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 Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:14 pm
christmas presents i actually agree with shaking and staring and trying to peek but 'coming soon' forums are for surprises! heh anyway at least i know someone likes the pics so far. i'm not done at all yet. i need to find other for the other stuff. mrgreen and in a personal thread rp there's a new guy joining "The Story Writer' rp. i'm excited. mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 9:09 pm
nice, and I'm very sorry, I shouldn't have looked at the titles, just hit the back key...really sorry, and I like the christmas present thing, because it is just so tempting!
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:09 pm
YES! Tempting it is! My parents came up with a secret code last year, so nobody knew what presents they got (And in a house where there are 5 other kids, plus presents for cousins and other family members, it would be too hard to peak in at all of them)
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 2:23 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:48 pm
I have several Different roleplays pending beginning and already in progress, I'll attempt to keep up with everything but honestly..I do have Obligations off of Gaia and they come first. So if i haven't posted in a while It's because i'm Busy, Sorry if that inconveniances anyone..qany roleplay that i won't be in for a while i'll write myself out of the Current flow and bring myself back in later.
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:51 pm
ok! there's no problem with that! i too have things to do also. mrgreen and i'm so glad you joined!
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:53 pm
I'm a member possibly but i won't begin anything till later on tonight..usually i'm up all morning writing stuff, but next week i go back to work so my activity will drop.
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:55 pm
its alright. but it's cool that you go on at least! mrgreen (by the way your last post in 'The Story Writer' rp was really good. i probably couldn't top it. sweatdrop )
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:57 pm
Magical_Dreams its alright. but it's cool that you go on at least! mrgreen (by the way your last post in 'The Story Writer' rp was really good. i probably couldn't top it. sweatdrop ) ((I used to be capable of writing much better, but now i'm just..enh ))
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:02 pm
mrgreen eek How much better could you get?!?!?! eek mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:05 pm
For the extreme curiousity of what i'm talking to him about, check this out: Quote: Ebony claws dug deep into Albino flesh as Jaron stretched for the first time, sending droplets of crimson to splatter on the cold hard ground.Muscled forearms tensed, chaining to his biceps and further the rest of his upper body, forcing the veins to press out, his Back arched with a sickening crack followed by a loud scream, ripped from thin lips, only to be sharpened in pitch after cutting past pearly white fangs.Shimmering Jade eyes shined as the thin white lids did little to hide their presence, open or closed, seeking out life around him.
Though he could see no one in his immediate area, He could smell a similar textured liquid as the one dripping from his slowly healing .The was quite a distance off. As he began moving off in that direction a faint whisper berated his ears, quickly Jaron turned around searching for the culprit, though all he could see was a Ebony shaft stuck into the ground, the head adorned with a magnificent onyx blade. This weapon must have been left for him, by the same individual that created him. As Jarons still blood covered palm reached for the hilt, almost a scream ripped through his ears, though no words could be made out. Quickly covering his ears he fell to the ground, the sheilds his hands made did nothing to squash the sound, simply intensify it, for in that moment Jaron new that it was in his head. Zalpher looked down upon the man-beast that lay sparwled before him, though he didn't actually see the man as others would, visually, he sensed the presences and shape of things around him. How he wished he could spit at the beast for trying to grasp him with blood covered hands, for trying to Taint his being with such filthy blood, If it had not been for the sheer strength he could feel radiating from the beast, the feel of a worthy weilder, Zalpher would have simply whispered the man into insanity as the weakest of his repetoir of attacks. Zalpher sighed to himself, but of course the blade that was he made no sound, Without a weilder he was alone to contemplate his existance..but without a strong weilder he could end up a lost relic in some dank hole deep in the earth..The man before him, already standing against the intense mental pain that Zalpher was bombarding him with, Would not fial him, Zalpher could feel that. So reluctantly Zalpher stepped out from the blade, sending his concious to the man shutting of the scream and simply taking up a small part of the mans brain that would permanetly link them. With the connection established Zalpher spoke telepathically to the now enraged Dhampir.'Dear boy, what are you looking murderous for? you should expect to be yelled at when you try to touch treasure with filthy blood covered hands. Clean them and maybe, if you possess the strength to break the barrier around me of course, i'll let you touch me, i'll even serve you in whatever purpose it is you desire. I am a Blade created for pain and killing, though of who is completely up to my weilder. So, beast, Step forward and see if you can claim me.' Jaron was searching the trees around him for any sign of life, he knew that the scream was in his brain but he couldn't locate who was causing it until finally it ceased, replaced with an arrogant voice talking down to him, This infurirated Jaron, The whole cause had been this Halbered slammed into the earth before him? He'd break it, destroy it, for messing with his brain.
Reaching out, Jaron pressed his hand through the barrier towards the Halbered, as his finger tips sought through the skin was flayed from each digit all the way up his forearm as he pressed on through the agony to finally grasp the shaft of the great blade, as his hand met he felt exponetially stronger, the Physical contact with the blade he came to realise as Zalpher was complimentary to him, they were like minded beings and therefore their power stacked instead of drawing away from one another. All thoughts of destroying the weapon vanished, their understanding complete with the simplest of touches. Jarons hands healed as the Blade accepted him, though the barrier of decay was still very much ringing the blade, it was a weapon to sap the strength of foes, to burn away armor and flesh alike to bring, what turned out to be cursed mithril blade down into the exposed bone and organs of the prey.
Jaron turned from the place of his birth, the point he came into existance, Zalpher attached to his back, Taking off towards the point where he could now not only smell blood but feel the Conflict a property of Zalpher that could benefit him greatly, He could feel the blades probing thoughts but no words were spoken, he was still being tested it seemed.
Stop just short of the tree line Jaron looked out, he could see multiple oozes slithering across the ground, along with a girl and a man, Though he couldn't visually see another person he sensed a smaller statured girl. None of them seemed feeble to Jaron, but none of them caused any real worry for him Either. Reamining within the treeline he watched, Contemplating which would serve him best, helping the oozes and killing the two that fought them and perhaps the third hidden party, or helping the the two and destroying the oozes. and that was his first and only post!
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:09 pm
Grammatical Errors and re use of words like 'Though' over and over.
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:12 pm
As well that took just under an hour to write, usually i could do something like that in 20 minutes.
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 8:03 pm
SERIOUSLY 20 minutes? it takes me that long to think of something to say! you going to be an author or something?
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:08 pm
WOW. That was one nice post. Left a strange mental picture in my mind as well.
Strangly it reminded me of my brother's creepy songs.
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