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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:57 am
Azekal Noxcis I just saw this. I think the lyric is good. It ties with how she punished a lecherous husband. Is there a second part to that line? Why yes there, I think it's something like; A burning veil for the bride too dear for him... Then it repeats the lyric I put down. Well if she went that way Alykia, she could say goodbye to the german word for fear X3 yayEh almost forgot about the sin eater thing. While that does sound interesting, it runs into a problem. She'd have said dolls for a longer time before teh past 3 decades. If she was to turn one into a sin eater then wouldn't the person it was originally intended for, die eventually?
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:49 pm
Thanks Alykia. I normally play around with sounds until I get something that sounds right. With Nafiah and Tariq I have a list of Arabic names I used. It'd be great if I could find a German word as a name because German and English are so similar.
That's a nice line. If you wanted you could add that line to the last line but there's no need.
The sin eater could be the soul in a doll. Dolls don't die so the soul wouldn't either. The sin eater would last as long as the doll.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:55 pm
Ah well then, do you have a list of english words you want in german? Also if you were curious. Fear=Angst, sounds more like ongst or something like it. Oh I think I finished my profile despite the new changes. So do you think this description is good Mdu; Azekal Noxcis Despite the climate I’m currently living, my skin has a year around tan. Probably comes from my Father, though I still have no clue. I recently died my hair a vibrant red, that’s broken up by a several streaks of gold in the bangs. ...I realized that Mdu, but that's not the problem. The person that suppose to not feel the pain, they'd eventually die. What would happen to the doll after that? Also I think sin eater might not be the right word, but I think that's me overthinking again.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:07 pm
I've been on Google translate. I don't have any specific words in mind. At the moment I'm just trying to find a word that sounds similar to its English counterpart. Interestingly enough, nightmare becomes albtraum. Alptraum is what Alps do at night to give people nightmares.
Is there anything else about her features people should know, such as things other characters would be able to see that aren't shown in her picture? If not, you're good to go.
The doll would just sit there until it was destroyed I suppose. Sin eater is the word I read for what I'm describing.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:14 pm
Well it was jus an offer since I'm bored and I have a german dictionary. Could always name him Elb or something.
Odd , about what you read for a sin eater. I thought it was sort of what it's name meant. Something along the lines of person willing taking on another's sins after they died. Usually by eating something that's been passed over the dead body or something similar.
Do you think we should have the english translation of the rp's name somewhere within the rp?
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:20 pm
If you'd like, you're welcome to. I'm wondering if an English name would be better. I'd have to tie it in with his history, since alps are originally German.
I guess we each found different definitions. I mean, there are dosens of definitions of "elf".
That's an excellent idea. What was the exact translation again?
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:24 pm
Eh depends on which words you're looking for?
Fair enough, though your description remade of like the inverse of a voodoo.
Specific= "The Synod of Midnight." A more adaptive one is "The Midnight council" or "of Midnight."
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:36 pm
I won't worry about it for now. I have ages until I finish the profile anyway.
I guess. The description I read it in had a witch whose husband was unfaithful. She put his soul into a thing (forgets what) in a preservation jar when she turned him into her sin eater. She would then cut her toenails too short so they bled and deliberately injured herself so he would feel it. The sin eater could still talk and they still had a relationship, however odd.
Thanks. I think I'll use The Council of Midnight because Synod is too churchy.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:40 pm
Wow that was a big typo in my post. Idk how I typed out remade when I meant reminded...god those witchs must've been masochists/sadists.
Well Konzil, which translates as council didn't sound spooky/mystic enough. Besides we could always say that all but the most rural of towns kno what Synod is.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:52 pm
You must be on autopilot. Happens to me too.
I'm thinking that the alp once haunted someone who knew to invite him over for coffee. They became friends and he'd come back early each morning for more coffee (in his opinion she made the best coffee ever). She grew older and eventually got sick. When she died the alp became vengeful and haunted the doctor who "made" her die (his opinion). The doctor developed sleep apnea because of nightmares about the woman the alp created. The doctor became tired at work, only did night shifts, became alcoholic and ended up being fired. Occasionally during the doctor's life the alp would run around the house as a white mouse to taunt the doctor. The alp continued to haunt the doctor until he ended up blowing his brains out.
Good call. I love the name you made.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:58 pm
Oh that sounds delightful. I trust that's going to be a paraphrased...also I threw another story into Elina's profile...and I did go with the sin eater thing.
Why thank you. Though I gotta say the grammar got me to include the "von".
OOOOOh name him Mouse or something similar.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:04 pm
Paraphrased? Naaah, it's going to be expanded on. I think it tells a fair bit about his personality.
The "von" is a nice touch.
How about Tiko Sleepsbane? Tikus is Indonesian for mouse. (Why do I have to speak Indonesian, it's next to useless?)
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:11 pm
Ah okay...hmm I wonder if I should change teh story. I should probably reread it.
Well it was about the only way to make it possessive at my lack of knowledge in German grammar XP
Eh Sleepsbane seems a little obvious but Tikus would probably be a fine name in and of itself. How about Mouse being his moniker? Just a thought.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:17 pm
Oh, my bad. Were you talking about the sin eater? I thought you were talking about the doctor story.
I'm happy with his moniker. It links in with his profession of creaing nightmares for people.
Alps don't only turn into mice. "As an alp, I am able to shapeshift into a number of creatures: cats, pigs, dogs, horses, birds, snakes and white butterflies."
Back in the day, names like ___sbane were very common.
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:21 pm
...wait so where did the mouse come from? Ah well that jus tells how much I know about the history of names. Well I think it's safe to say Tok will call him Tik.
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