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 Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 1:24 pm
Uchiha Roxas Teth BIack Adam Uchiha Roxas Teth BIack Adam Uchiha Roxas Teth BIack Adam Yeah i can take on Black Adam, i know he would be hard because he's from Egypt and his way of talking and what not Okay you need to fix your coding. I will do that to show you and then I'm going to need a far better sample. Ok will do, Black Adam doesnt have much info about him but i'll do my best Powers would go under Abilities. ok, anything else? I think I'm gunna have to move this to the RP School and teach you how to do this. It seems to be mess right now. So, give me a second to move it and we'll go ind epth with tutoring you how to do this properly. Ok no problem
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 1:32 pm
Right, we're going to go through this slowly and step by step. You might get frustrated and annoyed about the fact I'm making it sound very basic but that's the point. I want you to get this.
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 1:34 pm
Uchiha Roxas Right, we're going to go through this slowly and step by step. You might get frustrated and annoyed about the fact I'm making it sound very basic but that's the point. I want you to get this. i have the patience so no need to worry about any frustration from me
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 3:26 pm
Teth BIack Adam
Gaia Username:
Teth BIack Adam
Wanted Character:
Black Adam
RP Sample:
*Patrolling via the skies was Shazam along with Superman, scouting for any villainous activities* "All skies cleared", *Superman communicated back to the spacestation where the Justice League was based* "Well that was a good days work", said Shazam "I think i'm goin to he-", before Shazam could complete his sentence, a bolt of yellow lighting struck from the sky sending him into a small island "SHAZAM!?!" Superman shouted, he hurried off into that direction to find Shazam slowing recovering. Before he could walk up to help him, the lightning struck again from the east to send Superman off the coast, when the dust settled, it was Black Adam, staring in the direction Superman had been sent off in. He would look back at Shazam and say "I've been waiting 5000 years for this...."
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character?
I am familiar with this character, i am still going through his legacy however
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege?
yes i do
Hey there Teth, sorry for the wait I did put up a absence notice but things are good now and I can finally deal with this. First off I want to talk about your sample. The minimum needed to be submitted for a sample is around 200 words. This sample is only 133 after putting it into Microsoft Word. In order to be considered for the Black Adam character I'm going to need you to redo this sample to the word count and to a better quality. At the moment both of these aspects are letting you down and making it very hard for us as a Mod Team to give you what you want. Sorry if this is upsetting. I do not mean to be harsh, I just want you to be the best you can be and that relies on me being honest to you. Secondly, when writing for a Guild Roleplay you don;t really need the asterisks (*) before actions and what not. You can just write in continuous prose. Like with a novel. So try that sort of style. You may find it easier. Okay? Post a new sample up (Brand new in a new post) and we will move onto the profile after that. Sound fair?
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 8:57 pm
Uchiha Roxas Teth BIack Adam
Gaia Username:
Teth BIack Adam
Wanted Character:
Black Adam
RP Sample:
*Patrolling via the skies was Shazam along with Superman, scouting for any villainous activities* "All skies cleared", *Superman communicated back to the spacestation where the Justice League was based* "Well that was a good days work", said Shazam "I think i'm goin to he-", before Shazam could complete his sentence, a bolt of yellow lighting struck from the sky sending him into a small island "SHAZAM!?!" Superman shouted, he hurried off into that direction to find Shazam slowing recovering. Before he could walk up to help him, the lightning struck again from the east to send Superman off the coast, when the dust settled, it was Black Adam, staring in the direction Superman had been sent off in. He would look back at Shazam and say "I've been waiting 5000 years for this...."
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character?
I am familiar with this character, i am still going through his legacy however
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege?
yes i do
Hey there Teth, sorry for the wait I did put up a absence notice but things are good now and I can finally deal with this. First off I want to talk about your sample. The minimum needed to be submitted for a sample is around 200 words. This sample is only 133 after putting it into Microsoft Word. In order to be considered for the Black Adam character I'm going to need you to redo this sample to the word count and to a better quality. At the moment both of these aspects are letting you down and making it very hard for us as a Mod Team to give you what you want. Sorry if this is upsetting. I do not mean to be harsh, I just want you to be the best you can be and that relies on me being honest to you. Secondly, when writing for a Guild Roleplay you don;t really need the asterisks (*) before actions and what not. You can just write in continuous prose. Like with a novel. So try that sort of style. You may find it easier. Okay? Post a new sample up (Brand new in a new post) and we will move onto the profile after that. Sound fair? fair enough man whatever it takes smile
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 11:02 pm
Teth BIack Adam Uchiha Roxas Teth BIack Adam
Gaia Username:
Teth BIack Adam
Wanted Character:
Black Adam
RP Sample:
*Patrolling via the skies was Shazam along with Superman, scouting for any villainous activities* "All skies cleared", *Superman communicated back to the spacestation where the Justice League was based* "Well that was a good days work", said Shazam "I think i'm goin to he-", before Shazam could complete his sentence, a bolt of yellow lighting struck from the sky sending him into a small island "SHAZAM!?!" Superman shouted, he hurried off into that direction to find Shazam slowing recovering. Before he could walk up to help him, the lightning struck again from the east to send Superman off the coast, when the dust settled, it was Black Adam, staring in the direction Superman had been sent off in. He would look back at Shazam and say "I've been waiting 5000 years for this...."
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character?
I am familiar with this character, i am still going through his legacy however
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege?
yes i do
Hey there Teth, sorry for the wait I did put up a absence notice but things are good now and I can finally deal with this. First off I want to talk about your sample. The minimum needed to be submitted for a sample is around 200 words. This sample is only 133 after putting it into Microsoft Word. In order to be considered for the Black Adam character I'm going to need you to redo this sample to the word count and to a better quality. At the moment both of these aspects are letting you down and making it very hard for us as a Mod Team to give you what you want. Sorry if this is upsetting. I do not mean to be harsh, I just want you to be the best you can be and that relies on me being honest to you. Secondly, when writing for a Guild Roleplay you don;t really need the asterisks (*) before actions and what not. You can just write in continuous prose. Like with a novel. So try that sort of style. You may find it easier. Okay? Post a new sample up (Brand new in a new post) and we will move onto the profile after that. Sound fair? fair enough man whatever it takes smile Thank you for being so understanding.
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