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 Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 1:14 am
=a bit depressing but I like it.
It's not finnished yet and I will finnish it, I just have to find some time.
My wrists are slit,
My soul runs free,
As the blood mingles with the water,
People will finally see me.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 6:22 am
I've got my lunch, I've got a snack,
I've got my books in my backpack.
I have an apple all shined up,
I have my thermos as a cup,
I'm waiting here for the bus,
With my shirt that screams "robust."
I've got my socks and shoes on,
But Maybe I've forgotten something.
Time for explanatory rants,
It seems that I've forgot my pants.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 3:10 pm
rofl ha ha that was great......the sad thing is that it's actually happened to some people
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 8:03 pm
A little slice, that's al I'll get,
I need to lose some pounds.
But I may get, an extra piece,
On my next way round.
The buffet is better than my home.
"All you can eat" the sign says,
I take the challenge.
When it's all gone, I sue for false advertising.
Now I go to McDonalds.
I order the Diet Coke and small salad.
Why am I 800 pounds?
I blame Mickey D's.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:16 pm
It's the wheel in the light of a nightmare.
It's a power in the sky but I don't care,
What's got to me is what I see
And I don't know which way to follow...
Which way is left and right?
My sin has clouded my sight!
We as sheep have gone astray,
I wish there was another way...
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 12:46 pm
The feeling of sadness,
of great despair,
strangers feel the pain,
you don't know they care.
You can't see the tears,
that run so far down,
so you sit there instead,
bearing your bloody crown.
Never fearless,
if that a coward,
you know it's true,
you've been overpowered.
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:16 am
My spotlight is broken,
My joke has been spoken,
I'm washed up, washed through, washed out.
I ain't the life of the party,
No matches and farting,
My show biz is no longer here.
I don't get why everybody is stealing my thunder.
Why are they, all underneath, trying to pull me under?
I don't care.
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Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 6:33 pm
gwinivere that was a great poem!
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 3:24 am
I just realized that most of my poems suck! razz
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 4:06 pm
Whatever Jehosaphat your poems are.....entertaining~ way better than any of my work.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 5:47 am
Well, since guilds have been down I've found a new inspiration...get ready for some good stuff...
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 12:30 pm
Sorrow
I need to see,
What it is like to be.
With emotions to borrow,
Of which one is sorrow.
I need to hear,
What it is like to fear.
I need to feel,
What it is like to be real.
I need to touch,
What I love so much.
I need to borrow,
This emotion called sorrow.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 1:00 pm
lonley_gurl15, I'm not really fond of rhyming, but it was pulled off okay. You should post more work biggrin I like it!
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 7:14 pm
I'm sitting here, waiting for oppurtunity to knock.
It's coming, but I can't wait...
I will take initiative, and find a way to fly,
And I'll be waiting right here when you get back.
I can only say,
That my God is true.
I can only say,
That I love you.
Here I stand waiting, a rock in the ocean,
The tension is mounting, the coming storm is warning me.
Change can only make me stronger, I'm waiting her just for you.
What else can I say?
I can only really say what's true.
I can only say that I love you.
-Heh heh, a little segment form a song I got coming...You likey?
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:06 pm
I liked it...at first I was all "this isn't making sense, nothing flows toghether, there's not enough imagry, but then I read "song" and it made sense. yeppie
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