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 Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 3:27 am
It looks cool.
I still don't know what the story is going to be about, but I've got time =]
I do suggest to use a little more sound effects, this way looks a little flat sometimes and makes you take longer to understand what's happening
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 7:07 pm
Chapter 1 is being posted. This is the beginning of the actual story.
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 4:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:40 am
It looks very nice!
But why don't you have an archive? It's no fun clicking 'previous' 5 times just so I can start where I left off. I couldn't help but read a lil before I even got to the first page.
Ah yes, the only thing I didn't like as much. On the first page, the spready thing for chapter one, the pose of the woman is a little off. It doesn't look natural and you can't figure out what the situation is at all because of it
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