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 Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:29 pm
Sin Fang Wenesia Aww Lar! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ And Vampyre, we don't know each other but I've seen your name around. I shall mish chu so mush! ~sniffles~ I'll join but I need to think of a story.. xDundefined don't ya mean sin? XD yes i know.. >.>" i swear i've gone bonkers at the time of typing that. xD ~ahem~ Edit: Aww Sin! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ Blah blah blah blah sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:50 pm
"I wish you were here Chris so I can drown you in my tears. I loved you how could you cheat on me?" Tina slurred. She takes a long swing of vodka, her poison of the night, down her throat.
"How long is it gonna take for me to become drunk?" she said to the empty space. No one was home she always was alone until Chris entered in her life but now he's gone too. She chugalugs the bottle until empty. Tina grabbed another bottle that wasn't to far away from her and burst into tears. Why can't she drink till she passes out? Why can't she forget!
“DAMN. U CHRIS! Baby I need you. You were the one the one that wasn't gonna hurt me You-" she clutch back anymore words, the tears and tried to swallow a fresh new toxin down. She staggers to her room, where she fell on her knees. When she reached the bed she grabbed a box and took out his picture and cried some more. She wish she could just drink herself to death but she drink just enough. Enough to get sick, enough just too past out but nothing more. It can't be anything more despite her pain and anguish she has to stay alive for
Her Chris.
"She doesn't love me anymore.” thought Chris to himself. The cold steel blade pressed against his wrist.
"Why can't I just do this? I can end all this pain in my life. I hold the key. I can make it end."
The first cut wasn't deep enough just a few moments of nothingness.
"TINA come save me!" screamed Chris
"I need you" he whispered the last part. The thought of the pain he caused Tina. The tears in her eyes, the gruesomeness of how he felt being caught with a girl he did not love He thinks back on the days she filled this void that's been engulfing him for so many years. She didn't wander a way when she found out he cut and he embraced her for it. But now she is gone. The abyss emptiness came back into his life and the only satisfaction; his only escape away from his apathies ways and loneliness was to let a sharp edge slice his skin. His wrist got the most abuse from this dark animus. Always so close, so near, his life at the tips of his fingers. Again he took a slash at his wrist. Pain fluster through him sweet relief flow like a river from his wrist too the cold callous ground, but it still was not deep enough. It's never deep enough despite the failure to his love and himself he still had to live. He has to stay alive for
His Tina.
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:55 pm
Are we limited to one entry?
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 11:06 pm
Story time~ heart
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Vampyre. She was a sweet girl whom everyone loved. She is always helpful and kind to others and would never look down on someone.
One day, Vampyre was walking down the road to meet up with her friends in Lending Hands town when she was stopped by someone. "Hello Miss. Can I trouble you with something?" With a smile, Vampyre said, "Sure. How can I help you?" The stranger that stopped her was a man dressed impeccably in a suit complete with a top hat. He had a mustache that curled up at the tips and a goatee which a small red bell hanging at the tip. "Why thank thee very much Miss. You see, I come from this place called Studies and the people there are called Students. Everyone has different personalities and characters but we are truly a big family despite our contrasting whims and fancies. But to cut my narration short, I would like to invite you to visit us."
The stranger's voice had a beautiful musical lilt and Vampyre was fascinated by it. "It certainly sounds very interesting, but I have never heard of the place nor know where it is. Can I bring my friends along too?", ask dear little Vampyre. When the stranger heard the word 'friends', he flinched a little and his eyes narrowed. But before, Vampyre could say anything, he regained his composure and said, "I am afraid not Miss. We are... shall we say, shy? people and Studies only invite outsiders to visit and people just can't simply come in."
Suddenly, a loud rumbling noise appeared out of nowhere. Oh no! Is there an earthquake? thought Vampyre when out of the blue, a strange vehicle driven by a creature covered in a cloak stopped in front of them. "Why, the.. bus is earlier than I expected. Shall we get on now? I am sure you'll love Studies and I promise you can visit your friends later on", rambled the stranger while gently steering Vampyre up the unusual contraption. "Umm ok", stuttered Vampyre who was still in shock.
