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 Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2014 11:11 pm
Amaroq K Don't post quite yet. I'd rather wait until Dark has had the chance to see my pm and the changes I made to my last post. I didn't have it worded right and so she interpreted different than how it was meant to be interpreted. I saw that it could be confusing since I didn't specify who the comment was directed towards. That's understandable, but next time please be sure to be clear with your posts to avoid confusion in the future; if this happens again, just treat it like golf, and "play where the ball lies" (leave your post as is--in regards to character reactions, and go with the flow; having to edit and re-edit can get tedious). Dark is still being redirected to that false Adobe page whenever she logs on to Gaia, so it may be a while before she actually gets your PM. I'll pass the message, and your post revision, along to her.
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:24 am
Thanks and I'll do my best to do that. I'll try not to post when I'm so tired. It seems to be my lot right now to not get more than three-five hours a day now. Though, I realize it is partially my fault and I'm working on fixing the things I did wrong on those previous nights. Shouldn't happen as often.
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 12:41 pm
Amaroq K Thanks and I'll do my best to do that. I'll try not to post when I'm so tired. It seems to be my lot right now to not get more than three-five hours a day now. Though, I realize it is partially my fault and I'm working on fixing the things I did wrong on those previous nights. Shouldn't happen as often. Yeah, when that happens to me I just let my fellow players know that I did read their posts, but I'm too tired to reply; I'd have a post up when I'm better rested. Try to get more sleep and not worry about the RPG. Ensuring you're well-rested is more important in real life than clear RPG posts. Dark hasn't responded to the messaging regarding your revision, but I'm sure she will soon. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:05 pm
Thornwick That's understandable, but next time please be sure to be clear with your posts to avoid confusion in the future; if this happens again, just treat it like golf, and "play where the ball lies" (leave your post as is--in regards to character reactions, and go with the flow; having to edit and re-edit can get tedious). Dark is still being redirected to that false Adobe page whenever she logs on to Gaia, so it may be a while before she actually gets your PM. I'll pass the message, and your post revision, along to her. Remember that bottle of wine in the house of elves who considered themselves too pure to have anything other than tea and water available? *poke* *poke* *nudge* *nudge* whee
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:06 pm
Darkerdemons Thornwick That's understandable, but next time please be sure to be clear with your posts to avoid confusion in the future; if this happens again, just treat it like golf, and "play where the ball lies" (leave your post as is--in regards to character reactions, and go with the flow; having to edit and re-edit can get tedious). Dark is still being redirected to that false Adobe page whenever she logs on to Gaia, so it may be a while before she actually gets your PM. I'll pass the message, and your post revision, along to her. Remember that bottle of wine in the house of elves who considered themselves too pure to have anything other than tea and water available? *poke* *poke* *nudge* *nudge* whee Heh, that skimming on my part. X__x;
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 6:06 pm
Thornwick Darkerdemons Thornwick That's understandable, but next time please be sure to be clear with your posts to avoid confusion in the future; if this happens again, just treat it like golf, and "play where the ball lies" (leave your post as is--in regards to character reactions, and go with the flow; having to edit and re-edit can get tedious). Dark is still being redirected to that false Adobe page whenever she logs on to Gaia, so it may be a while before she actually gets your PM. I'll pass the message, and your post revision, along to her. Remember that bottle of wine in the house of elves who considered themselves too pure to have anything other than tea and water available? *poke* *poke* *nudge* *nudge* whee Heh, that skimming on my part. X__x; *pats* Happens to the best of us. cool Great for amusement further down the road though. razz
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 6:27 pm
Darkerdemons Thornwick Darkerdemons Thornwick That's understandable, but next time please be sure to be clear with your posts to avoid confusion in the future; if this happens again, just treat it like golf, and "play where the ball lies" (leave your post as is--in regards to character reactions, and go with the flow; having to edit and re-edit can get tedious). Dark is still being redirected to that false Adobe page whenever she logs on to Gaia, so it may be a while before she actually gets your PM. I'll pass the message, and your post revision, along to her. Remember that bottle of wine in the house of elves who considered themselves too pure to have anything other than tea and water available? *poke* *poke* *nudge* *nudge* whee Heh, that skimming on my part. X__x; *pats* Happens to the best of us. cool Great for amusement further down the road though. razz To me more than others, lol--which is why I have to remind myself to read the posts at least three or four times before coming up with a post. Lots of amusement, though. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 7:51 pm
Now, that the matter of your last posts (both you, Amaroq, and Dark's) has been squared away, I'll be cleaning up my rough-draft and preparing it for submission. Just a heads-up, I'll be initiating another time-skip and summary soon to push the story-line further.
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 8:52 pm
Looking forward to reading the post. heart
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 8:56 pm
Darkerdemons Looking forward to reading the post. heart Trying to get it done as quickly as possible. Oh! And I just wanted to clarify, the time-skip and summarization will happen soonish, but not in my next post.
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2014 3:52 am
I've decided to hold off on posting and wait until the scene is concluded, since Alex posed a question to Bloody; I don't want to interrupt the flow when none of my characters are interacting with any of yours (Amaroq and Dark) at the moment. I'll see if I can squeeze in a post this weekend, but I'm not counting on it too much; in that case, posts will appear throughout next week.
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2014 12:29 pm
The storm's passed and power and water remain steady, so the RPG can get moving again. Dark, could you lift the temporary hiatus when you've got the time? Thank you~ heart As for my post: I've been working on a rough draft, but I'm not sure if I can get it out today.
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 1:52 pm
Hey guys, Sorry for the lack of posts on my end; it's been a super busy week. I'll try to get a post up as soon as I can.
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 10:51 pm
No problem Gen. I had a really busy weekend and wouldn't have noticed it until just now. xD
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:36 pm
Oooh! Things are getting heated. o.o *rubs hands together in anticipation* ^.^ It's nice to see Bloody taking care of those under her - making sure they're running out with her. The post is great! The last sentence seems a little out of place though. If I remember correctly, Constantine has the control for opening the zeppelin. Kind of makes me wonder how Bloody got in the zeppelin. The other detail is the zeppelin is on the other side of the house and some distance into the field - will double check this with previous posts. Zedd ran out the back door, so if Bloody ran out in the same direction, the sentence seems to imply she ran out of the back door, around the large house, spanned the distance between the house and the zeppelin, got the zeppelin to open, and entered the zeppelin in a very short period of time. This is reminiscent of speed hacking (see definitions in sticky), as anything could happen between the time Bloody runs out of the house, around the house, and across the field. Do you think you could alter the post to allow time for events to occur after Bloody starts running towards the zeppelin? As I mentioned, the rest of the post is fine - it's just the last sentence really. ^^; I was thinking about editing my post to have Alex run towards the carriage (closer to the house) and he could offer Bloody a weapon. There is still the problem of running around the house though - and why would a rental carriage have weapons stored in it since Alex brought Zedd's, Trikks', and his luggage (including bokken) into the house. xd o.o Out of curiosity, what all did Bloody have in the backpack she carried from the zeppelin on page 1?
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