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WolfenFury

PostPosted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 2:09 pm


Apparently, words have run dry. surprised

For me, anyway.

Writer's block. X._.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 4:02 am


Here's what I have for the next verse. Obviously, this is just a rough idea and without your help.

Erik:
You hestitate from the choice you,*
as you see me with thier eyes,
you feel that gutteral hatred as they do,
and your soul can (or knows)only to despise.
YOU THINK THAT THIS FACE CANNOT HARBOUR LOVE?
THAT THIS ABOMINATION, NO MORE THAN A HUSK?
see me kneeling before you, my angel,
your slave, your salvated dove,

*Spoken. Similar in tone and speed to:
"This face the infection, that poisons our love."

TheDarkMercenary


WolfenFury

PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:54 am


Which part is spoken, before or after the asterisk? eek
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:31 am


WolfenFury
Which part is spoken, before or after the asterisk? eek
Before. Sorry. I was copying from one of my notes and it was a bit messy.

TheDarkMercenary


WolfenFury

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 10:45 pm


Is there really no one stepping up to try?

sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 5:57 am


WolfenFury
Is there really no one stepping up to try?

sweatdrop
Nope. Just us. Still, I can't blame people. I'm not Andrew Lloyd Webber and why should people make a second rate sequal when there's so many top-notch versions to just sit and enjoy?

TheDarkMercenary


WolfenFury

PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:01 pm


TheDarkMercenary
WolfenFury
Is there really no one stepping up to try?

sweatdrop
Nope. Just us. Still, I can't blame people. I'm not Andrew Lloyd Webber and why should people make a second rate sequal when there's so many top-notch versions to just sit and enjoy?

We had this conversation in PM, as to why it was worth it. xd

Even if it ends up sucking, it would at least be fun as a working project. xp
PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 1:39 pm


TheDarkMercenary
Wow! I hadn't expected such a warm response. Now, my absence from the guild is really turning in me like a knife. Or maybe a chaffing from a punjab lasso! But, all help is welocme and all suggestions a truly admired as well as wanted! Iron Maiden 890, please post the poem!?! It will be nice to hear a sweet melody about the angel! Obviously, no material will be stolen from it! Also, WolfenFury has come up with some great lyrics that I've decided to add to the song. So, at the moment it runs thus:

Erik:
Christine, I am no angel,
Though my heart beats life and pure light,
I dwell in this darkened Hell,
Away from God's cruel sight,
I will be forver, beside you,
Though my face, is a curse from above,
I will guard, teach and guide you,
For you are my love,

Christine:
He kneels and speaks like a man in love
He sings like an angel from my fractured past
How can I swallow these words from an “angel”
Who is no more than a shadow beneath a mask?
Tell me how, oh angel, how can I trust
A man spinning webs of brilliance
From deception, dark, and dust?


OH thats awesome

The Iron Maiden890

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