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 Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:32 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:34 pm
You're still mixing powers and classes from seperate clans. I believe that is what prompted darkfyre to point you to the rules post.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:36 pm
Lilthisia speaks the truth. Hear her! mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:36 pm
ooohhhh......
dam, im crap!!!!
Ill definetley get it right next time, i promise!!!!!!
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:44 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:54 pm
Name: Rupin Linus
Gender: Male
Clan: Earth
Class: Grappler
Element: Rock
Personality: Though semmingly brutish and large on the outside, Rupin is a
very quiet, thoughtful and considerate man. He is always helping
those in need, and is loyal through and through to the cause he
chooses. He has a reputation for looseing his temper but hes
usually a nice guy!
History: Rupin was raised by his Uncle from the age of 3, because his
parents where executed for "treason against the crown". When Rupin was 18, his Uncle died of a strange illness, which wiped out
the
whole village but ignored Rupin. Hes been wandering the land and working for different people since then.
Appearance: Rupin is 6"3, has silver hair and amber eyes. The origins of these strange features are unknown.
Other: Rupin searches for his purpose in life but has not yet found it!
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 1:59 pm
Would it be alright if I did a little RPing in the clanless thread and then Lilthisia can use that as an indicator of my RP style since she would like to see an example before I join the Sky Clan.
((I have a meeting to go to. I will be back this evening))
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 2:01 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 2:04 pm
Suoh Mizu: Sure, that's what the Clanless RP thread is for!
Rupin: Patience is a virtue you'd do best to learn, young grasshopper.
Your profile is better than the last version, yes. You've used a correct combination of Clan and Class this time...
Darkfyre is going to sleep now and will no longer be responding this fine evening. G'night everyone!
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 2:13 pm
Rupin Name: Rupin Linus Gender: Male Clan: Earth Class: Grappler Element: Rock Personality: Though semmingly brutish and large on the outside, Rupin is a very quiet, thoughtful and considerate man. He is always helping those in need, and is loyal through and through to the cause he chooses. He has a reputation for looseing his temper but hes usually a nice guy! History: Rupin was raised by his Uncle from the age of 3, because his parents where executed for "treason against the crown". When Rupin was 18, his Uncle died of a strange illness, which wiped out the whole village but ignored Rupin. Hes been wandering the land and working for different people since then. Appearance: Rupin is 6"3, has silver hair and amber eyes. The origins of these strange features are unknown. Other: Rupin searches for his purpose in life but has not yet found it! Rupin! Now that you have changed to Earth (yay!) You are under my jurisdiction. I only found a couple of things wrong. Head A: The history is good, but not great yet. A little detail would chang a lot. B: Appearance! More detail. Clothing, Shoes, muscle tone, weight, whatever you want, but I need more. The rest is fine, but if you want to change the personality a bit, that might help. I think you could turn out pretty good if you try a little harder! Just think over these real quick.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 2:24 pm
A clanless rp thread... what a good idea! biggrin
Suoh Mizu, go ahead and do something in there. Your bio is looking good, adheres the rules and all that. Sorry if I'm not on reliably for today and tommorow... relatives getting married is a large time sink. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 2:53 pm
Name: Jeigan Crous
Gender: Male
Clan: Earth
Class: Grappler
Element: Spark
Personality: A hardy person with a temper, Jeigan likes his ale and gets into many a bar fight. He loves money, valuables, and grinding his knuckles into someone's face when they anger him. Although a good-natured person at heart, Jeigan acts gruff and will always give people a hard time about anything related to money. He never passes up the oppertunity to a free drink as his liver is strong as an ox.
History: Jeigan was a farmer for several years, and was then drafted into the military as he came into the age of his manhood. He fought there for many years, and retired after a semi-recent war. Now at the age of 39, Jeigan is still as strong as he ever was with a flair for combat.
Appearance: Jeigan is a short stocky man about 5'7", weighing in at about 260 lbs. He has a long nasty-looking beard to match his dirty blonde hair that cascaded down to his shoulders, although he tighs it back. Jeigan can be seen carrying a large bag, most likely his possesions. It looks to others as if he trains himself often because of his large muscular build, but he really only does about once a month. He wears loose, brown pants with a leather belt, large black boots that seem very worn and used. Jeigan wears a small white shirt under his large brown coat that isn't worn very often; he likes to try and intimidate others with his muscles. A small red cloth is tied around his arms, portraying his clan's symbol.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 3:38 pm
Name: Drittz Gender: Male Clan: Earth Class: Grappler Element: Rock Personality: Drittz can be a very quiet person and is a perfectionist. He is never indifferent on anything.And he does not fear death. Training is the main focus of Drittz and he takes it very seriously. Not much can make him mad either, he has learned to divert his anger to more constructive outlets. But once he does get mad it is not something you want to see. Fits of rage are not uncommon in a situation such as this for Drittz. Although in combat, he does not let this rage overcome him. He knows the importance of confidence and focus in combat. History: Drittz was raised in a martial arts academy from the time he was 3 after his parents died. This of course left him very independent and he began training everyday for hours at a time after reaching the age of 7. At 13 his sensai died and Drittz was left with all of his sensai's earthly possessions. Among these was a training manual to the elemental power of rock. Which Drittz studied and perfected on his own. Drittz was 18 when he left the academy. Since leaving the academy, he has started training more than ever to make his muscles as close to real rocks as he can. The purpose of this is so that he doesn't have to use his elemental power more than absolutely necessary. It is not uncommon for Drittz to lift small trees and boulders. He has taken to staying in quiet places to focus on his training. Along with his brute strength and skill in martial arts, he makes a very formidable opponent. And definately not one you would want to take on single handedly. Appearance: Drittz is fairly tall at 5 feet 10 inches and has a medium brown colored skin. He is muscular and is very defined. He is often seen in black clothing. He always has on sunglasses that once belonged to his father.His hair is kept trimmed and he has no facial hair. 
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 3:46 pm
ObsidianSnake: If you could elaborate a teensy bit more on the appearance by putting in type of clothing, I'd probably accept you. I like the rest, though.
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