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 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 1:57 am
Ok people...before you say anything about this one...its about something that happened...or rather I wish didn't happen to me...but whatev...
Gone
When you left me
You took my heart and soul
My thoughts were of you
I cried more and more
You took away the reason
I took a breath every day
Now I just sit here, cry, and pray
It was a journey meant for us two
Now we walk it alone
Trying to figure things out
Yet still no clue
Now I turn my back and give you your space
With only the memory of touching your face.
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 6:59 pm
Champagne
Champagne and chocolate
are they forever?
Do they go together
like the earth and weather?
I don't know
I've never tasted
I've viewed and chased it
But I've never tasted it
Champagne, so unique
shall never be wasted,
not upon my lips
I look up
view crystal wine glass lips
bubbling
calling me for a sip.
but I'm so low
and born to serve
a chocolate sweet, tempting hors d'oeuvre.
I yearn to sip but I've no nerve
sitting on this fine China curb.
Wondering how we correlate
how everyone says that we taste great
together, as if an act of Fate...
And still and still I've yet to taste
Champagne and chocolate
are they forever?
Do they go together like the earth and weather?
I don't know, I've never tasted,
I've viewed and chased it
but I've never tasted
Champagne
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:21 am
Beach Chairs
Sitting on the beach chairs
watching the setting sun
holding hands and reminiscing
how it all begun
Sitting on the beach chairs
watching the ships out on the sea
holding hands and smiling
together we're meant to be
Sitting on the beach chairs
watching people walking past
holding hands and knowing
that our love will always last
Sitting on the beach chairs
watching the waves along the shore
holding hands we realize
our love is stronger than before
Sitting on the beach chairs
watching the changing tide
holding hands with happiness
to be by each others side
Sitting on the beach chairs
watching the sunrise
holding hands with tears of joy
there are no more good-byes
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 6:22 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:19 am
Nice poems.
I personally like "Gone".
Keep up the good work. ^^!
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:41 pm
Broken Inside...
Look deep into me, tell me what you see.
A broken image?
A cold empty shell?
This world is brining me down to my knees.
A choking grip so tight, I fear the night descends.
How deep the river of fate
In the silence of the hours late
I saw my other self
She had a smile carved in her face.
Reminding me of days past, things were never the same
And time passed on, brought little hope
The grief that collapsed my soul
Once held, theres no return...
Look deep into me, see what I've become.
No reflection, what I used to be
The days which linger ever on
They all seem the same now
Memories killed my longing soul.
Once alive,
Never to return...
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Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 1:54 am
Life is a Prison
Life is a prison,
Oh God let me out.
No one to listen,
To hear when you shout.
Climb the walls of insanity,
Ride the waves of despair.
If you fall it don't matter,
There's no one to care.
Used to wish for a window,
To see birds, trees and sky,
But you're better without one -
Stops you aiming too high.
Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away.
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that you pay.
Strong is good, weak is bad.
Be it false, be it true.
Your mind makes the choice,
And enforces it too.
Cell walls built by society,
With rules to adhere.
If you breach the acceptable,
You had better beware.
Hide the pain, carry on,
Routine is the key.
Don't let on that you're not,
What you're pretending to be.
Lock it all up inside you,
How badly that bodes.
Look out for that one day,
When it all just explodes.
Leaving naught but a shell,
Base functionality too.
But killing all else,
That was uniquely you.
So how do you grow,
With a timebomb inside?
Or how to defuse it,
Without destroying its ride?
You can't.
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Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 4:54 am
†∞†Love me today...
...Ok everyone...leave me a message about these please...I want to know everyones opinion ...for tomarrow I may be gone. †∞†
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 2:12 am
Interesting.
That last one.
I like it.
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 12:30 pm
Lost Love
We used to sit under this tree
And watch as the sun would set
Crying tears over you
Now all alone I watch
As the moon rises
Its light no longer fills me with joy
Only sad memories of when we were young
As I held your hand
the sun would weep for us
Crying over our sweet love
But now that is no more
Our love lay shattered on the floor
Your face still hunts me here
I try to wash away your love
But it has stained my heart
I wish to kiss your lips
And dance with your hips
But you are just a ghost to me
Just a bad memory
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 1:55 pm
I like this one, lost love... Memories are always beautiful when painted with the moonlight...
But personally, I like Champagne. It's unique, and there's much more going on there than what appears on the surface. Questions, answers, and symbols. Very well done.
Of course, I have to say all of your poetry is fairly impressive. Thanks for showing these to the world.
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:40 pm
No problem...that is what art is about...showing the world what you got
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