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 Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 1:20 am
ObsidianSnake Kairos Obsidian: There is no if with that bio. xd But yeah, be patient people. ^^ Most of the leaders aren't on 24/7 (or even half that much) so it *might* take a day or so to get feedback on your bio from the leader of the clan you want to be in. Eh? I make a bad bio? Well it looked like Earth was lacking in members whereas Life and Death were flourishing. No no of course not. I meant that it was a GOOD bio. heart
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 2:38 am
Wow, we're being freakin' ACTIVE here. xd
Newbies who write decent bios, and oldbies who are helpful and do a good job... You guys make me proud! crying xp
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:07 am
Glad everyone else is having such luck! I'm getting pmed bios from iliterates..who are older than me! crying
I've declined three people so far, told them they need to change everything a lot if they ever want to be accepted into my clan..damnit. The only good bio that's been pmed to me so far is from Neko. gonk
Obsidian pmed me with a bio, but I see he changed over to Earth.. domokun He was good too.. cry
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:18 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:23 am
Name: Rupin Linus
Gender: Male
Clan: Earth
Class: Grappler
Element: Rock
Personality: Though semmingly brutish and large on the outside, Rupin is a
very quiet, thoughtful and considerate man. He is always helping
those in need, and is loyal through and through to the cause he
chooses. He has a reputation for looseing his temper but hes
usually a nice guy! Hes very social and always up for a laugh, but takes his work seriously whatever it may be.
History: Rupin was raised by his Uncle from the age of 3, because his
parents where executed for "treason against the crown". When Rupin was 18, his Uncle died of a strange illness, which wiped out the
whole village but ignored Rupin. Hes been wandering the land and working for different people since then. He first worked as a handyman for a local farmer, but soon decided that he needed more action in his life. He joined the Royal Durem Guard but was banished for subordination. He had failed to cary out the order to burn a village to the ground. Having failed to find his callinghe wandered all around Gaia and narrowly avoide being enslaved by Vampires amongst other things! He came to work in Barton, and a month in his new job, he heard about the clan wars and decide to fight for the best cause, which (in his opinion) was the Earth Clan.
Appearance: Rupin is 6"3, has silver hair and amber eyes. The origins of these strange features are unknown. He has medium muscle tone and wears baggy trousers, with hand wraps to pummel any thing in his way. His feet are also in wraps to protect them when he kicks enemies. He weighs about 70kg and looks rather intimidating! He wears nothing on his torso as he gets hot easily!
Other: Rupin searches for his purpose in life but has not yet found it!
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:24 am
sorry about any spelling mistakes
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Acquisition rolled 20 100-sided dice:
67, 42, 82, 18, 99, 51, 95, 73, 65, 58, 91, 49, 33, 95, 32, 24, 90, 30, 1, 46
Total: 1141 (20-2000)
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:29 am
It's pretty good. If you could add a little more description to everything, I think it'd be good. I'm going to look over it again later, because I feel funky right now, and I think it's affecting my judgement.
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:38 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:40 am
No! Don't do something so drastic as that! Just elaborate a little more. And you don't have to keep muscle tone. It was just an example of more description. I'm going to have to check with Dark, because Earth is ahead by a bit.
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:41 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:49 am
Name: Rupin Linus
Gender: Male
Clan: Earth
Class: Grappler
Element:Rock
Personality: Though semmingly brutish and large on the outside, Rupin is a
very quiet, thoughtful and considerate man. He is always helping
those in need, and is loyal through and through to the cause he
chooses. He has a reputation for looseing his temper but hes
usually a nice guy! Hes very social and always up for a laugh, but takes his work seriously whatever it may be. Hes got quite a good outlook on life and always looks for the good things in any situation. He has the ability to cheer up anyone and although he lacks charm, hes very respectful.
History: Rupin was raised by his Uncle from the age of 3, because his
parents where executed for "treason against the crown". When Rupin was 18, his Uncle died of a strange illness, which wiped out the
whole village but ignored Rupin. Hes been wandering the land and working for different people since then. He first worked as a handyman for a local farmer, but soon decided that he needed more action in his life. He joined the Royal Durem Guard but was banished for subordination. He had failed to cary out the order to burn a village to the ground. Having failed to find his callinghe wandered all around Gaia and narrowly avoide being enslaved by Vampires amongst other things! He came to work in Barton, and a month in his new job, he heard about the clan wars and decide to fight for the best cause, which (in his opinion) was the Earth Clan.
