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 Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 3:45 pm
Oh, and as for my actual review: It's not bad.
...Wait, wrong standards.
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*CLICK!*
*whirrwhirrwhirr...*
Hey, not bad at all! This is actually some pretty good stuff you've got here... But before I make any kind of REAL judgement, I have to see where the story goes and how you end up... well, ending it.
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 3:53 pm
just a random side note....
I just got a pink link from here.. so the story rules lol
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Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:09 pm
Ok.....thanks for the reviews...since many people here ninja seen to have a PROBLEM with the names that I am using in my story then WHY DON'T THEY COME UP WITH SOME WONDERFUL NAMES THEMSELVES!!!!!!?!!!!!!(Just so that you all know, I really do have a reason for using the names from that series(yes people, I have read it...) I really just want people to think of Lyra and what kind of person she is when reading my story...)
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Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:11 pm
*resists the urge to poke*
Calm down, chica... Jason has the problem. I just automatically think of Philip Pullman when I hear "Lyra", s'all. And really, even Jason shouldn't be any reason to change the names of your characters - if you feel that "Lyra" is appropriate for your story, then so be it, we can't do much to stop you.
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*goes back to count the number of musical references in the story*
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:34 pm
Joukai No Gutei *resists the urge to poke* Who is this?? *poke*
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 5:22 pm
Thats Jonjon remember, the guy from the pool...
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 10:09 am
Mara _ Jade Ok.....thanks for the reviews...since many people here ninja seen to have a PROBLEM with the names that I am using in my story then WHY DON'T THEY COME UP WITH SOME WONDERFUL NAMES THEMSELVES!!!!!!?!!!!!!(Just so that you all know, I really do have a reason for using the names from that series(yes people, I have read it...) I really just want people to think of Lyra and what kind of person she is when reading my story...) First, it's your damn story. Second, I have many tyhings they need to be done first. Like apply to 19 colleges. Third, I'm advising, not demanding. How about... Alison Heppner and her ... well, whatever it is, Redéo. xp
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:05 pm
FragmentedTear Thats Jonjon remember, the guy from the pool... dots...
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Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 5:55 pm
Mara _ Jade Joukai No Gutei *resists the urge to poke* Who is this?? *poke* *ish poked* X_X GWAR! scream *pokes back*
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 1:13 pm
Joukai No Gutei Mara _ Jade Joukai No Gutei *resists the urge to poke* Who is this?? *poke* *ish poked* X_X GWAR! scream *pokes back* *attack of the pokes begins.....* *poke, poke, poke, poke, poke*
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 7:33 am
OK peoples, let's struggle to remain on topic. xd
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 11:20 am
oh come on stare ....when I post more story we can focus on the topic again..untill then..hm...well actually I don't know what.... confused
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 4:40 pm
The guild moderator panel is broken, so if I want to get rid of the spam I'm going to have to delete the whole thread. Just letting you know. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:34 pm
Teh Jeicen The guild moderator panel is broken, so if I want to get rid of the spam I'm going to have to delete the whole thread. Just letting you know. sweatdrop O.o...ok... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:19 pm
Just so that you all know...the name are being changed....Lyra is now Catherine and Pan is now Sage....I'm not going to go and fix the old chapters as of yet so just remember this and try not to get too confused... xd
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