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 Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:34 pm
130.5//150 diino: 9.8.9.9.8=43 many many textures... i think starting with this one im just not going to comment on the fabulous entrys XD because this is taking to long and you guys can all just take the silence as YAY IM FABULOUS k? Autio: 8.9.9.10.8 = 44 So awesome it's hard to look at. So many little white dots... x.x. Anyway, the only thing that's bothering me is the ritzy hairpin, it's a bigger chunk of black than anywhere else. Lin: 8 9 9 9.5 8 = 43.5 Wow, another stunning example of amazing textures making up for an otherwise boring color scheme. This is ridiculously well layered, I can't even begin to comprehend how you did it. I second Autio's comment about the Ritzy headpiece, but that's pretty much the only technical complaint I have to make. Good job.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:40 pm
115//150 diino: 7.7.7.7.7=35 this is quite good but i feel that you could have added to it. it just feels incomplete. Autio: 8.9.7.8.8 = 40 This is super cute, but the skin balance is wacky and a couple of the golds don't seem to fit. Reve headband is a little bright, but nice use of the chocolate browns. Lin: 7.5 8.5 9 8 7 = 40 It's pretty, and I like the shade of brown you used. (And how well you matched said brown) It could be a little bit more creative theme-wise, since right now it's mostly just a matching avatar. But then again, there's nothing really wrong with that. Skin balance is off, but it doesn't bother me all that much since you were smart enough to pick a skin tone that blends in. I also like the matching textures on the white items.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:58 pm
92.5//150 PepsiBunny 2 redface  redface diino: 7.6.6.5.6=30 BOTTOM HEAVY just slightly, the skin/clothing ratio is very off, also watch your colors. Autio: 6.7.6.5.6 = 30 Skin balance is bothering me a lot. Black gloves would have probably made it bearable. Love the head, the rest is just kind of meh. Nonexistent layering and wonky shades. Lin: 6 7 7 6 6.5 = 32.5 First off, I adore the color scheme. I also like the layering on the head, but I do have several problems with this. There's not much creativity in your layering, and the yellows are not very well matched. The star base makes it bottom heavy. And did you use two Classilkes? That's never a good thing, and it's hard to get away with unless the items are disguised through layering. Also, you really really need something on the arms, and some purple on the torso.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 5:01 pm
131.5//150 catastroph-c I'm the 29th contestant and this is my entry for
Round 1:
Total Value: 1,417,634 Gold, 330,000 Tickets
[Item Information] diino: 9.10.9.10.8=46 Autio: 8.9.9.10.8 = 44 Wow. The detail in this is impressive. The only thing I'm not liking are the horns, they ruin the flow and detail in one fell swoop. Lin 8 8 8 9 8.5 = 41.5 Lol, you didn't need to include the price info. : D Well anyway, this is a really nice entry. I like the layering a lot. The color scheme is saved by the interesting shade of brown you used. I really like how the horns echo the color and shape of the thing she's holding in her right hand, though the horns do make this a bit top heavy. Gold shades are kinda off.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 5:09 pm
94//150 diino: 5.6.5.6.5=27 the color distribution isint of high quality Autio: 8.9.7.7.7 = 38 This is really cute. Face is kind plain, and the reve headband is too bright. Also, double armlets is a major faux pas. Lin: 5.5 6.5 7 5 5 = 29 Haha, more price info. Okay. What I like is how you used those shades of yellow and brown, and matched both fairly well. (With the exception of the armlets and the bit of yellow/gold on the Bian jacket.) What I don't like is that there's hardly any layering and not much creativity. Skin balance is also off. An easy fix would have been to leave off the white leggings and layer some white shoes under the yellow slippers. Also, the Reve headband is way too bright.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 5:11 pm
30.5//150 diino:6.4.6.4.5=25 this is a poor quality avatar it's unattractive and is very setish, two bold items are from a set the robe and slippers, two items usually isint bad but they are two bold MAIN items, the balance is bad and the over all distribution is poor. Autio: 7.6.6.5.6 = 30 Gold seems unnecessary. Good job with the pinks, not so much with the blues, and it's kind of puffy looking. Layering is your friend, maybe try and ramp it up a bit in the future. Lin: 6 5 6.5 4 4 = 25.5 Ehhh....I don't really know what you were going for with this. It's very confusing. The items chosen make me think you were going for matching more than theme, but the matching isn't great outside of the pinks. I don't get the face at all. The only place you really tried to layer is the feet, which is dissapointing. Also, waayyy too much gold on the top half, compared to the bottom half.
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:16 pm
87//150 diino: 6.7.6.7.7=33 i think the urn is unneeded color wise but does add a bit of flair, it helps keep shape with the gown bottom and kokeshi sleaves, the layering is a good mixture between complexity and simplicity, she looks very elagant, and the face is nice but you shouldent think that just because the masquerade makeup poses are small that they are unoticable, which makes her face setish. 7.6.5.5.6 = 29 I'm just not a fan. The layering is awkward, none of your shades match, and it kind of of feels rushed. Lin: 5 4.5 4 5.5 6 = 25 The only thing I like kinda like about this is the layering of the torso. I'm sorry, but it's not up to par. Nothing really matches (especially the purples), you have random pink on the head, and skin balance is a big monkey wrench in the cogs. Theme is....okay, but it's very overused. Maybe it would help to replace the pink on the head with white, and put the geisha makeup on the face.
