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PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:53 am


"A little's enough"

when all is said and done
Will we still feel pain inside?
Will the stars go away with night?
Sharp smile for the morning light?
It's like the best dream to have
Where every thing is not so bad
Every tear is so alone
Like God himself is coming home to say
I
I can do any thing
If you want me here
And I can fix any thing
If you let me near
What are those secrets now
The church is scared to tell
I'd whisper them all aloud
So you can hear your self
The trees were the first sign
The deepest blue, the clearest sky
The silence came with the brightest eyes
And turned water into wine
The children ran to see
The parents stood in disbelief
And those who knew braced for the ride
The earth itself it came alive to say
I can do any thing if you want me here
And I can fix anything if you let me near
What are those secrets now
The church is scared to tell
I whisper them all aloud so you can hear your self
I'm sorry I have to say it but you look like you're sad
Your smile is gone; I've noticed it bad
The cure is if you let in just a little more love
I promise you this A Little's Enough
PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 8:11 pm


This is version two of a poem me and a friend wrote for science ('Volcanos'). I wish I could find version one, it was so much better. *Sighs* I only half wrote this, but I'm posting it anyway... is this ok? And... I don't know why we made the layout like this.

Wake
Earth shakes
And the ground brakes
The trees tremble in the roar
Into the sky the birds flee and soar
Red-hot death spits up from the ground
Stinging smoke crawls up the mountainsides
A deer looks up and bounds away from the sound
And beneath the heat and all noise and smoke
Curled up dormant around the whole world
Deep in the earth the dragon awakes
Dooming the world once more
To fire and a lost sun
Night eternal
Stars

Yuki XIII


eat lollies and be happy

PostPosted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 3:37 am


Ok, this is the poem I wrote for english, it's not actually finished as it suddenly stops and Chloe (BG22) wants me to write more to it. But tell me what you think of it so far.

A friend of mine.

There once was a girl,
she just loved to twirl.

She had a little frog,
but he didn't like the fog.

The girl walked past a stick one day.
She put it in her mouth but could only say:

"Sticks taste bad?"
She was then very sad.

Her friends laughed at what she said,
so she ate an orange thing instead.

She took a bite and said: "Mmm, yummy!"
Her friends were shocked, and poked her tummy.

She then blew-up.
This random guy said: "Sup?"

The guy told them about his party,
turns out his name was Marty.


And that's all I have so far, I'll try and get more later.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 5:23 am


eat lollies and be happy
Ok, this is the poem I wrote for english, it's not actually finished as it suddenly stops and Chloe (BG22) wants me to write more to it. But tell me what you think of it so far.

A friend of mine.

There once was a girl,
she just loved to twirl.

She had a little frog,
but he didn't like the fog.

The girl walked past a stick one day.
She put it in her mouth but could only say:

"Sticks taste bad?"
She was then very sad.

Her friends laughed at what she said,
so she ate an orange thing instead.

She took a bite and said: "Mmm, yummy!"
Her friends were shocked, and poked her tummy.

She then blew-up.
This random guy said: "Sup?"

The guy told them about his party,
turns out his name was Marty.


And that's all I have so far, I'll try and get more later.
It's random in a funny way. It's funny in a good way. Does that make sense?

Dabogrl
Captain

Distrustful Lunatic


eat lollies and be happy

PostPosted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 8:58 pm


Dabogrl
eat lollies and be happy
Ok, this is the poem I wrote for english, it's not actually finished as it suddenly stops and Chloe (BG22) wants me to write more to it. But tell me what you think of it so far.

A friend of mine.

There once was a girl,
she just loved to twirl.

She had a little frog,
but he didn't like the fog.

The girl walked past a stick one day.
She put it in her mouth but could only say:

"Sticks taste bad?"
She was then very sad.

Her friends laughed at what she said,
so she ate an orange thing instead.

She took a bite and said: "Mmm, yummy!"
Her friends were shocked, and poked her tummy.

She then blew-up.
This random guy said: "Sup?"

The guy told them about his party,
turns out his name was Marty.


And that's all I have so far, I'll try and get more later.
It's random in a funny way. It's funny in a good way. Does that make sense?
Yes, yes it does.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 2:47 am


Charaluna often moaned
And groaned like Moaning Myrtle
Because someone told her
She looked just like a turtle.

Charaluna liked to laugh
And laugh and laugh and laugh
Because someone told her
She looked like a giraffe.

((Charaluna is my friend's nickname. She really does look somewhere between a turtle and a giraffe. In both verses, "someone" is me.))

Juperia


tattoo fish

PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 5:00 am


|P|E|T|E|W|E|N|T|Z| my anti-EXPLOSION


This one ain't so good, but...

Yeah Right
Paint a smile on my face?
It'll wash away
Clouds with silver linings?
Too heavy, now it's just rain
There's always tomorrow?
It won't change today
Just start over?
Yeah freaking right

This was the very first poem I wrote. I was very depressed at the time.

Fingernails
Her fingernails
Tell the tales
Tell the tales of how she fails
She fails at everything she tries
She tries but she can't stand the lies
The lies that everyone will say
They'll say that it will be okay

That's it for today, folks!

That will be all.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 6:32 pm


I have written bad poetry
Oh noetry

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tattoo fish

PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:35 am


|P|E|T|E|W|E|N|T|Z| my anti-EXPLOSION


xd

That will be all.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 9:00 am


I have a friend who writes Christian Poems.

Jeod Longshanks


Dabogrl
Captain

Distrustful Lunatic

PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 5:57 pm


Jeod: I now understand why you asked me about the Casting Crowns song. Thank you.
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