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Honh

PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:10 pm


(why do I do this for you....)

A tall man, wearing a causual suit under a long brown trenchcoat opened the door from his car. As he stood up, he immediately took out a smoke a lit it. He squinted his eyes as he tried to make sense as to why he was woken up so early in the morning. The police chief said it was important, but that would really be up to his own mind. He watched as the other officers scramble to clear the area so that no one else would see what heinous crime had been committed.

Calmly, the detective of the 5th squad of the CPD walked under the yellow tape that had isolated the crime scene. As he walked closer, he prepared himself to see some kind of vile, mutulated body, but was surprised to see a young woman, just lying there. There were no scars, no bruises, no indication that this was murder. So why did they wake him up again?

"What do you we have here?" He asked kneeling close to the corpse as a medical examiner took a look at her body. "I don't know for sure. As you can see, there was no indication that this was a murder. We'll need to take her into the lab and perform an autopsy before we can be sure. However, the others did find this..." He said showing the detective her lightsaber in a bag. "She's a Force-user?" the detective asked confused. "Aren't them Jedis suppose to take care of their own?" "She ain't no Jedi." The M.E. replied. "I believe she's from the Ordinis Empire, with how she dresses, and plus her lightsaber blade's color indicates so as well."

The detective looked perplexed. Though he was trained when this kind of thing happened, this would only be his third time. "Alright, let's get this cleared up. Take her and do whatever you need to. Also, contact them Jedis and make sure they send a rep." The detective rose up and took a look beyond her body and into the view. "Oh yeah, make sure the media doesn't get a hold of this...." He said lastly as he began to look at the crime scene himself.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:13 pm


The receptionist brought her the manila folder. "This guy said it was a tape of a murder." The receptionist waited near her editor as she opened the folder. What was running in her mind at that time was, "This will definitely get me promoted. As long as I could remember, I had always wanted to be a reporter..." "Well?" She asked in a kind of hurried way.

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Lilyrei

PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:22 pm


As the chief watched the fight between the Jedi and the Ordinis she became concerned but excited. I could retire after this. Is the kid who made this still here?
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 1:15 pm


[was that a question to me?]

"Uh...." she said. In all the excitement, the receptionist had totally forgotten about the young man. "I'll go see. But, are we going to air this or not? There hasn't been any kind of report coming from the police or anything like that, so..." The receptionist finally got her scoop. This was it. This video will finally get her to leave her desk job and become a real reporter. She could not wait to see some action.

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Lilyrei

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 12:45 am


"Alright. I want this thing shown everywhere. And take a crew down there to get the first statements from the police." The receptionist looked thrilled. "Don't blow this. And the next time a Jedi sneezes I'd better have some report about it!" The chief shouted as her eager assistant ran from the room.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:48 am


She walked the streets with Suna in tow. In the end they had decided against going to the temple.

Suna, I need to talk to you about something

"What is it? Whats bothering you?"

The truth is Suna, I'm dying...it's a genetic diease from my side of the family and I'm sorry, but you carry it to. I don't know how long I have left. If I don't finish your training then I know someone who would finish your training with you, or you could move on and join your uncle in his line of work...though I don't know if you'd want to, knowing what you now know

"Mama, I would like to continue with this course, but I feel that I would be inclined to join Uncle Servus"

She smiled and pushed a stray lock of hair out of the childs face. She would die for this one and her brother. True, love was meant to be despised by the sith, but she couldn't help maternal instinct. She had tried for the last 2 years and it hadn't worked.

Do you want to go home?

Suna nodded and walked back towards the ship with her mother. Though, something tugged her in a different direction.

Hang on; what's over here, shall we go look?

The girl hesitated for a moment but slowly nodded and they walked towards an area. When it came into full-view she saw, and felt, why. There was a body; she didn't recognise it at first, but the feeling in the air was charged with it. Ordinus.

Noctis...it can't have been anyone else, only he would go so low as to...I suppose I did agree to it though

She felt the wind stir and without warning it swept the hood off her head and the clasp snapped, the silk rippled away in the wind. Something banged painfully against her leg, she couldn't remember at first, but then it struck her. She has placed her saber on her belt in case she had needed it.

She wanted to leave, but was rooted to the spot. She couldn't believe...in the middle of the street...was he stupid?

broken_joker


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:36 pm


The droid disguised as a human finally reach his last destination. It was the post office of sort, but they would deliver for any and all customers as long as they paid the right price. Of course, the true name of these couriers are called smugglers, but what is in a name?

Entering the cantina, 2X went towards the bar. He sat next to a fuzzy looking Wookie. He was there, just chilling and drinking an alcoholic beverage. "Can you bring something for me to the Ordinis Empire?" the droid asked in normal english to the fuzzy creature. "I'll do anything for the right price." He replied, not looking at the droid. 2X smiled and slid him the manila folder. "How much would your service cost?" The droid replied next. "Depends on the package and how far."

