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Kira Noelle Helyean Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 4:39 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:00 pm
maybe the powerful person could heve been traped because they were evil...
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:21 am
sineous Blackened-Soul~Hansuna~ Saint Helyean what should guilds first page story should be about ummm.... there is a village, in the middle of no where. And they live next to 'The zone of no retrun.' If anyone gose in there they are killed, but there are ways to get though. A group of people are trying to get into the zone and find out whats there. There is also a group of people trying to stop them. Thats all I could think of. thats a pretty good start, but instead of going to find out what is in there, mabey we could be serching for some one that lives there. He/she, would have to be someone very powerfull. So we send a group of people in there to find him/her, because our kingdom is in danger of some catacylsmic dissaster that only this one person can prevent. How dose that sound?
What do you think?
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:47 am
Decent but mabey you could add in the real leader didnt travel there but was trapped because he misused the powers he had and we find that the bad guys are the good guys and vise versa.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:57 am
Hmmm......this is starting to get very interesting. I don't know how to add to this story, if I can at all, but after reading the ideas, I'm hooked biggrin
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 12:00 pm
I always like the idea that the good guys are bad guys, it's so much fun to work with and it can go so many directions.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 2:59 pm
What if, on top of all of this, something terrorizes the town. Rampages through at certain times? This makes the town uneasy around new people in the town, and strangers.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 4:11 pm
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Something_Something_Thing
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:20 am
Yeah, so do I, we should deffenitly have that. On top of it, no one should know what it is, they just know that it comes at night and distroyes stuff and kills anyone who ventures out. That adds a bit of mystery.
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 4:17 pm
I dont think that should be in, it has been used way too manny times. It would be kinda manotnous.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:15 pm
Okay, you may have a point. I don't think that has been an origanal plot device since BeoWolf, I just thought it might be fun.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:54 pm
I never said it wouldnt be fun, just manotnous.
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Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 7:07 pm
Sounds like the weird warlock guys from timemachine. They keep the villagers well fed and cared for and at night they come back and eat the people. The thing is, the people are to dumb to care much..... Geez, I have got to stop reading so much, I can relate this to every stry I have ever read! *hits head on desk*
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 11:45 pm
Thats probably because storys are comprised up of the same three elements. A group of heros, a big badguy, and a village being attacked.
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:53 pm
I must say that is sadly true almost all the time though sometime you come across something differant.
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