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Demonic Life
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 12:30 pm


Still very good.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 1:53 pm


al_batross
Is Two of The Same a definite vent point for you, or is it just amazing without the aid of raw emotion?


Um...I'm not sure. xd A little of both? 0_o I just had to let out some steam while I was pissed at my dad. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 1:55 pm


Demonic Life
Still very good.


Well thankies I'm glad you think so. ^^ I woud be updating more and posting more poems, but unfortunately I've been cut off so I won't be on as much. But don't worry there will be more poems coming soon. biggrin

Shira
PostPosted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 3:49 pm


Eh..I'm so sorry I haven't put any more on I swear I will soon! xd

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 4:10 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 7:41 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 7:15 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 7:17 pm


A New View

In such grieving times I wonder
how the sky can shine so bright
and the flowers bloom so wide.

Fate has left me nothing more
than the remains of a once
inspiring dream.

I look to what is called heaven
and see nothing but endless
shades of grey and the blur
of my broken soul.

The wings that I once used to
fly away with are now tattered
and useless for the means of my escape.

You would think that the world
would notice the pain of its
inhabitants.

But no.

If I look around me everything
is as it should be with their laughter
and their tears.

What justice is this that I must feel
such suffering when the only
troubles they have is themselves.

Perhaps this is not that way to go.

I walked around a corner and for
the first time in many times, I
saw a miracle.

Such beautiful colours
I smiled


Kou-chan

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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:30 pm


The End of the Line

In every story, in every line
There is said to be an end.

Even in the stories there are
Happily ever afters or tragedies.

But I wonder what would happen,
If we told you that there wasn't.

The end I mean-
What if the line kept going?

I mean, I suppose there is
The great circle of life...

But what about my story?
Does it have an end?

Not everyone gets a
Happily ever after tale

So when do you know that
Your line has come to the end.

Perhaps it already has.

Kou-chan
PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2006 7:41 pm


Forget

The tears I see that fall down your cheeks
Tear at my heart as I wipe them away.

My consolation does nothing and there is
Nothing that makes your pain leave.

But I know that the reason you're suffering
Is because you think you are the one to blame.

So now, my only solution to save your life
Is to destroy mine by separating you.

The memory of me and my burden is what
Causes your soul to bleed in agony.

Now my love, let me soothe your aching heart
And make it all go away, make it disappear.

I will carry our memories alone from now on.


For to make you forget your pain is to make you forget me.

Kou-chan

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