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 Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 1:05 pm
This ones my favorite:
Half past Oblivion
I can't take it
Hard to break it
Deep inside
I feel it eating me alive
So stab me in the back,
And let the blood run down my spine,
Because it hurts so bad,
And I just can't deal with you tonight.
And I will drown in
The puddles of your mind.
As I sit alone in oblivion
With the remnants of what I left behind.
Chorus:
Because the ghost of you,
It's eats me up inside.
Your haunting figure still stands,
In the outskirts of my mind.
I can't escape your silhouette,
It haunts the doorways of my life.
Your thoughts invade my sanctuary,
Fingers linger on the knife.
(Repeat Chorus)
In the darkest fairytale,
You'll lie awake and wait.
Stalking your prey forever more,
Until the last breath I take.
Your heart beats in your chest,
Like the blackest piece of coal.
Just waiting for my demise,
Your one and final goal.
(Repeat Chorus)
As long as you're around,
I'll never find peace of mind
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:00 pm
Yes, very definite style, I like it though.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 8:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 11:24 am
I think I'll send the link to your post to stupid people whom like to molest threads with their incesent retardation of the human psyche.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 5:03 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 5:56 pm
Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 6:04 pm
GermanTemper1010 Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd. It's long because I have an entire song in there; and thank you. It's what makes my work original and mine I like to think.
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 9:54 pm
Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd. It's long because I have an entire song in there; and thank you. It's what makes my work original and mine I like to think.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:41 pm
GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd. It's long because I have an entire song in there; and thank you. It's what makes my work original and mine I like to think. I am cursed. I can literally not stop thinking... only on rare events when something totally blows my mind do I ever not think... I think. gonk
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 4:11 pm
Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd. It's long because I have an entire song in there; and thank you. It's what makes my work original and mine I like to think. I am cursed. I can literally not stop thinking... only on rare events when something totally blows my mind do I ever not think... I think. gonk
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 6:14 pm
GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd. It's long because I have an entire song in there; and thank you. It's what makes my work original and mine I like to think. I am cursed. I can literally not stop thinking... only on rare events when something totally blows my mind do I ever not think... I think. gonk Not them again!
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Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:32 pm
Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Definitely long, and your point was clear, so woot for you, though your beat and rhyming scheme is... odd. It's long because I have an entire song in there; and thank you. It's what makes my work original and mine I like to think. I am cursed. I can literally not stop thinking... only on rare events when something totally blows my mind do I ever not think... I think. gonk Not them again!
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 5:05 pm
GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 I encourage thinking, but maybe you went to far. domokun xp I am cursed. I can literally not stop thinking... only on rare events when something totally blows my mind do I ever not think... I think. gonk Not them again! The Horror! gonk crying
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Posted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 8:54 pm
Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 I encourage thinking, but maybe you went to far. domokun xp I am cursed. I can literally not stop thinking... only on rare events when something totally blows my mind do I ever not think... I think. gonk Not them again! The Horror! gonk crying
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 12:14 pm
GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Mr._ Anti-Social GermanTemper1010 Shhh, the grown-ups are talking now. *pats hand* Not them again! The Horror! gonk crying WTF?! My nose!
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