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 Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 3:10 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:06 pm
Luciano
PROFILE REVIEW
Date: November 25, 2010
By: Shadomu
Meeep Kuro o w o Kuuuuu A very nicely organized, concise little thread ^^ I like the general objectiveness of it; a presentation of facts rather that an interpretation of how perfectly awesome mary-sue their character - lots of room for future development and evolution.
Not 100% sure what his motivation for getting a pet would be....though something like that could be addressed in the prompt-flatsales too, so you don't necessarily have to rush into it ^^
Oh! And hmm..missing a....birthdate P: Small thing, but still~ Either way, I'd be very interested to see how this character develops ^^///
*cough*Pretend this is approved*cough* LOL Will once the rp threads are open and set up ^^
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:05 pm
Thank you very much! psh what Lucy is ttly a mary sue /SHOT
Oh, okay, gotcha! Yeah, I'll think about that; I had a few vague ideas in mind, but I'll flesh it out a bit more and make it more detailed. C:
A birthdate! Wow, a basic fact, but one I'm surprised I missed! Thanks for telling me! His birthday would be April 13th. =)
Thank you Chuu! I really appreciate it. C: <333
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:47 pm
Luciano Locke
PROFILE REVIEW
Date: October 31, 2011
By: Shadomu
Ooopsss forgot to formally approve this~ My apologies m'dear ^^// Approving it now~ No major comments or discrepancies. His personality and history are lovely; I'm excited to see how he plays out!
A small reminder: rather than "Chinatown", the area is now "Shinjuku" (or its nightmarkets) ^^//
This Quest is now APPROVED. You may rp at the Wooden Door now if you'd like~
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