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 Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 1:11 pm
purple shadow fox Immortal Ragnarok WOah, man. Really impressive.
It's one to remember about.
And don't mind about the Bunny thing.
It's our own thing. Kind of like mine were most things have black.
Anyways, great entry.
I should get working on mine and show it.
Of course, I gotta limit the Essay about it and put the important, necessary things in it. sweatdrop
Ok, yay for bunnies!!!!! And black stuff is nice.~
Alright, I'll look forward to seeing it. smile
It is hard to only put in the the important things and make it flow...
Some changes from the old/original version, but fully re-mastered.
But here, I gotta limit it to only the safe content.
It's still all right like that though.
Much more understandable that way...
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 5:52 pm
there goes my writing self-esteem ...
just kidding XD I'm only on page one of my story
Chapter 1. A star is born
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 6:18 pm
tarabud44_1 there goes my writing self-esteem ... just kidding XD I'm only on page one of my story Chapter 1. A star is born
I wanna boost my confidence about making my 100+ chapters of all sorts of crud.
I mean, most of us pour our entire selves doing our characters and storylines. We should at least have somewhere to show it, so, why not here? mrgreen
So, If you also wanna show your storylines, as well as your characters, feel free to do so.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:50 pm
Okay. first week, and we got some entries.
A little more than what I was expecting, so I'm feeling good about this.
And some extra news:
The Reward will change to an even higher amount of Gold. So keep a watch for the reward number. It could be even better soon...
...Cause I want it to be truly worth it.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 7:41 am
oh, no I'm writing a story in my notebook, whenever I get bored in class. So far I'm on page 5 or 7... lol
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 1:24 pm
tarabud44_1 oh, no I'm writing a story in my notebook, whenever I get bored in class. So far I'm on page 5 or 7... lol
Me, I'm just too lazy to write it, busy with owning on Smash Bros.
But yeah, I got all there is in the story.
Plus, I want people to see the characters, so I'll start with main soon.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 3:10 pm
Immortal Ragnarok tarabud44_1 oh, no I'm writing a story in my notebook, whenever I get bored in class. So far I'm on page 5 or 7... lol
Me, I'm just too lazy to write it, busy with owning on Smash Bros.
But yeah, I got all there is in the story.
Plus, I want people to see the characters, so I'll start with main soon.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 5:16 pm
 Name:
"Specialized.
Hemispherical-Adaptive.
Assualt.
Drive.
Entity-eXperiment."
But prefers the shortened name, Shade. Why he was always named as such is a mystery.
Age: (Physically, 19) Real age, Unknown.
Gender: Male. But can also be Female.
Species/Race: Human-Alien-Mecha Colaboration. Ancient God of Shadow. The only Living Shadow ever created.
Personality/Description: He can be kind, he can be not. Due to a truamatized past(s), he hides himself by going as someone else. Kind and warm, hard to believe that he is like such, for being almost half-mechanized.
Bio: The main character of the story. He is the only known living survivor of an Alien invasion that wiped out his entire species and planet. During his early Childhood, he was seen as the bringer of Death, the whole cause of Destruction. The mark on his back frightened those that knew what it was. A fused child from birth, he not only had the original Gear blood, but also had the essenses from virtually every other being, living or not, making him a living treasure. His body was ripped in half during the invasion, but he miraculously survies, waking up in another area, unharmed.
He then, attemps to figure out the reason why he experienced such a "Dream." As he then figured out who was the one that restored his old body, he was robbed from it once again. A traveler as he normally claims to be, he searches for a certain Thing that he believes might aid him in figuring out about his pasts. He becomes, a soldier, machine pilot, knight, assassin, mercenary, bodyguard, student, etc. Very strong about his feeling at anyone, especially since he was isolated from every living being for as long as he can remember. Once, he fell very deeply in Love with a Human girl named, Minagi. With whom, he felt a very strong connection with her, he thought that she might be the one that could make his lives clear. He took her in his travels, making a vow that he would find a way to make peace and one day, spend the rest of his days next to her.
During his adventure throught the Galaxies, he found out that he was not the only one that was abused and violated for making experiments. He then saw that two of the UGA's most successful soldiers were, in fact, his Sisters/Daughters from his old memories, given the name X-Gears. As he constantly betrays the Military that created him, he was ordered to surrender or face Death. After having much to suffer before, he unanimously defied and declared War against them.
Being the only one that has a power that nobody has even grasped, he felt sure about his victory. Once the UGA discovered hidden documents based on Shade's Origins, his Creation, and even technology, the Military used their uncovered assets and created Mobile Suits, named Gunners. Machines with bipedal capabilities able to overpower any and all opponents. Once Shade knew of their newest creations, he made his choice to surprise them with a product of his Race's Technological Prowess. He then produced the Jewels, Machines with an Endless Supply of Plasma/Dark Matter Energy. As the Military saw his product, they were afraid that he would use it for Terrorrism, brutally slaying endless numbers of living beings. With constant warfare between the two, the UGA caught up with his yechnologies and designed their own Jewels. But with such limited supplies and Extreme conditions required to control the machines, their number were limited to only a handful of them.
Once, after an endless struggle for his Freedom, Shade decided to make his move and end things. He then Introduced his personal Jewel, The 'Immortal.' Once after a swift victory after his reveal, hte UGA decided to show their own Ace within. Once shown, nothing would ever be the same again...
-To be continued...- Theme Song: Zips -- LyricsSorry about all of this being uber long. sweatdrop
It's hard making a short story about my main character...
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 6:01 pm
thats why when I'm bored in class I pull out my book xD I'm too busy after school on gaia and trying to beat a stupid level on the new super mario bros. for wii.
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 5:56 pm
Hmm...Is it really that hard?
If so, then I should try it one day.
You're looking at a Veteran Mario Bros. player. Since Three.
I will defeat that game like If it was New Super Mario Bros. 3nodding
((Edit, I thought that you were talking about SPM. But still, I finished NSMB for the Wii a while ago. I just LOVE World 8-7. The Roller coaster of Death. ))
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 6:23 pm
Lol, to me it's IMPOSSIBLE!! I'm terrible at these type of games.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 6:02 pm
Any type of help you might need?
I've done it. I'm still playing it for some nostalgia.
I'll keep playing it.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 6:11 pm
I am the Mario MASTER!! I have played nearly every game!! and i said Nearly. only some i havn't played.
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 12:37 pm
l-General Guy-l I am the Mario MASTER!! I have played nearly every game!! and i said Nearly. only some i havn't played.
And I'm not saying that I'm the Master of Mario Games. But I do have an ability to master virtually ANY type of game I play in moments.
Ah, I remember when I used to beat Super Mario Bros, when I was just three years old... XD
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