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 Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:41 am
Thank you, everyone. All this feedback means so much to me. I'm definitely getting better, and your motivational words help me strive to do the best I can. I really do appreciate everyone taking their time out to see what I've got. I'll have more pictures soon.
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Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:49 pm
jerksofreshhhh hippo-loves-me they r very nice =) the first two r the only ones that get to me most tho. i know the rule in photography is to center the most important thing or s om et hin g like that lol, but i think that you should make an exc eption som etime and put the importan t thing in like a corner or something... idk how to explain. ANYWAYS i think these are great. ya got a lot of talent
but thanks. smile Ya sorry I had the worst of explaining things lol. ok so basically like look at ur American apparel pic the dude is ur main subject. It is what u want the onlookers to see. So if u put him to the side a bit so u can see the sun and keep the sepia (I think that was sepia or was it black and white? Lol) then it would still look cool
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:24 am
Hot and talented. Is there no end to your amazingness, Fresh? sweatdrop 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:00 am
Out of this set I think the first and last are your best. I love the perspective on the first. In American Apparel 2 he is too centered and you did not give him much head room so it would cut off some of his head if you were to frame and matte that photo. You really like that gradient that you used in the surfing shot and the other shot of the girls face. Try not to rely so much on photoshop. I think you are over doing it in some pieces.
Edit: In JetLife... J.ust E.njoy T.he Life the light is too hot on the right side of her face blowing out the details in her skin. Next time tone it down just a bit.
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:35 pm
yukimimi Hot and talented. Is there no end to your amazingness, Fresh? sweatdrop 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:31 pm
jerksofreshhhh Here's part two of my photography. I'm still working on my signature. I don't like it much, but you guys tell me which is your favorite and how i can improve on any of them.
Kids Earthly Beauty American Apparel 2 JetLife... J.ust E.njoy T.he Life Surf's Up Confidence is the Key. The first picture is done by a pro. And you're him :3 good job mate.
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