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 Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:20 pm
Four more shops and five more points to level up
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:21 pm
Mm. -licks the candy-
-pats- Go heal at your base! <3
Jack O' Lantern...COMPLETE! It looks ghoulish. Ah feel accomplished. Pictures will be posted later.
-works on uploading the picture he spoke of earlier-
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:24 pm
DX -wants to use a strong attack for once!=
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:30 pm
Aw. -hugs- -remembers the thrill of using strong attacks- Make sure to use your rage points for it! -motherhen-
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:39 pm
I do and I still miss =
Is there a rage attack with 80%?
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:42 pm
How many ranks each? I just became an apprentice
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:43 pm
10 or 11. You go up every 25 points.
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:47 pm
O_O!!! WTF?
-serves an alcoholic beverage from the mystical realm- Get your grog!
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:49 pm
Ne?
-declines the grog and goes straight for the pinot noir-
-finally remembers to start uploading the freaking image-
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:52 pm
Too many levels....
-drinks it all down- Apple Cider flavor! XD
-reads- I c/p it to my word processor so I can read it better
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 8:53 pm
I made it; you can too!
-drinks a white wine-
Aw.
-uploaded the picture- A rough sketch but still amazingly gorgeous. <3
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:01 pm
Read it, can't give it a full opinion until all chapters are read.
Just to point out one error.
You see, not five minutes earlier, Corlissa had noticed her teacher mistakingly writing the wrong answer to a question on the blackboard. Not wanting her to give the wrong information to those less informed, Corlissa politely raised her hand, as all little girls and boys should do in class, and waited to be called upon.
Mistakinly should be Mistakenly
and since this is written in past tense, shouldn't writing be wrote?
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:07 pm
Actually, the word can be spelled 'mistakingly' or 'mistakenly'.
No. Corlissa noticed her teaching performing an action. It could also be written as "Corlissa had noticed as her teacher mistakingly wrote the wrong answer" but the way I wrote it is acceptable, I believe. I'm quite confident in that, in fact.
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:10 pm
Hmmm, okay. The way you wrote makes it seem it's gonna probe minds like some Brit novels. So the flow works.
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