oO Ayame Oo
Might as well give it a shot since I never get commissioned anyway....
xp My contest entry for DiGi_Rin's OOC contest! ^^
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x X xSeriously criticize this stuff cuz I need to know why it isn't selling like I'd hoped it would.
xp Nice pirate girl, Ayame! I really like the bright colors, her body proportions, her facial expressions, and how one of those socks is pulled up while the other is scrunched up by her foot (I like those shoes too). I know you were focusing on her cool clothing design, but some advice I would give would be to remember that she is at sea. "The sea is a cruel mistress." Those eastern (etc) winds are troublesome, and I don't want to same anything inappropriate, but her skirt won't fare well. You should maybe give her some shorts underneath the skirt. Also, she might need more clothes especially during sea storms, but she could always go below deck or put on more clothes or some sort of piratey coat (I really don't know what those jackets are called...). Just a thought.
wink (...I also like the cute "heart" bandana she is wearing on her head!)
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