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 Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:12 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:14 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:15 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:20 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:22 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:23 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:42 pm
your peoms are good, however, they caould use a little work. but, you had said that you just recently started writing poetry so do not give up on it. heart
~~meremortal
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Your_NewLunarDoll Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:14 pm
Wow you have a really great imagination :'D really original. You just started, so your form will improve, but imo the most important thing is the ideas behind the poems and you seem to have them in spades ^^
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