"A small manila folder, to Empress Constance of the Ordinis Empire. How much will that cost?" The Wookie smiled and finally faced the droid. "Two hundred thousand credits. That's dangerous space to be flying in the first place, and then you want me to go to the Empress. Heh, that package must be very important." The droid stood sat silently, as if he was trying to figure out what to do, when in his mind, he already knew. "So what'll it be little man?" The Wookie asked. "Do it within three days and you got it plus an added bonus." 2X replied with a nod. The wookie raised an eyebrow. "What kind of bonus?" he asked a little bit more intrigued." "Another hundred thousand credits, making your full payment three hundred thousand. How does that sound?" He asked. The wookied grab hold of 2X's shoulder and nodded. 2X then handed him the folder. "I'll transfer one-fourth to you now, the rest once you give me confirmation. Deal?" The wookie was so preoccupied about the amount, that he didn't even mind the droid only transferring one fourth as payment.

In all actuality, 2X could only pay that much. He was hoping that the Ordinis would kill him right after seeing the video. The droid smirked as he left the cantina and swiftly took a cab to get to the hanger bay. The third hour was about to be complete. Soon his master's plan wil finish and the humans of this filthy planet would die. The droid could not wait.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:45 pm


Medical Examiner's Office

The detective finally came to the M.E.'s office after looking at the crime scene for himself. Unfotunately, he could find anything that would indicate who would could have done this murder. There were not foot prints or the such, only saber marks their lightsabers created as they fought, or so he concluded.

As he entered, he saw another dectective there already. "Hey," he said. "Are we still waiting for the body to be finished, or what?"

Honh


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 4:01 pm


The medical examiner walked over to the body and put his gloves on. He then went down towards the face and opened one of the eye lids and flashed his flashlight in the dead womans eyes. He then opened her mouth and took a small tube and took out a some saliva. He then looked to the cuts and bruises and said. "These brutal marks..." He said looking at the way they were cut. "I've seen this before...but not by a sith...a Jedi infact." He said as he looked around the corpse and then went up to his desk and put the bag down with the items he collected and then took out a needle. He went over to the body and drew blood from the womans body. He then put it in another containment bag and then took out another needle with a special solution in it and injected it in her body and then went over and turned off the light as her body started to glow. "Thats her force energy as you can see it hardly has color because shes an ordinis....but you see that on her chest there is blue marks...thats a jedi's force energy." He said smartly.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 4:05 pm


"So a Jedi killed her?" He asked not too convinced. The Jedi are suppose to be peaceful people. Protectors of the peace, much like he was. Why would they do such a thing? "How did she die? I had a look at her body in the crime scene and there were not indication of her being stabbed." The detective was getting caustious about this. Is there some conspiracy coming about? He didn't like this at all, but as an enforcer of peace, he had to find out the truth.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 4:09 pm


The medical examiner looked at the detective and said. "Yes a Jedi killed her...and didn't kill her just any way...the jedi killed her with an asssain technique mixed with force energy." He said as he pointed to the blue dots on her chest. "See thats where she was killed at...."
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:24 pm


The detective looked shocked. However, it wasn't because of what the M.E. was showing her, it was because he hadn't opened her up yet. "Wow, are you new or anything?" He asked sort of sarcastically. "Because usually, the other M.E. would finish the autopsy before telling me how they think a victim died. So, with that being said, I'll wait outside until you are one hundred percent sure a Jedi killed her." He didn't want to seem rude, but the kid seemed pretty new at this kind of thing. Anyway, he went back outside the office and would wait there until the kid or anyone else would cut up the body and tell him what really happened.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:35 am


It wasn't really nessicary for him to cut up the body to find the evidence because it wasn't really anything in the blood stream except for the same thing he just showed him. "I'm sorry detective...but this is new technology and it would be pointless if I opened up the body seeing as this system is 99.9% correct when dealing with force users and Assaisns." He stated and then went back over to the table and then dropped a droplet of blood on a tablet and then sealed it up as he put it under a slide which he then looked into the microscope to see if anything was in the blood.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:01 am


[I think he wants you to say to him Si'Ti's heart exploded inside of her, hahaha XD]

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broken_joker

PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:22 am


She picked Suna up and walked away. She was aware of people moving away from her as she walked back to her flyer.

The world was going quiet and little dots played in front of her eyes. She felt her legs growing heavy and heard only her breathing. But she was nearly there. She put Suna down and climbed in, beckoning for her daughter to join her. She leant back and closed her eyes, her skin was cold and clammy.

Though with in moments she had returned to normal...or at least as normal as she would ever be.

"Can we go Mama?"

"Yes...I think that would be best"
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