|
|
| You'd rate these as... |
| keep trying |
|
10% |
[ 1 ] |
| I liked the 1st one, but the second one needs work |
|
10% |
[ 1 ] |
| I liked the 2nd one, but the first one needss work |
|
20% |
[ 2 ] |
| just stop right now while you still have a shred of dignity |
|
0% |
[ 0 ] |
| they were both pretty good |
|
20% |
[ 2 ] |
| Awesome! are there any more? |
|
40% |
[ 4 ] |
|
| Total Votes : 10 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 4:13 pm
Vince Sagara I'd have to say good job on the second poem, it is better than the first. More details can be nice but they can also spoil a good work. Also, I love the pics!!!! Post more please. if you wish
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 4:15 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 1:26 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 5:42 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 4:14 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 3:00 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 7:05 am
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 8:58 am
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