Down the road the vehicle drove pass, turning right and poof! Lending Hands town disappeared. A road covered with yellow bricks appeared and the 'bus' appeared to hovering just above it while heading to Studies. "Where are we? Why are we here? What happened to the town?", asked poor confused Vampyre. Turning around, the stranger's face had changed! His eyes burnt a deep red and his skin was of a pale purple colour. "Why, I told you, we are going to Studies where the Students are. And now my dear, you are one of them". The stranger laughed maniacally and his hat fell off, revealing 3 horns protruding out from his head.
Moments later, they arrived at Studies and Vampyre was pushed off the 'bus' by the stranger who was in reality, the lord of Studies. "Welcome to Studies, little one. I shall see to it that your stay here will be fuuuunnnnn....~", drawled the lord. With an ashen face, Vampyre trembled in fear and asked, "Wha.. what am I suppose to do here?" Grinning at her and revealing fangs, the lord replied, "To be a Student of course. The objective here is to learn.. and learn.. and learn.. and learn until your brain explodes! AH HAHAHAHAHA!"Upon hearing that, Vampyre screamed and screamed until...
..she fell out of bed. A dream! A nightmare! It was horrible! She stumbled towards the bathroom and looked into the mirror. Vampyre saw herself looking pale and haggard. I need love... She splashed her face with some water and went back to her room. Oh I know!
She turned her computer on and logged into Gaia. Quickly clicking her 'Quick Links' open, she immediately headed for The Lending Hands guild and saw all her friends there. Vampyre posted her nightmare up in 'Chatterbox' and received so much love from her Gaia family. She smiled and finally climbed back into bed, falling into a beautiful dream of being surrounded by her 'family'.
THE END
It's rather sucky.. I hope you like it though.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:52 am
Wenesia Sin Fang Wenesia Aww Lar! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ And Vampyre, we don't know each other but I've seen your name around. I shall mish chu so mush! ~sniffles~ I'll join but I need to think of a story.. xDundefined don't ya mean sin? XD yes i know.. >.>" i swear i've gone bonkers at the time of typing that. xD ~ahem~ Edit: Aww Sin! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ Blah blah blah blah sweatdrop ahahaha no worries I don't mind XD I go bonkers all the time <3
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 9:21 am
Sin Fang Wenesia Sin Fang Wenesia Aww Lar! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ And Vampyre, we don't know each other but I've seen your name around. I shall mish chu so mush! ~sniffles~ I'll join but I need to think of a story.. xDundefined don't ya mean sin? XD yes i know.. >.>" i swear i've gone bonkers at the time of typing that. xD ~ahem~ Edit: Aww Sin! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ Blah blah blah blah sweatdrop ahahaha no worries I don't mind XD I go bonkers all the time <3 yay~ *glomps sin* <3
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:08 pm
Wenesia Story time~ heart Once upon a time, there was a girl named Vampyre. She was a sweet girl whom everyone loved. She is always helpful and kind to others and would never look down on someone.
One day, Vampyre was walking down the road to meet up with her friends in Lending Hands town when she was stopped by someone. "Hello Miss. Can I trouble you with something?" With a smile, Vampyre said, "Sure. How can I help you?" The stranger that stopped her was a man dressed impeccably in a suit complete with a top hat. He had a mustache that curled up at the tips and a goatee which a small red bell hanging at the tip. "Why thank thee very much Miss. You see, I come from this place called Studies and the people there are called Students. Everyone has different personalities and characters but we are truly a big family despite our contrasting whims and fancies. But to cut my narration short, I would like to invite you to visit us."
The stranger's voice had a beautiful musical lilt and Vampyre was fascinated by it. "It certainly sounds very interesting, but I have never heard of the place nor know where it is. Can I bring my friends along too?", ask dear little Vampyre. When the stranger heard the word 'friends', he flinched a little and his eyes narrowed. But before, Vampyre could say anything, he regained his composure and said, "I am afraid not Miss. We are... shall we say, shy? people and Studies only invite outsiders to visit and people just can't simply come in."
Suddenly, a loud rumbling noise appeared out of nowhere. Oh no! Is there an earthquake? thought Vampyre when out of the blue, a strange vehicle driven by a creature covered in a cloak stopped in front of them. "Why, the.. bus is earlier than I expected. Shall we get on now? I am sure you'll love Studies and I promise you can visit your friends later on", rambled the stranger while gently steering Vampyre up the unusual contraption. "Umm ok", stuttered Vampyre who was still in shock.
