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 Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 2:19 pm
( stare God Ae your such a critic))
"Shut it guy that never tells us anything."Kaiya said and crossed her arms.
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 2:23 pm
[Critic? Man you're so lucky my creative persona is out right now. He'd so b***h about all of this. Besides, getting feedback and improving is what roleplaying's about. Yes, it's about fun, but it's also important to improve your writing. That way you get better as time goes by]
"Right right," the man spoke, shaking his head and letting the topic drop. He didn't mind being loathed by anyone in the group, but the main fact of the matter was that he didn't reveal anything that they didn't ask about. Some topics he was more roundabout than others but he would never not give them an answer.
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 2:28 pm
(I know this XD and I love ya for it but it's like.......U get it already leave me the*goes hiden*alone!!!)
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 2:32 pm
[I keep saying it because it looks as though you make no effort to improve. I'll stop I guess.]
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~when~the~music~fades~ Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 2:33 pm
((You say you get it but you don't show it.
It's really as simple as reading over the post before pressing "submit" and catching the easy spelling mistakes. Do you realise how much you could improve by slowing down just a bit?
And then when you're told something's wrong, try to remember for future reference...))
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 2:51 pm
After a silence had settled once more, Mickey piped up, saying, "I'm ready to sleep now." She was more or less speaking to Larissa and Nariko, but since nobody else was talking she could have been adressing anyone.
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~when~the~music~fades~ Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:22 pm
[who votes to skip to morning?]
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:25 pm
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~when~the~music~fades~ Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:27 pm
[okay so that's 5 for skipping... after I put on some socks]
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:30 pm
((Wait, what? xD
And... I think it'd be funny if some people woke up in... awkward positions?
*not saying anymore* xD))
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~when~the~music~fades~ Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:32 pm
[lmao post it if you want. I'm still looking for socks... :3]
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:35 pm
((I'll give you socks? I have a bunch heart
And I can't really post it xD
It was more like a suggestion? X3))
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~when~the~music~fades~ Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:37 pm
[lmao Hari in the middle of all the girls? xD]
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:42 pm
((That'd get Claw ticked XDD ))
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Mister Doctor Professor Crew
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~when~the~music~fades~ Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:49 pm
((And most if not all of the girls? xDD))
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