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 Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:00 pm
Sorry guys for lagging out. Had a new story that I got hit over the head with inspiration for and so had been working on that instead. I will try to get "The sickness" done before bed. No guarantees though, I've been rather busy and my boyfriend goes to bed hours before I do leaving me to be online, in the dark, or on his computer which doesn't have the story on it.
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:19 pm
The feelings put into this story is strong. It convays a certain sorrow for the family. And Sydy/Sid have such courage and strength to do leave in order to help the family. I love it.
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 8:32 pm
Bump to get it back into the top few. I'd love more feedback!
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:55 pm
I liked your story. It had very good description. I was confused with what happened to the character...What exactly happened? And why did the character run away?
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 9:09 pm
Alright, her father died, and her mom was working two jobs and still couldn't support the family because of the additional costs of death. The main character sees this, and feels really bad, but decides she can't do anything about it as a woman, because of the wage differences. Therefore she chooses to change her appearance to that of a boy. She ran because of all of the emotions from changing her identity, fear of her family seeing her, and then because her mother mistakes her for her father during the brief amount of time that she had woken.
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:52 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 4:39 pm
I loved your story. I felt as though you could almost feel thet same pains Sydney was going through as she bacame Sid. It would be very interesting to find out what happens durring Sids journey and what the outcome ends up being
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