Down the road the vehicle drove pass, turning right and poof! Lending Hands town disappeared. A road covered with yellow bricks appeared and the 'bus' appeared to hovering just above it while heading to Studies. "Where are we? Why are we here? What happened to the town?", asked poor confused Vampyre. Turning around, the stranger's face had changed! His eyes burnt a deep red and his skin was of a pale purple colour. "Why, I told you, we are going to Studies where the Students are. And now my dear, you are one of them". The stranger laughed maniacally and his hat fell off, revealing 3 horns protruding out from his head.
Moments later, they arrived at Studies and Vampyre was pushed off the 'bus' by the stranger who was in reality, the lord of Studies. "Welcome to Studies, little one. I shall see to it that your stay here will be fuuuunnnnn....~", drawled the lord. With an ashen face, Vampyre trembled in fear and asked, "Wha.. what am I suppose to do here?" Grinning at her and revealing fangs, the lord replied, "To be a Student of course. The objective here is to learn.. and learn.. and learn.. and learn until your brain explodes! AH HAHAHAHAHA!"Upon hearing that, Vampyre screamed and screamed until...
..she fell out of bed. A dream! A nightmare! It was horrible! She stumbled towards the bathroom and looked into the mirror. Vampyre saw herself looking pale and haggard. I need love... She splashed her face with some water and went back to her room. Oh I know!
She turned her computer on and logged into Gaia. Quickly clicking her 'Quick Links' open, she immediately headed for The Lending Hands guild and saw all her friends there. Vampyre posted her nightmare up in 'Chatterbox' and received so much love from her Gaia family. She smiled and finally climbed back into bed, falling into a beautiful dream of being surrounded by her 'family'.
THE ENDIt's rather sucky.. I hope you like it though.. sweatdrop hahahaha!!! That's flippin fantastic. Ten points! <3
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 3:26 pm
You shall be missed ; _;
[hugs]
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 4:01 pm
~WARNING~ THE FOLLOWING WILL MOST LIKELY BE WEIRD, SINCE I HAVE NO PLOT, xp AND THIS IS RIGHT OF THE TOP OF MY HEAD~WARNING~
Once upon a time,
there was a girl named Vampyre, she liked flowers, and cupcakes, and puppy dawgs, and her happy legion of friends called Lending Hands. Soon, the legion learned of
her leaving them, and they were devastated. Vampyre gave away ALL her stuff, and a few particular legionair
named Sin Fang and Muisann, fell into depresion. They would miss their friend. The two right hand people of Vamype were named Miss Kayasha
and Yandere-yuki. They advised her not to invade Collegetopia with out help, (or items for that matter) but Vampyre had made up her mind. She gatherd her forces in her
mind called "knowledge", and set off, she knew the legion would be fine, but she'd still check on them to feed them, and tell them stories of Collegetopia.
The End
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 4:39 pm
illegal s t o p sign Wenesia Story time~ heart Once upon a time, there was a girl named Vampyre. She was a sweet girl whom everyone loved. She is always helpful and kind to others and would never look down on someone.
One day, Vampyre was walking down the road to meet up with her friends in Lending Hands town when she was stopped by someone. "Hello Miss. Can I trouble you with something?" With a smile, Vampyre said, "Sure. How can I help you?" The stranger that stopped her was a man dressed impeccably in a suit complete with a top hat. He had a mustache that curled up at the tips and a goatee which a small red bell hanging at the tip. "Why thank thee very much Miss. You see, I come from this place called Studies and the people there are called Students. Everyone has different personalities and characters but we are truly a big family despite our contrasting whims and fancies. But to cut my narration short, I would like to invite you to visit us."
The stranger's voice had a beautiful musical lilt and Vampyre was fascinated by it. "It certainly sounds very interesting, but I have never heard of the place nor know where it is. Can I bring my friends along too?", ask dear little Vampyre. When the stranger heard the word 'friends', he flinched a little and his eyes narrowed. But before, Vampyre could say anything, he regained his composure and said, "I am afraid not Miss. We are... shall we say, shy? people and Studies only invite outsiders to visit and people just can't simply come in."
Suddenly, a loud rumbling noise appeared out of nowhere. Oh no! Is there an earthquake? thought Vampyre when out of the blue, a strange vehicle driven by a creature covered in a cloak stopped in front of them. "Why, the.. bus is earlier than I expected. Shall we get on now? I am sure you'll love Studies and I promise you can visit your friends later on", rambled the stranger while gently steering Vampyre up the unusual contraption. "Umm ok", stuttered Vampyre who was still in shock.
