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 Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:39 pm
I was reading Tsuki's poems and I'm like Ddddaaaammmmmnnnnn so I thought for a minute and realized I feel like writing so here I am =3 Not that good but I try >.<
Yours smiles and hugs are no longer needed
Your services as a friend have been deleted
Like a computer crashing forever into eternal slumber
Your existence will fade in time and I'm still counting
You say it won't happen, that I'll come back
But inside you know, that your nothing but trash
Trash is too good for a nothing like you
Be glad for the pain I haven't striked with.
Did you know... How I felt?
The moment you kissed her, I broke apart.
I screamed, yelled, and cried out loud
Why couldn't you love me too?
I promised you... That I'd stay by your side
So I'll be there physically, not anything emotional or so.
When you laugh, I'll pretend to smile, even though I'm mad
When you cry, I'll comfort you, even though I'm laughing like a maniac inside
Even though I type this, I still cry
The thought of doing this to you hurts too much
So my decision finally made clear
I should end all ties with you, erasing you from my mind and memories alike
Deleting complete, there seems to be nothing new
I woke up this morning and went to school
This girl came up to me and said hi
The automanic reply was, "Your not worth my time"
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:51 pm
Woah.. that was awesome! 9/10 Only because there is always room for improvement and prefection is a made up ideal of man (though that is not here nor there soo..) I really liked the theme of computer processing! very cool! heart heart heart heart heart heart
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Cascading Black Vice Captain
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Mistress Drakkard Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 8:11 pm
Bloody Valetine
The taste of metal on my lips
The color of red leaking from my wrists
The salty water streaming down my face
The silent screams inside my head
It tells you something, does it not?
The pain I'm fighting, it's a little too much
I tried to hide, but it drove me insane
So I'm in my room, waiting for it to end
I hear banging but I'm too tired
Can't move a limb, but can't stop crying
I hear voices but does it matter?
My life is finally finishing it's cycle.
My heart fluttered when I saw her face
I smiled a little and for a moment went still
Behind her was the love of her life
My smile faded and so did my heart
I tried to move away but she brought me closer
I tried to scream let go but then she whispered
My face grew redder than my wrists
My heartbeat fastened the moment she said
"Between us is nothing, we're just friends
I never even loved her to begin with
Please understand love, all I want is you
You as my valentine and hopefully something more."
I tried to speak but it was too late
I grew cold and couldn't breathe
My vision dulled, my heartbeat stopped
The last I felt, was her sweet kiss
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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:02 pm
Ooo! Tsuki likes this one as well! I wrote a bloodie valentine poem once, but yours is so much better
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 4:20 pm
Tsuki_Kaiji_Kun Ooo! Tsuki likes this one as well! I wrote a bloodie valentine poem once, but yours is so much better I wanna hear!!! >.<
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 7:44 pm
My Lover
The day grows cold, the sun slowly sets
The rain is ending, and so is my life
I tried to stop it, but all I could do
Is sit there and wait, til the pain numbs it all
Am I still breathing? I can't tell
Am I still crying? The rain hid it too
Just like the beat of my heart, time is slowing
I'm tired of waiting, running, and screaming
Why did I scream? It's pretty funny.
I witnessed a murdering scene, it was my lover
Guess she was jealous or he figured out
But my Fiance was laying on the floor
I was happy at first but then something clicked
If they found her, then she will be killed
So I told her to run but she wouldn't leave me
The moment I pushed her a way, bullets started booming
Can you guess the rest? I bet you can
The only person I screamed for was her
They tried to comfort me, but should I care?
I lost everything in the world, I lost her
So I ran out the house and my sickness took over
I ran out of breathe and I fell over
Now I'm here, on the ground
Tired of suffering this pathetic existence of mine
My hate grew when I saw my mother
She looked at me with disgust and pulled a gun out
I was scared at first but then I smiled
Cause at last I could be with her
My light
My angel
My world
My lover
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Mistress Drakkard Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:53 pm
When I find it sure!
Love the poem!!
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:07 pm
Wow Lizzy...You make me proud to call you little sister heart My favorite is Bloody Valentine...that is true perfection biggrin
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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:46 pm
Tsuki_Kaiji_Kun When I find it sure! Love the poem!! Yay! =D
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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:47 pm
Fiyori_Takeshi Wow Lizzy...You make me proud to call you little sister heart My favorite is Bloody Valentine...that is true perfection biggrin Thankies Tania =3
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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:22 pm
Unfair
I hate the way you attract attention
And I'm always in the dark
You steal everyone's affection
And still, I'm alone
I find someone to love
And they turn to you
I find a friend to trust
And again, it's broken by you
You toy around with their emotions
You have no heart, no life at all
I wish... I was more like you
Able to make people love me, then break em' apart
I want to destroy them all
The feeling's that bring me pain
Can you really take them away?
Can you take away my suffering?
So until then, I'll follow your orders
I'll bow down to my new master
Make my darkness grow, make me feel no pain
Make all these feelings of love go away
You can do that, I know you can
If you wanted, you could control the world
But time will tell, if my transformation will become true
Cause right now, I'm a pathetic loser in love.
Does anyone know who I'm writing to?
Does anyone even care?
And to the person I'm writing to...
"You make everything so unfair...."
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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:00 pm
Aww this is about me heart It's beautiful Lizzy and I'm more then flattered biggrin Of course I'm still confused...who besides Analy that you like or used to like that likes me now or used to like me? stare I don't even talk to your friends either...
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:45 pm
Babez poems <3
Joined me in family
At the beginning it rocked
Can’t believe it though
Kinda liked you as something more
I may love Analy but I love you too
Everything’s perfect when it’s just me and you =3
Kisa’s rather cute but Jackie’s alot better
Incest doesn’t bother when it’s us lovers
Special since the start, no one able to tear us apart
Always here to the end, no matter anyone says
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:48 pm
Awwww, thanks baby <3! Love you!
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Mistress Drakkard Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:09 am
I haven't wrote a poem in soo long, hope I don't suck at it >.<;
It's been so long since I wrote a poem
This one isn't as dark as the others
It's has some angst but not death
So I still hope this one captures your gaze
April third, I gave up hope
She wanted everyone but me, just to let you know
My first love never loved me back
That completely ruined me, it tore me apart
But before that, I've been talking to a girl
We talked twenty four seven, all day and all night
Met her through text, she soon became my friend
I payed no mind and she became something more
When I noticed this, I was shocked
Thought the only person was Analy, can't believe I was wrong
Didn't know how to treat her, didn't know what to say
But it went along normally just like every other day
I always tried to make her happy
Always tried to make her laugh
Even when she talked about her crush
I comforted her hiding my pain
I never letted her know
Never said a thing
Never really dropped hints
Until I asked her to be mine
She said yes, my hope grew
Next day, I asked if she wanted a girl
April third we started going out
I lost hope for my first love, not my second one at that
Been more than 2 months
Never been so much better
Even though life's still ******** up
I know we have each other <3
Yup... That's the end, thinking of posting another poem when I have the time and it's not 3 in the morning sweatdrop
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