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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:18 pm
72//150 diino: 6.4.4.6.4=24 the layering is decent at best there is no theme and NOTHING matches. it's also a bit top heavy. Autio: 6.5.4.5.5 = 25 I have no idea what you were going for. Distribution and skin balance is awkward, your shades are really wonky, and it looks like it's about to tip over. Where'd you get the bright idea of orange shoes? xD Lin: 5 4 4 5 5 = 23 Ooooh, no. Sorry. I'm offput immediately by how nothing matches, not even the blacks, and how very topheavy this is. Theme is very confusing, and I have absolutely no clue why you used those shoes. They're a completely different color than the rest of the avatar, plus tektek's foot-shape-modifying-shoe glitch always looks awkward. Also, skin balance, please.
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:54 pm
94.5//150 sushi_roll7 Sorry it took so long, I'm on vacation and I barely ever get to use the internet. But anyways, I stayed up all night making this avvie, so I hope you guys like it >>  Total Value: 3,270,720 Gold [Item Information] diino: 7.6.6.7.6=32 i adore the torso of this avatar however you are top heavy and alot of your shades are off the skirt REALLY pops out in a bad way. i think if you would have made the lower half as artistic as the top you would have been much more impressive. Autio: 7.6.5.6.6 = 30 I dunno what to think of this. I want to like it, it's creative, but that skirt, coocoon stockings, and the purple strings behind the head just make me want to blow 'em up. Lin: 7 6 6 6.5 7 = 32.5 I'm kind of conflicted about this one. There are good things about it, like the layering on the torso, the color scheme, and the repetion from the wings on the feet, back and head. But your shades are off, and the purple ribbons on the head and the blue gems on the skirt stick out a lot. Try to work on your matching, in the future, since I do see potential in you.
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:56 pm
97.5//150 diino:4.5.5.7.6=27 i've seen this avatar many times, not exactly but the same look the same emphasized items it's safe and unoriganal but still put together well.. it's just another avatar. Autio: 8.9.7.6.9 = 39 This is adorable, and I love the matched-style feeling. Your purples are a little off, pink kind of dies after the feet, and I don't see the purpose of the owl. Lin: 5 6 6.5 6 8 = 31.5 It's pretty cute, but I feel like you should have worked a lot more on it. You're going in a good direction, but right now this lacks originality, matching and flow. I like how well the yellows are matched, but the purples and greens aren't so good. Also, you definitely need some pink on the top half. And that owl throws off the balance so much, just taking it out would help.
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:56 pm
102.5//150 diino: 7.7.9.8.6=37 i actually really like this avatar you matched the different shades of blue's and nice layering the only thing i dont like is the clunky shoes bad choice. Autio: 7.7.7.6.6 = 33 Not the best, but not terrible either. It looks chubby. A couple of your blues don't seem to fit, the head is really bare, and the shoes are like bricks. Also, skin balance is off. Lin: 6 6.5 7 7 6 = 32.5 Kind of on the fence about this. A lot of your blues are off, and I'm confused about some of your item choices. (The eye patch, the boots) Skin balance is also off. What I do like is that your blacks match, as all of them are actually slightly lighter than a true black.
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:58 pm
101//150 ZOMnomnom b i e z hope you like C: this is really an avi that i like a ton. i try to have my tekteks look cute, cluttered, & colors proportioned.  Autio: 5.8.7.7.7 = 34 This is rather typical, to be honest. It's cute and fairly well-matched other than the hair and the slippers, but I've seen it so many times it's kind of boring. Diino: 5.6.7.7.7=32 i agree completely with Autio also the balance is a little off. Lin: 6 7.5 9 6.5 7 = 35 Well it is cute, and the colors are pretty well distributed. I don't know about clutter, but clutter (does not necessarily) = complexity and quality. Just wanted to point that out. It's technically good, in its matching, etc. But as the other judges mentioned, it's really pretty unoriginal. The item choices are very typical and the color scheme is formulaic and safe. Also, using a full set of Egyptian arm/anklets is usually a no-no.
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:48 pm
105//150 Diino: 7.8.8.6.5=34 top heavy, simple but cute! Autio: 7.8.7.6.8 = 36 I dunno what to think of this. Tiny feet & big head make it feel tipsy. I love your subtle shades, but the wings don't seem to fit. It's cute in a sad sort of way. Your colors kind of come in blocks. Lin: 6 7 8.5 6 7.5 = 35 Firstly, I have to second Autio and Diino and say that this very top heavy, especially with the small feet. It's also pretty safe, though I do like that you used very subtly different shades of gray and matched them rather well. I like the layering of items around the shoulder area. Try a nice, vibrant color scheme and you could have something really nice.
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:46 pm
91//150 diino: 7.6.5.6.6=30 i like that your avi is based off the hat, but the items you used werent once i would have, they dont make sence and there are MANY colors that dont even really make sence or match ANYTHING you say. Autio: 7.6.6.6.6 = 31 You used some REALLY strange items. xD Not a fan of the alruna or the heartbreaker, the glasses are weird, and the shoes don't match. You also kind of ignored the tan in the toadstool skirt. diino: Lin: 6.5 6 7 5 5.5 = 30 Hmmm....well, I like the color scheme, it's original and bold. I also like that you went for an unusual item like that hat, but then I really think using such an item opens the door for making a really wacky, unique and creative avatar. The avatar as a whole is kind of "eh", with the strange item choices and other technical problems. I have to mention that I like the repetion of pattern in the "teeth" around the edge of the hat and the spiky collar thing. I wish you had continued that through to the bottom.
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