Down the road the vehicle drove pass, turning right and poof! Lending Hands town disappeared. A road covered with yellow bricks appeared and the 'bus' appeared to hovering just above it while heading to Studies. "Where are we? Why are we here? What happened to the town?", asked poor confused Vampyre. Turning around, the stranger's face had changed! His eyes burnt a deep red and his skin was of a pale purple colour. "Why, I told you, we are going to Studies where the Students are. And now my dear, you are one of them". The stranger laughed maniacally and his hat fell off, revealing 3 horns protruding out from his head.
Moments later, they arrived at Studies and Vampyre was pushed off the 'bus' by the stranger who was in reality, the lord of Studies. "Welcome to Studies, little one. I shall see to it that your stay here will be fuuuunnnnn....~", drawled the lord. With an ashen face, Vampyre trembled in fear and asked, "Wha.. what am I suppose to do here?" Grinning at her and revealing fangs, the lord replied, "To be a Student of course. The objective here is to learn.. and learn.. and learn.. and learn until your brain explodes! AH HAHAHAHAHA!"Upon hearing that, Vampyre screamed and screamed until...
..she fell out of bed. A dream! A nightmare! It was horrible! She stumbled towards the bathroom and looked into the mirror. Vampyre saw herself looking pale and haggard. I need love... She splashed her face with some water and went back to her room. Oh I know!
She turned her computer on and logged into Gaia. Quickly clicking her 'Quick Links' open, she immediately headed for The Lending Hands guild and saw all her friends there. Vampyre posted her nightmare up in 'Chatterbox' and received so much love from her Gaia family. She smiled and finally climbed back into bed, falling into a beautiful dream of being surrounded by her 'family'.
THE ENDIt's rather sucky.. I hope you like it though.. sweatdrop hahahaha!!! That's flippin fantastic. Ten points! <3 tee hee.. thankies heart
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 6:47 pm
Wenesia Sin Fang Wenesia Sin Fang Wenesia Aww Lar! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ And Vampyre, we don't know each other but I've seen your name around. I shall mish chu so mush! ~sniffles~ I'll join but I need to think of a story.. xDundefined don't ya mean sin? XD yes i know.. >.>" i swear i've gone bonkers at the time of typing that. xD ~ahem~ Edit: Aww Sin! That's so sweet.. I feel moved. @_@ Blah blah blah blah sweatdrop ahahaha no worries I don't mind XD I go bonkers all the time <3 yay~ *glomps sin* <3 EP! ninja *adds you to friend's list* XD
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 1:24 pm
These are great stories guys, but didn't you know that they don't HAVE to be about me? They are all very good! And funny!
I'm doing some pre-judging because I think I should be saying something by this point. These aren't my final words on the peices. If you want you can go back and edit to make them better. this is just my opinion and if I sound harsh, I don't mean to be. I'm just a stickler with this sort of thing. Especially fiction stories. o.o
Sin This story was surprisingly touching. I got a lump in my throat from it.
Muisann It was great and very sad with nice detail. It was my favorite so far.
Matridom Not the best I've read. Frankly, it wasn't as litterate as I would have liked. Litterate is writing without * for sequences and actions, and there is more detail and longer sentences. This one was my least favorite.
Wenesia Very cute. I especially like how your lord of studies was the equivilant of the devil. I laughed at that.
IdiotaVolpe Why yes, I do like cupcakes and puppies. I liked the story, but I'd like you to write another entry too. One that doesn't involve me. I didn't mind it, but I was sensing too much of a pattern. . . . o.o
This goes for everyone.
I think I'll start round two?
As I said. You may enter a new one or revamp the one you did in this round. The same rules apply for the 2nd round. New contestants are welcomed. I don't kick anyone out of the contest. I just voice my opinions and you can choose to improve your work or just write something new.
Remember, I am ending the contest on April 14th. I judge the 15th and then I will leave you. Have fun and good luck.
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:57 am
aww.. thanks vampyre.. ^-^ i'll post a new one instead since my twist in the story has been exposed.. >.> back to the old drawing board.. *sits in a corner to think of story* 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:41 am
well I only did ya because that's all I could think of for random I'll get cracking to think of one without ya XD
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:33 pm
Sin, can my story's main charecter be you? surprised
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