Appearance: Rupin is 6"3, has silver hair and amber eyes. The origins of these strange features are unknown. He wears baggy trousers, with hand wraps to pummel any thing in his way. His feet are also in wraps to protect them when he kicks enemies. He weighs about 70kg and looks rather intimidating! He wears nothing on his torso as he gets hot easily! He has very pointy ears which look very unusual, but improve his hearing ten fold! He regulary trains so he is reasonbly fit and healthy.
Other: Rupin searches for his purpose in life but has not yet found it!
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:52 am
Kujasan Glad everyone else is having such luck! I'm getting pmed bios from iliterates..who are older than me! crying
I've declined three people so far, told them they need to change everything a lot if they ever want to be accepted into my clan..damnit. The only good bio that's been pmed to me so far is from Neko. gonk
Obsidian pmed me with a bio, but I see he changed over to Earth.. domokun He was good too.. cry We'll get better.
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:56 am
Rupin Name: Rupin Linus Gender: Male Clan: Earth Class: Grappler Element:Rock Personality: Though semmingly brutish and large on the outside, Rupin is a very quiet, thoughtful and considerate man. He is always helping those in need, and is loyal through and through to the cause he chooses. He has a reputation for looseing his temper but hes usually a nice guy! Hes very social and always up for a laugh, but takes his work seriously whatever it may be. Hes got quite a good outlook on life and always looks for the good things in any situation. He has the ability to cheer up anyone and although he lacks charm, hes very respectful. History: Rupin was raised by his Uncle from the age of 3, because his parents where executed for "treason against the crown". When Rupin was 18, his Uncle died of a strange illness, which wiped out the whole village but ignored Rupin. Hes been wandering the land and working for different people since then. He first worked as a handyman for a local farmer, but soon decided that he needed more action in his life. He joined the Royal Durem Guard but was banished for subordination. He had failed to cary out the order to burn a village to the ground. Having failed to find his callinghe wandered all around Gaia and narrowly avoide being enslaved by Vampires amongst other things! He came to work in Barton, and a month in his new job, he heard about the clan wars and decide to fight for the best cause, which (in his opinion) was the Earth Clan. Appearance: Rupin is 6"3, has silver hair and amber eyes. The origins of these strange features are unknown. He wears baggy trousers, with hand wraps to pummel any thing in his way. His feet are also in wraps to protect them when he kicks enemies. He weighs about 70kg and looks rather intimidating! He wears nothing on his torso as he gets hot easily! He has very pointy ears which look very unusual, but improve his hearing ten fold! He regulary trains so he is reasonbly fit and healthy. Other: Rupin searches for his purpose in life but has not yet found it! All right then. I'll go and put your bio up. Edit: Thanks Kairos! I didn't think of ruling factions. Rupin, if you could change it to something else, that would be great.
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:56 am
Though Kuja, you know if you flat out call people illiterates... not many people are going to want to join your clan too. >_>;
...and out of curiosity, is there a crown in gaia, or even a ruling faction?
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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:59 am
Rupin Name: Rupin Linus Gender: Male Clan: Earth Class: Grappler Element:Rock Personality: Though seemingly brutish and large on the outside, Rupin is a very quiet, thoughtful and considerate man. He is always helping those in need, and is loyal through and through to the cause he chooses. He has a reputation for losing his temper but he's usually a nice guy! He's very social and always up for a laugh, but takes his work seriously whatever it may be. He's got quite a good outlook on life and always looks for the good things in any situation. He has the ability to cheer up anyone and although he lacks charm, he's very respectful. History: Rupin was raised by his Uncle from the age of 3, because his parents where executed for "treason against the crown". When Rupin was 18, his Uncle died of a strange illness, which wiped out the whole village but ignored Rupin. He's been wandering the land and working for different people since then. He first worked as a handyman for a local farmer, but soon decided that he needed more action in his life. He joined the Royal Durem Guard but was expelled for insubordination. He had failed to carry out the order to burn a village to the ground. Having failed to find his calling, he wandered all around Gaia and narrowly avoided being enslaved, amongst other things. He came to work in Barton, and a month in his new job, he heard about the clan wars and decide to fight for the best cause, which (in his opinion) was the Earth Clan. Appearance: Rupin is 6"3, has silver hair and amber eyes. The origins of these strange features are unknown. He wears baggy trousers, with hand wraps to pummel any thing in his way. His feet are also in wraps to protect them when he kicks enemies. He weighs about 70kg and looks rather intimidating! He wears nothing on his torso as he gets hot easily! He has very pointy ears, which look very unusual, but greatly improve his hearing. He regulary trains, so he is reasonbly fit and healthy. Other: Rupin searches for his purpose in life but has not yet found it. Took the liberty of cleaning it up a bit...
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