ive got 5 new poems for yall..... i hope you like
These are Haikus... apparently.. smile tee hee hee...
Horses
Horses are trotting,
Getting faster by the step,
Speeding like bullets.
Orly
Orlando Bloom is,
The greatest person to walk,
On our planet, Earth.
ok what do you think????? please tell!!!!! lol
Pejirooroo
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:23 pm
My Love
To my love,
Me dearest love,
Please come back,
Back to me.
We had spark,
That rarely occurs,
Those bright lighs,
That were made.
Please come back to me,
I still love you.
I know you do, too.
Love IS happening.
You say you don't.
Love me, that is.
I see it in your eyes,
And I know im right.
Please come back to me,
My one and only love.
I love you.
Hearts.
what do you think?? that was one i wrote 2 days ago, i think but i kinda forgot about it .... sweatdrop sorry... plus we had those ice storms and stuff.... and my mom and dad were afraid to turn on the computers.... lol but we didnt loose power for but a couple hours... lol...... so yeah.. i hope you like.
Pejirooroo heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:27 pm
Un-Wanted
He is a man of many faces,
Has many different identities.
That roams around the states.
To find his unwilling prey.
Hed poses,
As a teen,
On this website,
Name: Steve.
He's a pervert,
Forses his entrance,
Of the the poor children,
Who trusted him.
He is bad,
Very bad, indeed,
We need him locked up,
Help me please.
yeah.. wrote that one yesturday while i was in the bathroom..... lol..... but yeah... i was actually thinking of renaming it "Imposter" what do you think?
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