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 Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:21 am
den is a stupid name
change his name to Bobby Ray
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:29 am
SAT MY a** DOWN AND FINISHED PAGE 4 WOOO
zhaff is stupid name
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:31 am
NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR PAGE 5.
>_>
You see what you've done Looce?
DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE?
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:48 am
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!
heart this manga/comic!!!
inb4 everyone in guild is completely addicted.
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:11 pm
It's a comic. Comics and manga are different in pace and style (not just art style, but story telling style)
At least, I'm guessing that Looce is going for a western comic series type with this mini-story of hers.
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 3:33 pm
Nurse Kiri It's a comic. Comics and manga are different in pace and style (not just art style, but story telling style) At least, I'm guessing that Looce is going for a western comic series type with this mini-story of hers.
especially regarding panel layout and pacing xD
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:32 pm
[color=emo] Nurse Kiri It's a comic. Comics and manga are different in pace and style (not just art style, but story telling style) At least, I'm guessing that Looce is going for a western comic series type with this mini-story of hers.
especially regarding panel layout and pacing xDYeah panel layout is what I wanted to add into "style" but I couldn't remember what it was called. derpderp. But anyway, it's great. I can't wait for the next page. T 3T
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:02 pm
for some reason the newest page just seems
different
than the rest
also that oh s**t! seems out of place and kinda comical instead of serious. doesn't seem this zombie guy's personality to say it.
meh cool stuff
my o key got stuck sorry
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 9:46 am
lol i know. was hoping no one would notice
i think what happened was the combination of style development & me getting a lil lazy.
especially the first/second panel. For some reason I couldn't get them right & idk why, so i just stuck with what i knew.
the oh s**t was kinda random. wasn't supposed to be there but then it would be a big empty space with no purpose.
plus i figured it would make it seem a little jarred and it would make more sense that he was just faking the oh s**t moment.
Also i should edit the o's out of your post.
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