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 Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:06 am
Bulimic Rainbows I was the first a**-kisser, do I get a prize?! eek
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:28 am
Meh....I actually liked it. Tis good...not my style, but still.
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 7:12 pm
Mockary Bulimic Rainbows I was the first a**-kisser, do I get a prize?! eek Thats alot of people gonk
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:03 am
Mockary ninja I don't know whose weirder, me for writing that kind of stuff or you people for liking it. neutral well, it was a very good poem indeed 3nodding and aren't we all a bit weird in our own ways? rofl
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 8:41 pm
its good, but you could have put more stuff in it or i dunno, layer it... rolleyes
but as you said you did it in 5 min....which is amazing! 4laugh
and you never go back and chnage them...thats like me!
yeah, poems, capture the moment wink
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:59 pm
yannay its good, but you could have put more stuff in it or i dunno, layer it... rolleyes but as you said you did it in 5 min....which is amazing! 4laugh and you never go back and chnage them...thats like me! yeah, poems, capture the moment wink
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Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 2:51 pm
It's a pretty good poem. Though, to be honest I'm not a fan of avid rhyming. Anywho like I said, it was pretty good and I liked what it was about.
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:45 am
You should write a song. xDD
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 11:37 am
Diz-chan You should write a song. xDD lol.
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