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 Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:52 pm
I don't know if I'm allowed to post here, but I thought it would be a good place for it to go. Here's my poem. It's dedicated to a classmate of mine named Thomas.
Shadowed Truths
You tell me you'll always be a nobody
As the truths are slowly unfurled
Remember you'll always be a somebody
As long as you're in my world
You tell me you didn't deserve a chance
You're so hopelessly negative
If you had even asked her to dance
It wouldn't have had to end like this
You tell me that this is it; the end
Where did your old self go?
I thought you were my best friend
And yet you let it all go
You only think that you have it bad
Think about someone else for a change
Talking about your pain makes me mad
Isn't Destiny strange?
You're always stuck in your realm of the past
About when and how you suffered
When you should change your future: make it last
Leave your past under cover
Now think of your shadows truth
It feels like a lot of pain
It's not like the pain of a lost tooth
Something you won't feel again.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:13 pm
You wrote this about me? Gee... thanks.
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 12:05 pm
Since when was your name Thomas?
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 2:03 pm
xXSilenced EchoesXx Since when was your name Thomas? I just assumed, after all if I did ask her things would be different. And it seems like I bother you whenever I talk about it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 2:48 pm
You think that I would post something about you in a guild with you?
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 2:49 pm
xXSilenced EchoesXx You think that I would post something about you in a guild with you? Who knows? Maybe you would, this isn't an argument...
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 2:53 pm
You're right, this isn't an argument. Also, I probably wouldn't. I don't exactly write positive poems.
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:04 pm
xXSilenced EchoesXx You're right, this isn't an argument. Also, I probably wouldn't. I don't exactly write positive poems. As you know, My life isn't exactly positive... Nor is it completely negative.
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:06 pm
Can't come with a comeback, as I don't think about writing poems about you.
Weird, huh?
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:12 pm
xXSilenced EchoesXx Can't come with a comeback, as I don't think about writing poems about you. Weird, huh? Who said you think? Nah I'm kidding, glad this is over...
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:27 pm
You're allowed to read any of the poems I have, none of them are about you. razz
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:08 pm
xXSilenced EchoesXx You're allowed to read any of the poems I have, none of them are about you. razz I don't really care if they are...
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:21 am
Here's a new poem, it's written for one of my classmates. It's fairly short, however.
[n]Evermore
She's like one red rose
xxxxxxxxxout of a dozen white
She's one of a kind
xxxxxxxxxand I almost had a chance at her
No one was loved more
xxxxxxxxxno one could make me happier
No one could hurt me more
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:19 am
xXSilenced EchoesXx Here's a new poem, it's written for one of my classmates. It's fairly short, however.[n]EvermoreShe's like one red rose
xxxxxxxxxout of a dozen white
She's one of a kind
xxxxxxxxxand I almost had a chance at her
No one was loved more
xxxxxxxxxno one could make me happier
No one could hurt me more
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:25 am
No, Alpha asked me to write this for him.
The only reason they all sound similar is because I completely understand the position these people were in, and I can relate, which makes it easier to write these poems. I can't write poems about how happy I am. It just doesn't work that way for me.
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