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 Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:54 pm
Mr. Ska I read it... WOO! Go Drew...
Well anywho, I don't know. It don't find it interesting or neat. x___o It seems someone... over-thought which makes it confusing to understand. Maybe it's because I'm not a Role-Player and I don't understand the complexity of a good story and character plot, but from an average Joe's point of view it's kinda confusing. That's 'cause I do kinda tend to overthink things. But this is a plot overview, trying to be descriptive (Failing, I guess), not trying to be story-like. When I write the actual thing, it'll be fluent and whatnot, but this is just all choppy, like... "This is happening, now this is, and this thing is going on because of that..." Gah, The Cavern is weird. Stupid movie. The writing's okay, so's the acting, but the lighting is annoying and the camera is confusing, and the actual subject of the movie may be more researched than is usual for a movie, but it's just stupid. Stupid ripoff of The Cave, which is a ripoff of Alien. Well, it's kinda good, in that the characters are kinda real, but they're too dramatic. ... Never mind. Just finished watching it. Different from what I thought it would be, but still stupid. Like, "What the hell?" kind of stupid. ANYWAY. All the plot is there for is to tell you what the character's been through already, so what would she do now?
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:55 pm
Mr. Ska Draconis)Wyrm Any suggestions about normal-day activities, before all this crazy starts happening? Like, dealing with her little brother who lives with her and her dad in the apartment, or her older brother who lives with her mom (her parents are divorced but don't hate each other), or dealing with school... I mean, what kind of day-to-day trivialities would she encounter? Example, cat throwing up in shoes.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 7:10 pm
Draconis)Wyrm Mr. Ska Draconis)Wyrm Any suggestions about normal-day activities, before all this crazy starts happening? Like, dealing with her little brother who lives with her and her dad in the apartment, or her older brother who lives with her mom (her parents are divorced but don't hate each other), or dealing with school... I mean, what kind of day-to-day trivialities would she encounter? Example, cat throwing up in shoes.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 7:14 pm
Mr. Ska Draconis)Wyrm Mr. Ska Draconis)Wyrm Any suggestions about normal-day activities, before all this crazy starts happening? Like, dealing with her little brother who lives with her and her dad in the apartment, or her older brother who lives with her mom (her parents are divorced but don't hate each other), or dealing with school... I mean, what kind of day-to-day trivialities would she encounter? Example, cat throwing up in shoes. Not exactly the kinds of things she would. I just wanted what other people have had happen to them, as suggestions. Example, she goes to parties. I don't.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 7:23 pm
Draconis)Wyrm Mr. Ska Draconis)Wyrm Mr. Ska Draconis)Wyrm Any suggestions about normal-day activities, before all this crazy starts happening? Like, dealing with her little brother who lives with her and her dad in the apartment, or her older brother who lives with her mom (her parents are divorced but don't hate each other), or dealing with school... I mean, what kind of day-to-day trivialities would she encounter? Example, cat throwing up in shoes. Not exactly the kinds of things she would. I just wanted what other people have had happen to them, as suggestions. Example, she goes to parties. I don't.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 8:05 pm
Random is good. Random things happen all the time, and that's what I'm looking for. Like... I dunno, I'm tired and I want to play more Zelda.
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:06 am
I just want her to seem real and not contrived. I'm thinking... She sleeps in, rushes, puts shoes on the wrong feet, has to fix it and waste more time, rushes out, misses the bus, goes to school on her bike, gets there and remembers she forgot her textbook for first period class.
There was something else, too, just can't remember...
I'll also make her say something wrong (Like "amp loil" when talking about Zelda) and get party-boyed by a friend.
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 12:21 pm
Draconis)Wyrm I just want her to seem real and not contrived. I'm thinking... She sleeps in, rushes, puts shoes on the wrong feet, has to fix it and waste more time, rushes out, misses the bus, goes to school on her bike, gets there and remembers she forgot her textbook for first period class. There was something else, too, just can't remember... I'll also make her say something wrong (Like "amp loil" when talking about Zelda) and get party-boyed by a friend. Lol... That seems kinda.... out of the norm... x___x
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 5:56 pm
Stop talking without me! D;
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 8:45 pm
*Talks without you*
Added more!
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 9:30 pm
[Lunar Warrior] Stop talking without me! D;
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:08 pm
I-I am a role player but I rarely write, or even see, stuff that are more than ΒΌ of all that stuff sweatdrop It's just...long...
But I'll read it! One day...
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:37 am
Yeah, it is getting lengthy, but it's almost done. Kind of.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 9:16 am
Oh okay, youy've been adding stuff from time to time? Well in that casse it's normal it's long. I just thaught it was what it looked like when you first posted it.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 10:22 am
I'll read one day.
JUSTYOUWAIT gonk
You must have put many thoughts on this?
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