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 Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 5:04 pm
Quatrain poem....
Lone and sorrow
Is today and tomorrow
Friends outside
From you they hide
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 5:06 pm
I made this one... its in my journal....
What is living
What are you seeing
Many don't want it
And I admit it
I hate this life
Because I tried hard and thrived
But somebody gets in the way
Making it harder to stay
So what should I do
Just disappear out of the blue
I wish its that easy, but its not
I just cant help it but have a weak spot
Just take me away
And let my death be my pay
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:15 pm
Too Tiffany, with love:
It's been two weeks since I first said "Hi"
and man does time seem to fly...
...It's been two days since I said I love you
it's been two nights since you said i love you too...
...I stayed up the hole night
because I know you are right
you are right for me
just as you cannot move a tree.
it's been two weeks, and alot of allure
and now I can only look towards the future.
~Adam~
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:22 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 6:14 pm
lol..such violent poetry after a pretty one sad
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 3:07 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 12:03 pm
biggrin Glad you like it...
...I was afraid you wouldn't sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:32 pm
winter_moon biggrin Glad you like it... ...I was afraid you wouldn't sweatdrop *huggles u*
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:24 pm
now.. I think I'm finaly open enough.. to post up this poem... that and It's not the original one.. that one sucked... It had the emotion... but the wording of poetry was bad... so here's the new one... the good draft of my poem of heart...
A Memory:
This is a tale of a memory
A memory lost in the depths of time
As false hope continued I begged to live on
As now I have lost the false hope
As have I lost the will to live
But I continue on Living the Day
As ages pass one may become another
As ages pass... ages pass between you
As you step forward
And look to that which you long for
What you once longed for
Is now just a memory
And now...
As that love changes to memory
And that memory fades away
You have lost all that held you together
No memory
No love
No will of life
But you must look on to the future
~ Daniel Friesen
As someone once said, a crush fades away after a short time, but love will last forever?
This is what I had? and had lost? the love of a memory, gone now, as I feared, and along with it the reason I had to live.
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 1:46 pm
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Shadow man88 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 7:53 pm
eek You are sure one of those who hates writing xd
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 8:11 pm
NaOH- eek You are sure one of those who hates writing xd maby it's just because he can't spell... "ya I'm cruel... deal with it" ~Darian
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 12:09 pm
dantman NaOH- eek You are sure one of those who hates writing xd maby it's just because he can't spell... "ya I'm cruel... deal with it" ~Darian
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 2:00 pm
NaOH- dantman NaOH- eek You are sure one of those who hates writing xd maby it's just because he can't spell... "ya I'm cruel... deal with it" ~Darianya.. but that one was ment to blatently hur someone... and I don't care.. Dan would have held back and put it into nicer terms! ~Darian
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 12:09 pm
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