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(ooc: Its an Open RP, so theres never a too late to join. Anyway, we havent progressed too far yet, its going slow because we're letting everyone get a chance to post before we move on step by step. So far, GMAW forces has made base near the City where Post 05 is stationed at. The operation has begun not too long ago and GMAW forces began to approach the city. As they approached, Artillery rockets from the city were fired at the approaching GMAW forces. And thats where we are currently standing at.)

*semperfioor takes off when he hears the rockets hit. He sees on flying close by and fires an attempt to stop it before it hits. The attempt succeeds and the rocket explodes in mid air. I look toward the city and see that there are more missiles heading our way.* Ma'am we have more missiles approching,*looking at the sky* roughly 10-15 more!!*semperfioor yelled through his in radio to the mothership intel officer.*

*Roy rolls his eyes at how long it's taking for his request to go through. He finally decieds that it's no use waiting any longer, and with out the correct clearance he forgets the idea and does what he can do. He flies over to Priavte Semperfioor's helo.* I don't care what you say. I'm joining up with your flight group. I will be any where in the formation you wish. I'm flying on your wing from now on sir.

(ooc: My apologies the the Locking of this thread. Because its a controlled RP, this will run less openly. I was busy most of the day to monitor all activity. Therefore the one present locked the thread until i come around and restack the deck of cards.

Yes... we've seen this all to often... I'll be doing the dreaded... "Red Taping".

Dart, i admire you intent to create action and begining to include more detail within each post. But enemy dropping out of nowhere is performing acts of "Quaker". Just like the popular video game, Quake Arena, Objects spawning out of nowhere. The existence of the enemy should've been long see before they appear in the sky, especially GMAW base air space.

Secondly, Controlled RP mostly remains in theme of the story that is intented for. If you have another storyline to go by, your free to post it in a seperate thread or make a new one with proper set-up.

Finally, this RP was create in the purpose to exam members of their abilities, fairness and TAKE YOUR TIME. This Turn-base RP doesnt care if you type or post fast. This eliminates everyone from being able to take advantage of the situation while someone is offline. With that in mind, take your time Re-Reading your posts. You have the ability and time to make your post look like a freaking Sci-Fi Novel.

The ability to be a Good RPer will draw more attention. A much smoother RP will appear before your hand that will last for a long period of time without having people leaving and new people joining to keep it going. The original participants and the creator to RP from the start and continue on is a sign of good RPing.

Now, time to explain the structure of Turn base RP action and results. It will follow the formula of

Post 1 by Member A ~You attack... wait~
Post 2 by Member B~Someone responds to Member A's attack and replies result of Member A's attack in fairness and apply counter-attack if any~
Post 3 by Memver A ~You respond to Member B's attack in fairness, and applies counter-attack if any.

Now... moving on, back to the RP. Thread is now unlocked.)

*as the soidler shoots dart sees some paracutes on the troops. the bullet exspodes taking out the rest of the tanks making a blast in the amoury. dart barely makes it out of the blast.* DIE SABATOGE TEAM!!! *Dart yanks out the M16 and fires.*

*I look at my one radar screen and see what Roy was talking about. I think for a a second and then yell out* "We will fly by them and well see what we have there!!* I look out and see that they have a few dozzen tanks waiting there and infentry.* "Ok here's what we do. We will fly turn back and pass by them again. This time we will hit them with a few air to groung missiles to take out the tanks. Ill radio in for groung support in this area to take care of any hostiles left!!" *i replied into the radio.*

(I'll assume I'm that sniper. Also, I have no objection with you (The mods) throwing something at me.)

Rhanok snapped the bolt up, back, forward, and down in a crisp fashion without removing his eye from the scope. No other enemy soldiers were staying within sight long enough to get a fix, so he moved his finger to the triggerguard, scanning through the city.